The King's Avatar: A Sword of Wind and Thunder

At first, the fact that the protagonist was a "native" was quite off-putting, but I read in the author's comments that it would get better after the first few chapters, so I continued reading. But later on, I felt the system was pretty useless, and the protagonist was pretty useless too. 1. Does the author even know about the "butterfly effect"?

1: The native identity is fine, but the system has major problems. The cheat codes are too overpowered but not satisfying enough, resulting in a mess. 2: The biggest problem with this book is that adding a little bit of personal settings is called novelty, but adding too much makes it no longer fanfiction; it becomes self-indulgent writing disguised as fanfiction.

Your changes to the tournament format are poorly designed. Originally, it was one point for a 1v1, three points for three matches, two points for the arena, and five points for the team. The original rule was that only by winning all three 1v1 matches and then the two arena matches could you even the score if you lost the team match.

I see many unique features, keep it up! The first feature is the Hall of Fame. Like the LPL Hall of Fame, it provides a recognition of the status and achievements of retired professional players who have made outstanding contributions to Glory. It's a way of keeping up with the times. Then they inducted Su Muqiu into the Hall of Fame, which is great.

First, it has nothing to do with the (Under One Person) manga. Second, the character in the game is called (One Sword), which has nothing to do with swordsmen. Third, the Wind and Thunder Transformation is a weapon, specifically, it's two gauntlets that transform into two revolvers, a dual-form weapon. Fourth, the protagonist is a native, not a transmigrator. Fifth, there's a system that gives missions.

I can't understand the writing of top-tier authors, and I find simplistic, amateurish stories too tedious. This book perfectly falls between top-tier and average authors, which fits my standards quite well. Among the fanfictions of "The King's Avatar," this one is more to my liking, unlike other fanfictions where the protagonist immediately overpowers the original protagonist, which makes me…

Wu Chen's storyline isn't very good. If an opponent stirs up controversy later, won't the league come after him? Even if we concede that the domestic teams don't pull this stunt, what if there's a World Invitational Tournament later, but the foreigners do this, attracting a bunch of media outlets and creating international controversy? You can imagine the hot-tempered guys, both domestic and international, might just run off to Happy for a real-life PvP battle.

Dual-class playstyle is purely overpowered. Ye Xiu doesn't change classes directly, so he can use all the minor skills, regardless of the Thousand Manifestations Umbrella. Even without the Thousand Manifestations Umbrella, you can still play a solo character if you can quickly switch weapons in your inventory. Did you switch jobs or not? If you switched jobs, how do you learn skills from other jobs? If you didn't switch jobs, how do you learn advanced skills?

If the main character isn't handsome, there's no sense of immersion. My Big Picture

It feels like the author just randomly added some useless settings. 😆😆😆