I Went to Hogwarts After Being Spotted by Grindelwald

It's a pity. The fairy grass in the early stage and the grain in the later stage. If it can maintain the level before Lao Ge was wanted, it would be okay, but it is a bit dry in the later stage. The plot is too tight, and there is a cliché plot of pretending to be a slap in the face in the middle. The character design of Xiao Baihua is okay. If you like Bai Mao, someone will give it a reward. Otherwise, the author will give you a hard round. If you like daily life, just leave it. There is really not much daily life. It is the same problem as that magic text. The author cannot grasp the character's combat power, so he can only expand the world view and expand the world. In order to widen the world view, the two old men must be strengthened to prevent the old men from being too invincible, but they must not be too saucey. They can only make them Riddler, all kinds of invisible, this and that, it gives people a headache to watch. You are just a student, can't you just stay in school and read books, study hard, raise animals, and pick up girls? I have to save the world all day long, this and that. It's okay to fight noseless monsters. A true sentence like training subordinates is enough. It's better to just talk about daily life and intersperse the main story.

I don't quite understand why it's not popular even though it's a masterpiece.

After seeing Chapter 105, HP fans can rush! Finally, I am no longer the person who falls in love without thinking and uses the plot of Harry Potter. Many plots of the story have been changed, and the protagonist is more decisive. What I love most is the core of the plot. Although there are conspiracies and intrigues, the overall plot is warm and tender. It also adds a plot of magical animals, which I personally love very much. I also love the interaction between the principal and his lover. It makes up for the regrets when watching the original work. I like it very much.

An unimagined path and it unfolded so naturally, as if it should be like this after the original world line shifted! It is really a genius idea and execution. When the main line of the background has shifted so much, It can even be said that "a new house is built with old building materials", the newly added elements and the reorganized structure can be synthesized in such a natural and unobtrusive way. 👏👏👏

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As the title says, the setting of the parallel timeline is very clever, which reflects the possibility of the outcome of Sean's struggle. Other timelines are very clever. I hope the main timeline will be less cumbersome. I just saw chapter 600. The main storyline is very attractive. It would be better if there were more happy daily life. The description part of GGAD is also great! I hope that after all this is over, the couple can retire and bask in the sun. The creation of other characters is also very good. For example, the emotional drama between Sherlock and Sterling is almost better than that of the protagonists (laughing) A great novel, but does the author still remember that the protagonist has a systematic way of time travel? Finally, Daisy is cute and Stephanie is really good at it. The author should increase her Hermione stock quickly! Ah, why can I only choose one relevant chapter for the review! I originally wanted to show you my favorite part, so I'll just write it here! The free chapters have been removed 342, 405-408, 436, 439, 484-486, 542, 565, 578, 604 What weird things are in my bookmarks?

A three-million-word masterpiece that can be cut to pieces at any time, defying heaven's expectations

Long suite building. Book friends who want a supporting role can leave a message with an English name and some small background. You are also welcome to leave your original magic spell. Please indicate the effect and difficulty of learning. Love your authors

A harem, a harem, not a single heroine

The protagonist in the weak period was exposed to the whirlpool at the top of the world too early, which made him too depressed. Therefore, even if the plot was very innovative and the protagonist was stronger than ordinary people, every time he solved the incident, there were too many involvements behind it, which made it not very enjoyable and enjoyable... And then it became a bit unbearable...

How should I put it? It's the most logical book I've ever read in Qidian. The author dug so many pits that I was shocked. The updates are also very stable. It's a book that people can read into. It's just that updating it every day is too torturous. I've read more than 60 chapters and I've tied it again. Come on! It's not that I don't comment, I just want to save it and watch it together! So far, more than 700 chapters are in a state of moving forward.

Seeing that the heroine is Hermione, I have no desire at all

I have read 7 hp fanfics, but I still like Hermione as the heroine. I can't help but the movie is too deeply rooted in people's hearts. I can't stand the original and other girls as heroines.

When I saw 565, I couldn't hold on. My summary of this book is: the real protagonists are Dumbledore and Grindelwald. The special characteristics of the male protagonist are purely to make him qualified to stand next to the two old men as a camera. Every time there is a major event, the male protagonist can always witness it from the closest distance, but he can only witness it. At most, he can stand in the corner and yell, but of course no one pays attention to him. The core of the story revolves around the game between two old men and the mastermind behind the scenes. The male protagonist is just a chess piece that seems to be more useful. His systems, black magic, and magical animals are what he usually uses to solve trivial problems. Compared with the two big guys, they are not even worthy of carrying a shoe.

I hope the heroine is Hermione. If it's a harem story, I can add Fleur as the heroine.

