Hogwarts in the Marauders' Era

In this book, some people wonder what kind of person Karan is, and why he feels like he doesn't care about anything at first, but he still wants to integrate into a group and stubbornly insists on his own character. In my opinion, the reason is actually very simple. Although Karan is very mature in his actions and thoughts, he actually hides a little boy in his heart who lacks love and does not understand love. When Dean Anthony used his own way to pry open a crack in Karan's closed heart, more and more people entered his life. In caring and being cared for, giving and receiving, Karan influenced and was affected by the people around him. Until he determined that love is a magic that transcends magic, he began to face his own heart and tried to resurrect Dean Anthony. Isn't this his own response to love? And during this period, the incompatible soul, in a mature and appropriate way, is actually very timid and naive to carefully feel the existence of love. How can it not be awkward?        ，，，，，，，

The ideas and ideas in this book are very novel, and the world construction is also very tempting. But some places like Ollivander's are really uncomfortable to watch. I personally think that the author should carefully explain the psychology of the characters again when writing, and add a little more descriptive angles to make the characters more three-dimensional, such as Gaspard's diary and so on. A more vivid world will make readers read more carefully, and it will naturally make the foreshadowing you took so much trouble to set up more relatable to us. After all, for a novel, I think foreshadowing is not the most important thing, happiness is. Secondly, I think fandom is a new world, which can be completely different from the original Hogwarts. Please don't be limited to it. Everyone should want to see a brand new story. A completely different magical world with a similar background. Everyone must have seen enough of the original Harry Potter books. Also, please don't think that each of our readers is a senior Harry Potter fan. You might as well treat us as if you have never seen Harry Potter, and let us re-experience the magic of a completely different Hogwarts. There are some places that are indeed difficult to understand, and the author has also noticed it. Obviously, you have given special explanations about Ollivander's Oblivion Curse and Professor Mellanth's departure. I think if these explanations can be integrated into the book, it may be much more comfortable to read. The above are just my personal suggestions for reference only. I also hope that the author can write better.

It's wonderful. I would call you the best among Harry Potter fans. Imagination is like the way of reason The plot is like I am a legend Emotions are like jj, a bunch of CP articles But none of them are more pure than yours. I like HP not because of the characters but the magic settings. I prefer HP's magic system to elemental magic. For the rest, I only care about the plot, as long as it's exciting. The plot of this book is very exciting. If you read the first two volumes, they will be very scattered, but when you finish reading them, they will be very exciting and closely linked. I think it is exactly what the author himself said that he pays too much attention to the dark lines and ignores the excitement of the bright lines. Of course volume three is an improvement. In addition to the setting of the plot, the great advantage of this book is that the plot remains unchanged and the original characters are retained as much as possible. However, the plot and characters complement each other. The author later realized that giving appropriate changes to the characters is something I have not seen in other HPs. This book can be said to be a very rare fanfic. The author has researched a lot of other materials, enriched the setting, created a lot of exciting plot twists, and fully retained the character of the characters. Other fics may have one or two of the above, but no one covers them all. At least I haven't seen any fanfics since I've been reading them for a year, not counting the short stories. Highly recommended. By the way, I added this book to my bookshelf around chapter 50. I just finished reading it in one sitting today, and I may pick it up again in the future, because it really feels good to read it in one sitting. It is recommended that if you keep it, you can subscribe and download it once a month. Automatic subscription can only extend for two or three chapters. It's easy to get bored with a good plot-oriented book like this.

