The King's Avatar: A Sword of Wind and Thunder

When I first started reading it, I was quite dissuaded by the fact that the protagonist was an "indigenous" person. However, I saw in the commentary that the author said that it was good after the first few chapters, so I continued reading. But later on, I felt that the system was quite useless, and the protagonist was also quite useless: 1. Does the author know that there is a word called "Butterfly Effect"? Especially when I saw the description of the eighth season finals, it is undeniable that Zhou Zekai is very strong, the first person in Glory after Ye Xiu, but weakening his opponents is a disguised way to strengthen himself. The skill points are not sold to reincarnation, but to Tyranny. Lao Han also learned two combo skills. After two increases and one decrease, I think it is not too much to give the eighth season champion to Tyranny, right? The main character and system have been changed, so what if some of the plot has changed? 2. Then there is the Challenger League against Excellent Era. Xingxin won without "Duan Yu" in the original work. In addition to Ye Xiu, who has almost all-star members, is it so difficult to win? ? 3. The magical weapon is revealed. How many (fake) magical weapons are there in so many teams? How many hands does Xingxin have? Xingxin's silver weapons are also mentioned as level 80. How much better are they compared to the original? Regular season plot? ? 4. There's nothing good to say about choosing Tang Rou as the heroine, but her boyfriend is both a professional novice, starting from the same starting point, and has made so much better progress than her. Isn't this more stressful and exciting than the only one Ye Xiu in the original novel brings? With Tang Rou's character, wouldn't training be harder and improve to a higher level? To sum up the above, I only saw the protagonist become stronger, the plot did not change much, and the role of butterfly wings was not used. It was really useless.

1: There is no problem with the indigenous status, but the system has too many problems. The golden finger is too wide, but it is not fun enough. It is not fishy or nondescript. 2: The biggest problem with this book is that adding a little private design is called novelty, but if you add too much, it is not a fan. It is a self-pleasure article disguised as a fan. 3: Although there were various bugs when Butterfly Lan wrote the book, he wrote some things such as event arrangement and historical lines very straightforwardly. There is basically no such concept in this book, and the competition format even includes a situation where Blue Rain plays Excellent Era away from home for the second consecutive time. 4: Because the author's ability to sort out the timeline is extremely poor, some characters appeared who had no contact with the protagonist at all in the early stage, and did things that were not in line with the current settings of the characters. Such as the All-Star Game in Season 8. . . . I think we can do something about the Hall of Fame, but when did this Hall of Fame exist? Who decided to hold it? The person who decided to hold this event has nothing to do with the protagonist (it can even be said that he does not exist), but he just did something inexplicable. I think you can definitely postpone this matter to the ninth season, and you can describe the intersection between the protagonist and which league high-level executive to come up with the idea and implement it, instead of just writing it down as soon as you slap your head on it. 5: The author says and thanks readers for their tips and personal sharing. . . I don't understand why it was added to the text of the subscription chapter? Judging from the word count of over 3 million, it turns out that the minimum guarantee of over 2 million is plus private settings, and the lower one million is these meaningless nonsense. 6: The emotional line is abstract and gets one. Nowadays, many Internet readers are clamoring for no cp, no emotional drama, etc. This is because there are too many situations like this book. If I can't write the emotional drama, I just write it. The greasy text is paired with the facial makeup of the character. I know with my toes the direction of the next emotional drama. The few chapters where the protagonist confesses to Tang Rou were so awkward that I felt uncomfortable. 7: The places that should be changed remain unchanged, and the places that should not be changed are changed randomly. In the original work, Tang Rou's life experience is very mysterious. It was not revealed until the episode where she was invited to a party by Loulan Zhan in City B. Before that, Tang Rou's life experience was hidden in the original work and she dated Chen Guo. One reason is that she is afraid that the difference in status will create a sense of distance, and the other reason is that she has never relied on her family during her days in Xingxin, so she basically did not realize the status of this character's wealthy daughter in the early stage. But this book ignores this point and turns it into a story where Chen Guo knew about Tang Rou's family background from the beginning and made it up randomly. And because the protagonist participated and disrupted the original timeline, the butterfly effect caused by the protagonist was basically not realized. It is still the eighth All-Star Weekend, and the protagonist is exposed to the public eye, but the protagonist still does what he should do. After tying with Han Wenqing in the spotlight and revealing that he had just started playing boxing, do you think the clubs would not try to recruit him? Where did this plot go? Except for an invitation from Han Wenqing, it was gone. Later, the "recruiting Lord Grim incident" was copied from the original work, but why was the protagonist not mentioned?

