Douluo: Spirit Pearl Divine Sword

It is not appropriate to give away the fairy grass for free. Yu Tianheng is one of the heirs of the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Family. Although he and the Qibao Glazed Sect are allies, there is also competition. If it is a marriage partner, it is understandable to give it away for free, but he is a man. In addition to Dugu Yan and Ye Lingling, there should be an exchange of interests. The protagonist is not Tang San at that time. He needs to win people's hearts as much as possible, and the interests of the sect must also be considered. Do you think that the Qibao Glazed Sect would give away human soul bones from other sects for no reason?

If the writing is good, you can actually try harem novels, which will have a wider audience. I have seen several harem Douluo fanfics with more poisonous points than you, but more monthly votes than you. Don't worry about those who don't like it. People who like books won't talk about it. Only those who don't like it will stop scolding because they feel uncomfortable. So you will see a lot of people scolding, but there will be book friends to defend it, as long as it is not a big poisonous point.

The single heroine is so good, Rongrong is so good, why do we have to have two men from the modern past and two men? I just want to see Ning Rongrong as the heroine alone. Why is it so difficult? I have to bring Qian Renxue every time

You must have made a mistake. When you hunt for the first soul ring, you will meet Tang San. The protagonist is in the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, which is next to Tiandou City. Moreover, Tang San is in a small principality and is not within the scope of the Tiandou Empire.

The protagonist's IQ is not very high. For example, when he was weak, he went to Tiandou Royal Academy to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers, claiming to be an ordinary civilian (hiding his identity as a disciple of Sword Douluo), but unscrupulously offending a noble student (cutting off the ear of a grandson of Contra), which seems unreasonable to me. Sexually speaking, a gentleman is not conducive to being under a dangerous wall. It can also be seen from the subsequent plot, especially after magnifying Ning Fengzhi's IQ, he often only exists in the form of chess pieces. Of course, there is nothing wrong with chess pieces, but chess players can have a brighter future. The protagonist is not devoted and certainly not sentimental. This point is related to the protagonist's family history. The protagonist is too deeply bound to the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect. In the early stage, he was hampered by his weakness. Not to mention whether he had sentimental thoughts, even if he did, like Qian Renxue, he did not dare to marry until he left the Douluo God Realm and went to the Fairy Sword World. His complicated feelings towards Gu Yuena may also be seen. , These details can show that the protagonist is indeed not a dedicated person, but he is still very decent and will not unscrupulously cater to his own preferences, at least until he has not grown up. After all, he relied on the Qibao Glazed Sect at the beginning, and some things are not easy to do in person. I think this is also a reason. The protagonist is still a bit indecisive, and has some seemingly inexplicable guilt and debt towards some people. This is mainly related to the fact that the protagonist's state of mind has not changed. He regards the original work as a real world, but he does not know that for him, the original work is just a script in a parallel world, and in this world he comes to, he is the protagonist who describes and affects the world. To experience the true warmth and warmth of human nature, there is no need to restrict the terms in the original script, but to make good use of the information in this script to play his own life. Of course, these are just some minor flaws, because for a book, making people think is the core value, so I still quite approve of this book.

I have read more than 500 chapters, let me analyze this book The first is the advantages: 1. There is no doubt about the clear grudges. He has lived up to everyone who is good to the protagonist. 2. A clear conscience: Although there are some double standards, the bottom line is that what you do is what you do. If not, it is not. In the book, the protagonist also admits that he has double standards, Holy Mother, so he has a clear conscience to do the things of these good old people. Secondly, the disadvantages: The author did not have a clear overall view and did not think about the future direction of the book, which indirectly led to a series of problems later: the plot was forced to follow, and after the 300th chapter, it felt that something was wrong. The author did not shape the character, characteristics and appearance of the protagonist well, and added supporting characters to the plot. First, the character of the protagonist is given to collapse and the Virgin's heart is overflowing, and then various reasons are given to the people in the protagonist group to get married. It's really embarrassing to say that you force a spouse like this without any emotional description. In the last few hundred chapters, the author has let himself go, just to get through the plot, so it is finished in a hurry There is also my evaluation and discussion: I think this emotional scene of Qian Renxue can be omitted, it is really difficult to describe in one sentence The logic is not smooth, it is unclear whether it is love or hate, and they are completely different in ideology and political morality. There is no logic at all between two people with different views. The protagonist is plotting against Qian Renxue while going to rescue her. It seems really unreasonable Ning Rongrong is in the whole book The book is still very good. I got into it because Ning Rongrong is the heroine. Ning Rongrong really changed a lot after the transformation of Shi Lake in the original book. There is a hint of cuteness in her tsundere. Although she is a little willful, she is steady, mature and considerate. This is also an important reason why I like Ning Rongrong as a character.

The protagonist sees everyone as his brother and everyone he sees as his sister. In reality, it is quite normal. After all, it is usually just polite. However, in the novel, it looks a bit weird. It doesn't matter now, but in the future, you should pay attention to your identity when you compete for world domination or become a god king.

Overall it's okay, with pros and cons. Let's talk about the advantages first. First, the ending is good, everyone has an explanation, they are not eunuchs. Secondly, the protagonist's outlook on life is correct. His intelligence was not good at first, but he has shown clear growth later on. He is a growth-type protagonist. Third, there is no abuse of the host throughout the whole process, which is great. Fourth, the master Tang San and Tang Hao were decisive enough to kill him, unlike previous novels where he was told to kill but always failed to kill him. Fifth, the supporting characters are well described, especially Chen Xin and Ning Fengzhi. Let's talk about the shortcomings First, there are too few female protagonists. In fact, beauties such as Hu Liena and Zhu Zhuqing can be accepted. Although their endings are explained, they still give me a slight feeling of missing out. Secondly, the relationship between Qian Renxue and Qian Renxue was not well described, making her feel like a mistress. Third, the protagonist is too strong in the later stage and has no sense of tension at all. Fourth, make the IQ of the supporting character higher than that of the protagonist. If the boss of this book is Ning Fengzhi, the protagonist will definitely not be able to defeat him.

After watching it all, let me talk about my feelings. First of all, there are no problems with the plot. There are no poisonous points until the end. Moreover, the protagonist belongs to the kind of growth type. If he does something bad in the early stage, he will admit that he did it wrong later. And it's satisfying enough. Maybe it's more appropriate to say it's a big meal, and it's not a brainless slap in the face. A big pleasure will have a lot of preparation until it completely explodes in one place. Of course, there are good things and bad things, but most of the bad things here are things that I personally feel are inappropriate. 1. The smooth development of the plot is achieved by the intelligence of some characters, and then there is an overly deified character on our side. It may not be a problem according to the cool writing, but I just felt awkward when I watched it. To put it simply, it felt like it was too cool, and it was a bit boring in the middle. 2. The characters in the protagonist's camp are somewhat homogenous in personality, that is, as soon as they get to know the protagonist, they all become Buddhist-like. Of course, I feel that this is a matter of length, and not too much perspective is given to the supporting characters. These are the things that I personally feel bad about, and they are over the top, but I still recommend taking a look anyway.

You must treat Rongrong well, I like her very much, I can't let Qian Renxue get over Rongrong, Qian Renxue is too sensible, Rongrong Rongrong. Is the best