The Servant of Crimson

It's a pity. You had the potential to become a top-tier author in the Western fantasy genre. If you don't build up your fanbase, it will be even harder later. Plus, having a history of abandoning projects is very damaging to trust. We've all paid real money to subscribe, and you've given us a poorly written, unfinished project.

The Mind Thief heroine is too erotic; write more!

I've never really known much about the D&D genre. It was only when I was playing Baldur's Gate 3 that I got carried away and wanted to try writing a book on the subject. For me, fan fiction has always been more difficult than original writing because it requires referencing a fixed template and doesn't allow for free and imaginative expression.

The second team's writing was clearly inferior to the beginning. When I read the comments and saw someone say that the author's writing about love was too fake and formulaic, I suddenly understood. What's with the new plot? Everyone's involved in some inexplicable romance, with no backstory or context, making it feel abrupt. The character settings are decent, but they're all poorly developed.

Surprisingly good. The writing style and structure are quite good; those who enjoy fantasy and D&D-like genres will really like it. The protagonist isn't a saintly figure, nor does he get weak in the knees at the sight of women; he's a character that aligns well with modern aesthetic standards. Although some people say it's a bit slow to start, I think it's just right.

What a waste of a book with the potential to become a huge hit! If the updates had been more consistent, it might have been the next big thing.

The taste of D&D is really authentic. I feel it shouldn't be getting this result. Should the author try to get in with the editor and see if they can get it added to the daily poison channel?

I want to see it, I want to see it, I want to see it! 😭 Who can give me the golden-haired idiot paladin I'm missing?

Having read the latest installment, I still prefer the descriptions of the protagonist's first adventure. The sincerity and growth of both the protagonist and his companions, along with the character development, were superb back then. The paladin's growth and charisma, in particular, were arguably the pinnacle of the book. The interactions between the characters were also vivid and genuine.

Sigh, the quality is so high, but so few people are reading it. It was already in the top 100 reads just four hours after the update; I really don't dare to let this book sit on my reading list.