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Share your thoughts after reading it... Personally, I feel that the author is fully capable of ending it... Even if the whole plot seems to have been tied up with a dead knot... But the author's level can still open the knot at the end... But I am not sure... I don't know if the author has lost confidence in something due to practical reasons... This hurdle has not been overcome... Which makes the final book unable to proceed. It's... The core of the book is too close to reality... The weird world of super-powered ghosts in the ancient setting... At the same time, there are feudal power governments-the royal family of the Yu Kingdom, religious and theological religious sects-Taihao Mountain, and universities similar to scientific research institutions-Jixia Academy... Plus an organization established by a bunch of people who want to make big things-Zhaoming... There is even a little dynastic struggle... And the protagonist wants to popularize modern medicine. ... And at the same time, following the popularization of scientific theories... Should be considered to be on the side of the academy... The game between the four main... Or enemy or friend forces... The simple chaos of these four forces is enough to be the contradictory theme of a book... But here comes the problem... The author starts to add more and more... In the background, it is obvious that the world is going to be in chaos... There are still many evil spirits and weird things... And the current scientific and medical things cannot be dealt with. These things... The story setting clearly states that in this world only the Haotian Bell, which engages in religious beliefs, can drive away evil spirits and protect human settlements... However, the religious side of God is increasingly in conflict with the academy that engages in scientific research... This is the first conflict... The conflict between the academy and Taihao Mountain... The conflict between rational science and faith worship... But it is a contradiction created artificially in the book... On the other side... The academy side The defector formed an organization with a bunch of bad guys who can cultivate... The power is not small... The destructive power is not weak... Obviously he also wants to cause trouble... The words imply that the feudal rule and dictatorship and the academy as an auxiliary to the ruler are not so clean... This is the second kind of conflict... Evil forces and justice... The conflict between Zhao Ming and Yu State, Xuegong, and Taihao Mountain... At the same time, it is the hidden kind of reverse revenge plot of "good people are not that good after all"... Later... The author repeatedly mentioned the third potential conflict in the book through the protagonist's own thinking and various plot insinuations... When Jixia Academy faced Mount Taihao, Zhaoming, and other countries... They are allies with the royal family of the Yu Kingdom... The scientific ideas represented by Kejixia Academy that promote progress, liberate productivity, and liberate the working people... And the dictatorship represented by the royal family that maintains social stability, rules, squeezes and manages the Yu Kingdom... The feudal system is bound to have conflicts... The last thing... The author seems not to be complicated enough... And added a lot of emotional drama and emotional undercurrents... Here is the emotional line... Let alone Chai Cuiqiao, who is bound to death... The protagonist is obviously going to fall in love with Li Leling, the princess of the Yu Kingdom of the feudal dynasty... Br>This relationship is similar to the two heroines in the previous game... Except that in the player, Chai has more scenes and Wang has less scenes... In Wenjian, it is basically the other way around... After that, there is He Fanshuang, who is studying medicine... A medical student... Although his family is not an ordinary person... But he feels that he can be regarded as a representative of the common people and the lower class... A confidant and a fellow traveler... Then there is the Turkic Ashinagaro... A representative of the hostile aristocracy... What is... Heavenly descent? Enthusiasm? Or something like Romeo and Juliet? There are a few things that are considered ambiguous that I won't mention... Based on the handling of the emotional drama at the end of the last book... That is, it is neither clear about whether Chai or Wang will be the heroine who ends up together... Nor a double heroine or a harem... It is just a way of avoiding the most important and blurring... This book also clearly feels that it will not be right in the end. What is the clear treatment of the Shura field... It does not necessarily have to be a single heroine... It does not necessarily have to be two heroines... It is not necessarily or even impossible to have a harem... And... Let alone the protagonist struggling in these emotional lines... There is even an emotional drama that jumps out... The conflict caused by the protagonist's own ideas and the heroine's identity background... That is the fourth main conflict! The protagonist wants to promote modern medicine and scientific theories... This is destined to slowly open up the people's wisdom... Oppose faith... Oppose the feudal centralized government... And he married and bound the emperor's princess to his death... It is almost equivalent to reaching the point of whether to change his own life… The above is enough to cause a headache... But it doesn't even include the conflict between the protagonist's own ideals and the real situation... As well as the crisis of being constantly eroded by foreign objects like Mo Si... 😅This is basically my basic summary and opinion of what the book will end up like...