Have you decided on the heroine yet? Sean is indeed very attractive, but his emotional instability makes people anxious. (You don't want to start a harem, then I may have to give up on the story. I, a girl, really can't read harem stories 🙂)

Needless to say, Daisy will always be awesome!!! One person begged Daisy to be the heroine! The main reason is that there were too many heroines with Hermione, which caused aesthetic fatigue.

Can you cut three million words? It's almost finished, but this little bit worse?

Isn't it tiring to jump to a book where Hermione is the heroine and say it's Hermione again? I can understand if you don't like it, and I can understand if you find it annoying, but can you understand if you like it? You can co-write what you like, but if you don't like it, do you have to get out? It's not like there aren't books with non-Hermione heroines as a starting point, just don't like reading them. You said that if we were discussing whether the plot is reasonable or not, I think it would be understandable. Who to choose as the heroine is something that the author has designed in the outline. Isn't it good to point fingers?

After reading many comments on the book, I can't help but say: I still recommend that many people read the original work intensively. The trio complement each other in the original novel. Harry is reckless, but he does many things that are beyond the norm. Hermione is a humanoid database, and her brain can move faster than two men under normal conditions. Ron is a bit worse, he is a typical shield, but with his background, he does not have to go through life and death with Harry. (Ability to resist the temptation of Horcruxes, which is better than many adult wizards) The director of the next few movies gave all his intelligence to Hermione, and almost all the shining points and advantages of the two men were deleted. To put it bluntly, I think you are all greedy for Emma instead of speaking for Hermione. Hermione is really played according to the original book, and her appearance is not up to Emma's level. Ginny's actor should be exchanged with Emma, ​​or Hermione should be dark-skinned. I wonder if there are anyone who can speak up for Hermione.

To be honest, some people don't like Hermione as the heroine, but most people will be disgusted after Hermione is given away as a daughter. Many people don't like Hermione as a heroine, but they always feel that they have to find something wrong. It's a human nature issue. Since I can't find any other faults, I'll pick the heroine's head office. That's the idea.

The opening chapter is amazing. There is a feeling that things are different in the story, the past is like smoke, and it is like a dream. I feel that as long as it doesn't break down, it will definitely be a magical book. But the subsequent plot looks a bit embarrassing. Firstly, the protagonist is too special. He feels like the chosen one, and the earth revolves around him. Harry is not like this in the original work. It looks a bit awkward here; Secondly, he is always wandering between Dumbledore and Grindelwald. If he is not at the same level, it is better to grow a little bit, just like the mysterious one. It doesn't matter what level you meet people of what level, what level you do, and it doesn't matter if you show up occasionally. The Ash Snake copy is just a forced promotion, which looks embarrassing; Third, the biggest highlight of this book is the changes Grindelwald has brought to the world. The beginning focuses on the changes, and then returns to the traditional Hogwarts life, which is equivalent to abandoning martial arts. Summary: It's really novel and attractive. Don't write too much and work hard. The above are just suggestions. You don't need to read them.

To be honest, I feel that this book is really well written, and it is definitely one of the best among the fans I have read . It is difficult to think of a story. It takes a lot of brainpower to arrange foreshadowing and make the logic self-consistent. I can feel the author's intention. Thank you for the beautiful work you have given us. I am a student party member, and now I am gradually becoming financially independent. I will try to replenish my subscription. Writing a good story is difficult, especially in the online literary world where it is so impetuous that it is difficult to get ahead. Author, you must have confidence! People who are capable can definitely shine! Look at Chixin, who is number one on the monthly vote list. It was also tepid at first, and the author almost gave up. But he persisted and now he succeeded. Your book is very interesting and I think it is great. Your writing skills also impress me. Believe in yourself and finish the book. Take a break. Your next book. I believe it will become a hit and has the potential to become a god. Your writing is totally up to par! Come on! Temporary difficulties cannot defeat you! I hope my kindness inspires you. Really come on! Your book is beautiful!

The main plot is very good, and the author's writing is also very innovative. But when it comes to the emotional line, it's like feeding the reader💩. What is the meaning of the existence of the three female protagonists? As friends of the male protagonist, they can still promote the development of the plot. Won't writing a love line like this just make all the characters involved stupid? The process of reading the book is like two mouthfuls of food💩, which makes people laugh.

Four hundred chapters have been ordered, and the plot is really well written. But insisting on having a harem is really too hard to watch. I wonder if the author's subscription has been dropped because of this.

How to make it so good in the early stage and so confusing in the later stage? The key is that the ending is missing.

In 20 days it will be 2 years as a eunuch

The writing is really touching, why eunuch?

Understand?

I have never seen this scene before. If you are willing, it can be finished in five chapters. After the battle, the ending, the ending of the world, the postscript of the wedding, it's gone. Just don't write at all