A Brawler's Road to Breaking Out of Shawshank

Jiangnan actually wrote about the Dragon Clan and collapsed... Jiangnan can only write about teenagers, but not about growth... So Lu Mingfei is like being pushed back and never grows up... Jiangnan is good at writing detailed plots, so he used a bunch of very real fragments to piece together a very fake character, Lu Mingfei. He is good at writing short stories, and the fragments he writes are very real, so Lu Mingfei has a high sense of substitution at the beginning, and the Dragon Clan has good reviews. However, he is not good at writing long stories, so in the later chapters, the environment for the character's growth needs to change. He cannot write, and if he writes fake, readers who have been substituted before will feel angry and aggrieved. The core problem of Lu Mingfei's character is actually not cowardice, but fakeness. Human beings are intelligent, and one of the basic attributes that intelligence brings to human beings is adaptation, which is change. Even if you can't analyze it rationally, your hippocampus will use your emotional instinct to help you remember. But Lu Mingfei has not changed. Either Xiao Lu Mingfei has no intelligence and memory, or Jiangnan's writing has collapsed So readers who had a sense of substitution before will have an angry and suffocating rush, feeling that there is something wrong that cannot be said.

It's a wonderful novel with a good plot. It's really fun to watch without being sloppy in killing enemies. There are no major errors in the writing style, and there are very few errors in details. The lack of popularity is probably because the author's introduction and book title are not well written, and it is easy for people to regard it as a passing commodity. My only concern is that I hope the protagonist is not a eunuch, OK? Of course, it is indeed a bit troublesome for Zhutianliu to think about eunuchs or stallions.

Many book friends have reported that the title of the book is not very attractive. Personally, I think it could be changed, but I can't think of anything better. What do book friends think? Do you want to change it? With what name?

The protagonist is a bit stupid and needs no brains

Sure enough... I still can't watch the protagonist who is too outrageous. The reckless woman setting is just an excuse. She is so intelligent that she doesn't look like a normal person. She is too lazy to use her brain to write a novel. If I just set the protagonist to be a pig, will anyone read it?

Free of charge, I finished it in one go. To be honest, the early writing was really good, including Shawshank, Draconis, The Grudge, One Piece, etc. It was very enjoyable to read in one go, but when it came to Lover's Ghost and White Snake and Green Snake, it was overrated. It felt like a ghostwriter, not like it was written by the same person!

To be honest, whether it's The Shawshank Redemption or Dragons, you can still watch the author's plot even though it's not very rigorous. After reaching the third world, I feel that the quality has dropped a lot. As for the dragon part, to be honest, I can't stand it. Firstly, I have never read this book, so I know nothing about the plot and characters. Secondly, the quality of the author's writing has dropped a lot. So it doesn't look good

Wang Yuyan turned into Nuwa, and she burst into pieces. Who is the real protagonist!

I don't know if Pirates is good or not, but the author's writing is too good. Let's check out Gai's Mark. The original anime's aunt chapter was quite compact before, that is, it was watery in the arena. But this time it was really rowing all over the place. I couldn't do anything unscrupulous, and I didn't understand the situation. I killed the Celestial Dragons. When the general came, it seemed like the climax was coming. In the end, they let each other go, and there was nothing they could do with the elemental ability users, so they just ignored it? ? ? Even if you are not interested in Devil Fruits, you should find someone to understand them. Okay, I have the idea of ​​the Death God Hokage, oh I want to save Rukia, why do you want to kill her, no matter what, fight with me, prove that you can speak in front of me, pangpangpang , as for whether the protagonist can see the God of Death, I don't know. After all, starting from Sadako's film, the abilities obtained by the protagonist begin to be unreasonable. I overdraw my consumption and cheat the system. You give me a hammer·jpg, With all due respect, the protagonist changes from attributes to mortals, and the combat power begins. He became idealistic. Whether he can beat him or not depends entirely on the author's words. These chapters have a sense of déjà vu as the Five Emperors fight against the Sixth Emperor. It looks like free will, but in fact it has no purpose. If someone teases him, he will just follow him. He is reckless. It does not mean he belongs to Luffy. Navy King→_→, Navy I'm stealing your rice and riding on others' heads Speaking of which, the protagonist doesn't aspire to fly or teleport. He relies on two legs to run in any fight. If I punch him, the sun can be extinguished, but the range of this punch is only a few dozen meters. Uh, I have to find a way to get to the sun first? In short, it's still too weak. I agreed to follow the system to travel around the world. In order to fight against the strong, Hong Kong Man's punches are as strong as the flesh. No, JOJO is full of wisdom and tricks. No, my bug is better than yours, God of Death. No, my version of Naruto is better than yours, no, As an individual, what do I want to see most? Is my style of painting better than yours? You can make all kinds of tricks, but I can destroy the country with one punch and borrow the east wind? Even if you borrow a Dongfeng missile, I can shave off the head of the earth with one punch →_→, what? King Crimson cuts away time? My punch blasted the air within a 5km radius! Oh, it's not cutting off time, but changing the world line? Have you ever considered how the world feels? It's about to explode. Bengyu heard that you can fulfill your wish. I want to go back to my hometown to see my wife. Oh, I can't do it. What's the use of you? Oh, it's broken. Aizen, I'm sorry. I was so excited just now. Stop it. Go back to that profiteer and make another one. When Kakuzu is in a desperate situation, he doesn't rely on muscles, he can only rely on plug-ins. Good guy, did you learn this from Suicune? You can trick yourself. Wait, it's too watery. I suggest you either not update it or update it with a big chapter. Okay, I'm just waiting for the Wano Country arc to be finished, or waiting for the manga to be finished before I watch One Piece. Oh, there's another question about the heroine... Isn't pure love bad? Is the background board bad? Bai Xing is good-looking, but can't she be a sister or a pet? If you have to write about sex, would Bai Xing have this kind of thought? Absolutely amazing, the setting of a reckless man opening a harem feels like the first time I've seen it It's the same as when I watched The Seven Deadly Sins. That laziness, when I saw him and Anger together for the first time, everyone went crazy? Is this a true record of successful dog licking? Ah, do you gods have to be like humans and fall in love? Is this written in both the laws of physics and the laws of magic? Of course, speaking of important things for the last time, the water is still too watery. You don't even know what you are doing in this plot!!! Kizaru is beaten with one punch, and his stinky face is flattened, letting him know that ambiguous justice is just fart, and it is better to stop in moderation Justice has arrived!!!

Good writing, bad outline, the world chosen by the author has no connection with the previous one. It is a martial arts, a Japanese ghost, a domestic youth fantasy literature, a Japanese animation, a cliché world with a mixture of various fairy tale settings. The most annoying thing is that the protagonist is a reckless man, and the author has to arrange a woman for him in every world. Some are even forced and offensive.