Let's talk about your thoughts after catching up till now! The first book I came into contact with was the American Manga Cultivation of Immortality, but I didn't read it to the end. Then the second book was the same, I only read the first part, but I didn't catch up to the end. The next one is this one, and it is also for the author. Whether it is the first or the second book, I can feel the new ideas and the clear main line. This book is a bit disappointing. If the first two books are really about the topic, then this book seems to me to be a bit of a trick. I saw that the protagonist in the latest chapter has little to do with the sword, and the fighting method is more similar to that of a warrior, relying on the body, or adding a venomous fighting style. Some people analyze that it is the sword in the heart, similar to the meaning of liangjian, but the protagonist's approach is not very similar. He neither starts with the biange system, nor fights for fame and wealth to gain the right to speak, nor does he improve productivity (to be honest, I really want to save the people, I think food is the most important thing. With the protagonist's knowledge base, the cultivation of hybrid rice and other crops should not be a problem). If we start with medicine, it should be more effective to establish a medical system! Otherwise, how can the protagonist change the entire society?                                  ​Forceps and allicin might count as one. Of course it's also because the protagonist's actions feel very loose to me! Always make changes when things go wrong and use modern technology. There is no initiative, which is far worse than the previous two. The forceps happened to be involved in the delivery, and it was not exposed by the protagonist himself. Yuejin Soap was made to make money, while Allicin was made when someone happened to be bleeding and injured. If the entire plot is scattered and there is no definite main line, then the setting of this society gives me a great sense of violation. In a society that cultivates immortality and can use magic, there is almost no medicine and no healing spells, but there are obviously many life spells in the text! Haven't you created a few healing spells for such a long time? If you have to look for the protagonist whenever you encounter a patient, why don't you just ignore it and wait for death until the protagonist comes? I can hardly see in this book that besides the protagonist, there are other useful doctors in the world. The protagonist is showing off his medical skills throughout the whole process, and the other doctors seem to have no sense of presence! What does this feel like to me? It's almost the same as the kind of novel that travels back to ancient times to defeat ancient people with modern poetry and songs! It's a bit hard for me to believe that this is by the same author as this book. There is another question, this book is a novel after all! But after it was put on the shelves, I subscribed to a chapter that introduced the entire process of extracting allicin. This was too much! Although it is good to popularize science occasionally, it doesn't need to be so detailed! This should be due to incorrect timing! Or is it a professional patient? Needless to say, the author's writing style must be of a high standard, and he really put a lot of effort into checking the information, so it does have a strong sense of immersion in the early stage, but in the later stage, it seems like returning to an ordinary time-travel historical article, sometimes it is not as good as others! Because this book not only shocked the natives with modern technology, but also added an extraordinary system. As a result, the two were not combined. The methods used by the protagonist to treat illnesses hardly involve extraordinary methods, they are all modern medicine. So why did you learn this extraordinary system, to be more powerful in fighting? Also, when I was learning talisman before, the protagonist said that this was similar to programming. I thought that the protagonist would improve the talisman and create some kind of healing spell, but in the end, nothing happened after that, so I still used modern medical methods to show off! The above are my complaints about this book! I'm a little disappointed, it's not as exciting as I imagined, it can only be regarded as average! It's a bit lower than the previous two books. I support rebuttal, but it's best to be well-founded and don't bother with trolls!

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What Chai Cuiqiao looks like in the previous book

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Li Ang, the existence in the endless universe has thousands of incarnations and countless projections. What everyone sees and feels are all illusions. The six senses are unclear and chaotic. There is a poem that says: leave hundreds of books as illusion, break through thousands of subscriptions as truth

The last one was that you couldn't grasp the plot and couldn't continue writing it. Fortunately, the infinite streaming model covers up your inability to grasp the outline. This one is even more heavyweight. Advancing the plot relies entirely on the villain to cause trouble and the protagonist to wipe the butt. Moreover, the mid-range power on the front is completely unreliable. The villain's ability is also unbalanced. It's like the Konoha Village in the early stage against the Akatsuki organization where all members are unlocked in the later stage. The plot problems are forgotten, and And as everyone can see from this book, Xia Huo, you don't know how to write fighting scenes at all, you can only write about the atmosphere of ancient weapons and hot weapons. You failed at all in fantasy fighting, and the description of hand-to-hand combat is 0 points. Your strengths are short dungeons and jokes that don't require basic skills. To put it simply, you are not good at basic skills and plot cutting. It is recommended that you write about urban superpowers and wits first, and don't touch on your strengths and avoid weaknesses.

Does the end of the last chapter of "Records of the American Manga Cultivation of Immortality" indicate that the author has already thought about the protagonist of the subsequent book Of course it may not be

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