Your competition system settings were not changed well. It was originally one point for singles, three points for three games, two points for the arena, and five points for the team. Originally, you had to win three singles games and then two points for the arena to equalize the consequences of the losing team. If you change the score to be based on heads, you will change the meaning left by the original author: "Glory is never a one-person game." If you change like this, your personal strength will be greater than your team's strength. You will win three points in the duel and three points in the arena. Unless the opposing team loses 0 and the battle group is destroyed, we can only draw a tie. Even if the opponent changes to six, we will lose. In this case, its meaning changes, and personal strength can affect the situation of the battle. Moreover, the team could originally put out bait or something to lure them in, but now putting out the bait means giving them points. Changed the sentence that originally ran through the whole situation: "Glory is never a one-person game."

Cheers to see many original features! The first feature. The Glory Hall of Fame is the first feature. Like the LPL Hall of Fame, it gives status certification to some retired professional players who have made outstanding contributions to Glory. It can be regarded as keeping up with the times. Then Su Muqiu was inducted into the Hall of Fame, which was great. Su Muqiu not only had to stay in Ye Xiu's memory, but also wanted everyone to know about such a genius. Finally, the latest chapter covers the dungeons and new maps from Glory level 50 to level 70. This can be regarded as filling a gap in the original work of Master. Zhongzhi went to the Realm of Gods because Ye Xiu was at level 50. The dungeons after level 50 were all in the Realm of Gods, and the tenth area was completely gone. Anyway, come on, I will keep following this book. With so many full-time fans, the author is the most attentive and has his own thoughts in it. Unlike some authors who only copy the original work, fill it with water and stuff all kinds of messy jokes. As long as the author persists, writes well, and doesn't drift off, there will be more and more readers and the results will get better and better.

First. It has nothing to do with the comics (Under One Person). The second character's name in the game is "One Sword" and has nothing to do with the swordsman. Third, the wind and thunder transformation is a weapon. Specifically, double fist gloves transform into double revolvers and dual-form weapons. The fourth protagonist is an indigenous person, not a time traveler. The fourth one has a system for mission types.

I can't understand what the great author wrote, but I still find the writing to be poisonous. This book is perfectly stuck between a great author and an ordinary author, and it quite meets my standards. This one is more to my liking among the fanfics of Master Avatar. Unlike other fanfics where the protagonist just crushes the protagonist of the original work, it really makes me uncomfortable... There must be some poison points, for example, the hand speed is 500 when you come up. My little suggestion is to start with a hand speed of 300, then get a talent of 500, and get to 500 by being trained by Ye Xiu or training by yourself. Then, awareness of 500 is also quite poisonous. My suggestion is that the system reward is to raise the upper limit to 500, and then train to reach awareness of 500. After all, gaming skills also require talent. There is a process of struggle, so that the author can write a few chapters. There is also the protagonist's life experience. Would it be better to dig a hole in the first chapter? For example, if the protagonist doesn't care about money, this will not make the protagonist's life experience too abrupt. The first post I wrote was just updated to the version update. My suggestion is don't overwhelm the combat power, don't make the protagonist invincible, otherwise it will become more and more broken later on. Don't overwhelm the game by turning the game into a reality like spiritual energy recovery. Many novels are like this, it makes me sick...

Wu Chen's plot is not good. If his opponents start to stir up public opinion in the future, won't the alliance pick a fight with him? ? To take a step back, if domestic people don't do this, there will be world invitational tournaments in the future, and foreigners will do this, and attract a lot of media. This will not directly become international public opinion~~ You can imagine whether the grumpy old guys at home and abroad will directly run Xingxin Live PK offline.

Dual professions are pure and unparalleled. Ye Xiu didn't change classes directly, so he could use all his skills, which had nothing to do with the Myriad Manifestations Umbrella. If you don't have the Thousand Chance Umbrella, you can still play Sanren if you can change weapons quickly in your backpack. Did you change your career or not? How can I learn skills from other professions after changing jobs? How can you learn advanced skills without changing jobs?

If the protagonist wasn't handsome, I wouldn't have a sense of immersion My picture

It feels like the author just randomly added some junk settings 😆😆😆