Sword Hero: Chronicles of Wind and Clouds

Author You directly arrange Lingxi to Wu Haogou. Be direct. My day. Isn't it disgusting? Damn it. Got a hand around the waist and threatened This chapter comes again? Giving away a girl, right? If you want to be popular, you can directly arrange for cuckolding. Must be fire.

The author's poetry skills are quite good! Good review! ! 🌹

After watching half of it, I couldn't help but feel unhappy. To be honest, the biggest problem with this novel is the rhythm. The rhythm problem causes the characters to be fragmented and unable to stand up. Although a lot of words are used to describe the characters' behavioral reasons and psychological descriptions, it can only make people feel dry. I wrote four to five hundred chapters when I was 9 or 10 years old. Even if the pace picked up later, it wouldn't be much faster. Another very important point is that the author likes to suppress first, then increase, and then suppress again. When emotions break out, he also uses a set of realms to suppress the protagonist's mentality. As a reader, I am really depressed by this. Especially the plot of the Qingyun Sect 5 years after I just saw it, it should be like in One Piece, after Luffy has practiced for two years, he first has fun with Fish-Man Island and the Shichibukai, and then moves on to the difficult Yonko. You might as well go directly to the Heroes and Saints. Not to mention the creation of female characters, especially the heroine's several submissive plots, which I can't handle in Pure Love God of War. It's already 2023, and this plot was written 21 years ago. Why is it still doing this kind of thing? It's not a pornographic novel. There are many other minor problems, such as the issue of the alliance between the eight major sects. Luo Yun Sect directly threatens Qingyun. Is he so overbearing and afraid that the sects below him will directly betray other sects? Jianghu is not about fighting and killing, it is about human relationships. The combat power system is also about to be broken by the protagonist. It is as outrageous for a newbie to directly approach the hero as a first-time cultivator to build a foundation and directly reach the peak of Yuanying. In Swordsman Storm, I haven't seen where the protagonist Xia is, only the sword. Some of the author's other settings are quite innovative, such as the martial arts thought of realm setting and the concept of intentional realm flow, which are quite interesting, and I came here for this. But the further the description goes, the more it relies on various adventures, because all kinds of adventures and even a revolving door of breakthroughs are needed to bring the martial arts back to the full circle. Once or twice is enough, but too many times is really numbing. But this problem is not as big as the two mentioned at the beginning. I was really disturbed by the plot and couldn't sleep, I couldn't help but feel unhappy. To be honest, it is obvious that the author has many shortcomings in the rhythm of the plot, grasp of the climax, and writing style. Although Chi Xin Xun Tian is a fairy tale, it has much more martial arts flavor than yours. From the ugliness of the chapter, it can be seen that the author's book is not doing well, but it can only be said that there is a reason. Don't be like Bethesda's Starry Sky, writing a book with the concepts of 10 years ago. Some supporting characters will be released as soon as possible, and some plots will be skipped as soon as possible. Because of the previous plot, I am no longer optimistic about this book. I will see you in the next book.

It's probably the best book among recent martial arts books. The logic is rigorous, not a noob, the progress is neither fast nor slow, and the story is told eloquently. The characters are clearly created, and there is no facial expression at all. It has all the brains it should have. It is not like some novels that use the old cliché of brainless slaps in the face to pretend to be magical. The country hates the family feud, but the love between children lasts forever. The shop is quite big in every aspect. Worth the wait. Good book, worth reading. By the way, the author is also amazing at being able to pick up after being disconnected for so long.

In fact, martial arts and fantasy have the same origin. When I came to the martial arts circle, I couldn't stand the fantasy fantasy, which involves destroying the world and upgrading, and there were too few descriptions of character backgrounds and story backgrounds. After all, martial arts have the love of children. I think the book Swordsman is good. The descriptions of the pig's feet and supporting legs are very detailed, and the characters have different personalities. I don't want to write a simple text, with a lot of popular faces, a lot of weird names, and a lot of skills and moves. Personally, I like the author's narration style, the sense of eloquence.

I hope the author can rectify the name of Chinese martial arts in his novels, and don't follow Jin Yong's example of writing random novels and including personal items. Jin Yong adapted Taoist martial arts, boy's martial arts, and Nine-Yang Magic into Buddhist ones. The birthplace of Wudang founder Zhang Sanfeng was also changed to that of a Shaolin monk. Shameless.

After reading the first 40 chapters, I would like to share my thoughts on this novel. First of all, its background setting, training system and exercises are very good. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is also very in line with my taste, and the character creation is also good. But there are also some shortcomings. First of all, the protagonist, as a time traveler, actually becomes brothers with a group of people around 10 years old. There is also a couple and he communicates with them without any barriers. You must know that the protagonist is nearly 20 years older than them in mental age, and he is still so young. In the early stage, the author spent a lot of pen and ink describing the intersection between the protagonist and these children. I really can't stand this. Moreover, the protagonist relies on his 17-year mental age advantage and great perseverance to practice for so many years and is still on the same level as several children. I really don't know what to say when his talent can offset so much. I recommend that the author make some changes beforehand, either not to travel through time, or to travel together as a group, otherwise readers with obsessive-compulsive disorder will be very uncomfortable. Also, this is a martial arts novel. What I want to see is the protagonist wandering the world alone, just like Shen Jianxin. Maybe I haven't seen it in the later chapters. Finally, I would like to make a small suggestion. The heroine appears a little early. I feel that meeting the protagonist during the process of wandering around the world will not appear too deliberate, and it is more in line with the style of martial arts novels. Finally, I hope the author can write better and better.

I feel like this book is going to be a hit! ! ! ! I feel like this book is going to be a hit! ! ! ! I feel like this book is going to be a hit! ! ! ! I feel like this book is going to be a hit! ! ! ! I feel like this book is going to be a hit! ! ! ! 🥵

First of all, I want to say that I like Li Chengtao! I like Li Chengtao! I like Li Chengtao! The charming "Chasing the Wind" hopes that Madness will not write him off as a tragic figure. Personally, I feel that among the characters currently appearing (in the first 25 chapters), the strongest characters should be: Li Chengtao and Li Chengqian (although this eldest brother seems very unreliable, I always feel that he is also very good! Unbeatable! Pan! Stone!); The next level should be: Zhao Long, Wang Bodang (this name always seems to be the same character as Wang Bodang in Heroes of the Sui and Tang Dynasties); the next level should be: Xifeng, Fenghuo, Xintian (three pig feet), Lin Lei. The last one at the bottom is the funny Qi Chengcheng~~🤭

This book feels pretty good when I first got into it, and the author won't stop updating it.