The King's Avatar: Reborn as Sun Xiang, with Su Mucheng as My Girlfriend

This is such an outrageous CP that I have ever seen

1. The title persuades people to quit. Considering that there are only a small number of full-time fans, this title will persuade at least 80% of them to quit. 2. The competition is formulaic. Basically, there are more than one dozen protagonists later, and then the team competition will be passed in one go. 3. The perspective is single. You can use the perspective of a passerby to describe the protagonist group. But the flaws are not hidden. The relationship with Su Mucheng is very well written. I guess everyone skipped the competition to read this. When will I write a Tokyo××😁

I'm a football fan, and I feel that Glory's economic system is very weird.

Chapter 20 will be on the shelves, are you kidding me?

Now when I look at the full-time masters, I want an account like Xuxu Baobao to play, and it crashes in seconds, what operations do I need 😏

The design is quite reasonable. Just don't make the villain and heroine too stupid. There is an old saying in the Internet literary circle that the villain's IQ is the author's IQ.

The author only knows that Haolong Pojun? Every time he shows off his skills, it is Haolong Pojun? Moreover, Haolong Pojun is a level 65 ultimate move, not a level 70 ultimate move. The three ultimate moves of Raging Dragon Pierce, Haolong Breaking Army, and Tianxiang Dragon Flash are all in the shape of dragons. Raging Dragon Pierces Heart is a level 60 ultimate move, Haolong Breaks Army is level 65, and Tianxiang Dragon Flash is a level 70 ultimate move. And what about the battle mage's soul skill, which is a level 50 ultimate move, Fighter's Will? After reading so many chapters, Yiye Zhiqiu's character only has two skills, one is the Dragon Breaking Army and the other is Dragon Fang. What? He relies on two skills to conquer the world, right? There are many skills that I have a rough understanding of, such as Sky Strike, Dragon Pressure, Falling Flower Palm, Round Dance Stick, Continuous Stab, and the level 75 ultimate move that will be released in the 11th season. There are a lot of skills. Please learn more about them. You can also play DNF or search for them.

I have similar views to the reader below, and I also feel that Liu Hao should not be too targeted. Not just him, but the same goes for other characters. After all, as you said before, they are all ordinary people. They want money and glory. These are normal. As "On the Side" said, sometimes I feel that you will unconsciously bring Ye Xiu's perspective. One more thing, Excellent Era is a team that wants to make a profit after all. I think there is a slight flaw in the part where you wrote the protagonist's welcome to Wei Chen. While it's true that Excellent Era needs a protagonist, it feels a little too arrogant for him to do that. I tried to put it into reality, but I have never seen any professional player do this. Take LOL's Faker for example. He is already a legendary figure, and it is impossible for him to make his own decisions in front of the T1 boss. Personally, I feel that it would be better to let Tao Xuan be tricked, or make a wrong step again, and be forced to sell Excellent Era in the end, and then return Excellent Era to the protagonist or to someone the author thinks is trustworthy. This setting may be more reasonable. Of course, this is just my personal idea, and I hope you can come up with a better way to deal with it later! Overall, the writing is really good so far. It would be even better if you could update 10 chapters a day!

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In fact, there is no need to target Liu Hao so much People like Liu Hao only need to be praised, just like what the protagonist is doing now Ye Xiu is right, but he is too egotistical The record is like that. Since he is a teammate, so what if he pushes Liu Hao? Don't give him a chance to fail, how not to make people resentful Liu Hao didn't feel sorry for the protagonist, right? Author, please don't take Ye Xiu's perspective, but look at Liu Hao from the protagonist's perspective What you want to write is the protagonist's story, not Ye Xiu's story Just like a perfect world, if you travel through perfection and become a person in a foreign land Can you choose to help Kyushu because you like Huang? Don't underestimate Liu Hao's ability. He was kicked by Ye Xiu early because he was not capable enough He is just worse than Ye Xiu and cannot support the entire team I hope the author can think about it This book treats Liu Hao coldly from the beginning. I think the author's writing style is very good. I hope he can write a story that belongs to the protagonist instead of Ye Xiu's substitute perspective.