Saving Uchiha Starts from Becoming the Clan Leader

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Let me just say a few words. Jpg [Contains spoilers] I really like the daily interactions of various characters described by the author! ! Others may say it's watery... But the author's writing is good and the plot is smooth. I really enjoyed reading it! ! Every time there is a beautiful and interesting plot like this, whether it is an original character or not, I will slow down and read. I really like my sister among the original characters! Except for Touka's name, which is a bit off-putting (it always reminds me of Renji's daughter...), Her outgoing personality, carefree attitude and emphasis on friendship are all great! Although I cannot write about her development in more depth due to age restrictions. I really like the interaction between childhood sweethearts Chihaya and Kakashi! I also like Chihaya very much! Watching the scene where she single-handedly stopped the young Kakashi and Asuma from fighting when she first appeared, I immediately imagined a whole series of her handsome battle scenes! She is alive in my mind 👍😅 If I could draw, I would definitely draw this section! So handsome! (It's a pity that she can only draw stick figures.) The plot where a student important to her is in crisis and she opens a kaleidoscope in anger is also great! I like the plot of Naruto and Sasuke! Love the background of Naruto becoming confident and happy surrounded by the friendship and love of his companions! I like the depiction of them becoming more powerful and having more diverse fighting styles through careful guidance than the original! I like Itachi as an ANBU member and Kimimaro's partner. Compared to the original work, he lives a relatively ordinary life but does not cut off the ties between family and family, so his inner world is more stable and peaceful... Because the Uchiha family was exterminated in the main drama, I never considered this aspect, but when I found out that in this article, I led the Jonin When the mainstay member of the Uchiha family naturally appeared in the team, the kind of emotion that emerged... Was very subtle 😭 And in the main drama, the supporting characters in the original work did not spend much ink to describe compared to the protagonist group. The author really had to put his mind into describing it, and the image was much more three-dimensional and full! Their thoughts and emotional processes are complete and well-founded, without any strange off-line behavior, which is particularly outstanding! There are very few high-quality fanfics in which the supporting characters do not lose their wits throughout the non-confrontational plot...! Wiping tears (Maybe except for a few characters who play the role of villains... And Kakashi from the Battle Scorpion...) Of course! The author's poorly written part about the confrontation between Sogen and Yukino Haku outside Konoha and the last chapter before running away are not included. The last few hundred words of the last chapter highly summarize the last 50 chapters that could have been the climax of the plot. I hate it! ! I'd rather not have the last chapter! (Conjecture about Shiro's family: I haven't read the original Japanese version, but I guess the Snow family may be: の→ゆきの→yukino→Xueye? Like Umino Iruka, Haruno Sakura? Dolphin of the sea, Haru The cherry blossoms, the whiteness of the snow? ? Personal guesses are welcome, please don't comment) I really like the ghost lamp Mangetsu, Zabuza and Bubble (Hagao) who have long passed away or died with regret in the original work! Although their characters may not completely follow the few settings of the original work, their characters are indeed distinct and each has its own charm! To vividly reproduce the beauty that could have been had in the main drama but was ruthlessly shattered by Kishimoto is the charm of Naruto fan fiction! ! ! ! It would be better if more beautiful moments of family and friendship could be described...! Love the author's writing style! No amount of this kind of plot is enough! Kishimoto is indifferent💔 I also like Kabuto Yakushi who has nothing to do with darkness after ending his undercover career in this article! Because his life in the original work was too painful, I saw his life under the care of love in this article - as long as he appears in the article, although it is just a description of ordinary daily life (such as working overtime as a social animal), but as long as he is there - I feel very relieved... Because this time he finally got the happiness he should have got and never lost it again! I feel like he specifically mentioned it several times during the invasion of Hidden Rain Village and the battle to collect the Eight-Tailed Two-Tails, and he was always laying the groundwork, but in the end the author finished the book in a hurry and it was completely useless! Angry! I like the internal story of the Uchiha family. I was surprised when Fugaku voluntarily gave up his position as the patriarch. Although I can't watch the fan story as a drama, but... I feel that Fugaku's