After watching the Meadows episode, all I can say is WOC. I have never seen such an annoying, self-righteous character who can definitely be identified as the protagonist. Compared to other HP fans or those who annoy Hermione in the original novel, it is nothing compared to it. That one is called coquettishness, and the child makes trouble, and the other one is called mentally ill, even if one is strong and beautiful. Tell me more about what you did. When the protagonist was not in school, an elder wand was missing from Ollivander's shop and the Forgetting Curse was cast on it, leading to suspicion that the protagonist had obtained it. On the school train, the protagonist began to be tested. Even if he was obviously not welcome, he still had to squeeze into a car. Later on, because of a similar experience to Tom, there were many examples of arguing with the principal that the protagonist had a problem Then in the Defense Against the Dark Arts class, the sparring team showed a level beyond what the students could handle, and knocked the protagonist unconscious into the infirmary. Later, he said that he repented and realized that he was wrong. I think this character's image has changed. Then I went to the library and saw books about Legilimency, and I thought, if you don't tell me, I'll read it myself! Do you want to forcefully read the memory? This is nothing, after all, the protagonist is a born master of Occlumency, so I can't see it anyway. Going to the back, secretly following the students to the Forbidden Forest using the illusion technique, and not taking action when in danger. Later on, this Meadows is obsessed with the elder wand, telling the protagonist over and over again that I need this wand because I am going to Egypt to do very dangerous things. Come on, you are so much older than the protagonist. You have tried the elder wand a long time ago and it is not suitable for you. You still have a big head. I gave up three times because of this person and skipped more than n chapters! It felt good to pick it up during a book shortage, but I abandoned it again after seeing a certain point! Highlight: Improving poison resistance is really no exaggeration! After reading this book by Meadows, I won't be bothered by reading dozens of other hp fanfics for women! No HP fanfic characters can irritate me, no one can annoy me to this extent, really!

Don't be fooled by that post that claims that HP fandom is the strongest... I was tricked into it by that guy... Personally, I feel that this article is a bit unfinished even if I read it in one go. The author worked very hard to bury the story in various ways, but the effect of burying it can be said to be worse than not burying it at all. The loose and jumping plot cannot support readers' expectations for foreshadowing. The result of poor character description is that you have to think about the plot to come back later (such as Meadows). Too much foreshadowing cannot be called foreshadowing. It is more like digging holes on a flat road, which makes people feel unsmooth when reading.

I just finished reading the content of the first grade. Maybe my level is not high or it's because I listen to the book, but I still can't figure out what the protagonist is going to do (ಥ_ಥ). It feels like the protagonist has a schizophrenia, and then the background changes. I don't know about others, but I personally feel that the plot is confusing and incomprehensible. Until now, I still haven't figured out which side the protagonist wants to stand on when he does these things. It is said that Voldemort said "pure blood is disgusting" at the beginning. It is said that every member of the Order of the Phoenix except Dumbledore understood him and trusted him, and some even turned against the protagonist. Even if you stand alone and want to be a lone ranger and learn magic safely in Hogsmeade, you don't need to be a Riddler. Are Snape and Lily not good to the protagonist? From time to time, you talk to yourself or change your face. Wouldn't it be better to speak clearly and be more frank? He offends people everywhere and pushes away those who care about him. I was initially attracted by the author's writing style and the background of the pro-age era, but by the end of the first grade I didn't see what kind of person the protagonist was, and it was very tiring to follow. I hope the author can write more clearly and take care of novice readers like me. After all, I read novels to relax after writing a paper, not to do reading comprehension.

What kind of thing is this written? It's so poisonous The protagonist is a smug clown. He is unpredictable at the beginning and looks like an intellectually enhanced version of the Dark Lord. However, as soon as he enters the plot, he loses weight and is deflated everywhere. He is still pretending to be a fool. He repeatedly emphasizes how much other students are afraid of him, how much the principal and professors are afraid of him. It makes me laugh to death.

Great author, the characters you wrote are all broken. The protagonist is self-righteous and arrogant. Snape was kind and honest when he was a child, look at what you wrote. I can't even grasp the characters' personalities. In Harry Potter, Snape basically has no shortcomings, but unfortunately he is a licking dog, licking him to the end...

Why do I feel that the protagonist is a person with a split personality? The supporting characters in the work can not understand the protagonist and feel that the protagonist is deeply hidden, but it does not mean that the readers should also watch the protagonist in a 180-degree turn without any inner monologue. The sudden reversal is too abrupt. It feels like the author Wen Qing in the novel long ago has a disease, that kind of: I don't want to be your enemy, I am the enemy of the world.

I hope Meadows will never get the wand I'm so fed up, it's like a rich second generation who always wanted an old man's heirloom, but the old man was unwilling to give it because it was not suitable for the rich second generation. Then the old man gave the heirloom to Karan who was suitable. As a result, the rich second generation cried, made trouble, and hanged himself. He used financial power and power to force Karan (for example, he has been targeting him), and even relied on the teacher to lynch Lucius in various ways. You want to teach students casually and unreasonably, but you don't want to protect the students themselves? You said that if you want to die, you need a wand, if you need strength, you need a wand, so wasn't the wand always there before Karan came? Charming but generally annoying and important character. I hope this character will not be a female protagonist. I also hope Karan doesn't give her the wand.