image is much more vivid and three-dimensional in the author's description... In the battle with the Kumo ninja, the author added his original ability and highlight the plot. It also made me slightly change his image in the original work where he was entangled with an incompetent head and a rat and lack of courage... After all, his true intentions are indeed It's also for the family... (Personal guess: Is it because when he was a teenager or even earlier, the internal strife within the family caused so many Izanagi after the former patriarch Madara betrayed the family, the painful lessons caused by these things and the impact of the subsequent internal atmosphere of the family on him?) I like that Kurama Yakumo can finally make full use of his natural abilities, go shopping and watch movies with his friends and companions, and enrich his daily life with laughter! About the main character Uchiha Munesuru... I like his interaction with Shisui! ! At first, when I ate popsicles with different flavors, I was reminded not to talk nonsense about my eyes. Later, when I asked about Sogen Mangekyo in front of other people, Shisui winked and winked in a very cute way! Regarding the other gods, the coherent plot of Shisui struggling at first but being educated several times by Zongxian and finally choosing to give up the struggle is very interesting! Personally, I really like the scene where he was exhausted and wiped his bloody eyes after pupil surgery and threw the bloody tissue into the trash can. Zong Xian came in and burned the tissue and reminded him not to leave any flaws! ! Most people can write a cool outline, but what really distinguishes the author's skill is the level of detail in the dialogue, actions, psychological activities and other details of the characters in the plot according to their respective personalities! ! ! (Of course there are other factors, which I won't discuss here) The description of Shisui and his cooperation in battle is also great! The author's in-depth exploration of Shisui's character is also very eye-catching 🌹 Shisui was hungry and waiting for the meal. When he saw the civilians facing the pleasant-looking man, he still showed trepidation and thought. Before he could eat, he was killed by Orochimaru. The part where he invited Kimimaro to fight, put money on the table and suggested staying away from the village to fight, the part where he came back and sat down to continue eating after a brain-intensive battle, and the part where he took Kimimaro back to Kirigakure Village alone, made me really fall in love with the author's Shisui! ! I'm thinking about buying a bust of Shisui to put on the table... Zong Xian's pretentious plot is also pretty good hahaha, I like driving Gundam to fight Obito and Kumo ninja fighting in groups on the battlefield! ! I like the way he looks at the enemy with a high-spirited Uchiha fan! I like how he put on a Tiandao mask and revealed his reincarnation eye after Payne's attack was thwarted! I like the scene where he turns his back to Kabuto, who is confused, and opens his reincarnation eyes to see the rain outside the office window! As for why you open reincarnation to look at the scenery? There are so many reasons why in the school of pretense! Once the atmosphere is cool, that's it! Hahaha Except for the part where he was swearing at the police department at the beginning. It may be intended to be used as a modal particle for emphasis, similar to the word starting with f in English, but swearing is very meaningless. As a young clan leader, you are facing the clan members and the elders of the clan. It's okay to scold you, but swearing won't make you calm down. Adding on your young age, it will only appear to be very disrespectful to your fellow tribesmen, and you will become superficial and impetuous. Anyway, after I finished reading, I was still bothered by the unnecessary swearing in the first part of the article. If the author can accept the suggestion, just delete those few words. At least when readers read it later, their impression will not be degraded by the inexplicable swear words. In short... I was disgusted by the ending of Shippuden, so I quit Naruto a few years ago. As a result, I casually wandered around the starting point these past few days and found the author's article. After reading it, my enthusiasm for Naruto was rekindled, and I was fooled by the author's article! Hahaha... I immediately downloaded the Naruto mobile game (Zero Krypton) to play... The influence of the author is so terrifying! 🤭 (Explanation: Because I am relatively poor, I am not sure whether the subscription content is in line with my taste. I usually read the pirated articles first to evaluate them... If they are not suitable, I will discard them... If they are suitable, I will come back and make up for the full subscription... Next time there is a discount, I will top up and make up the rest!) Presenting my monthly pass! Thanks to the author for bringing me such a delicate touch through his creation! It would be better if they could update some daily extras hahahaha And delete the few hundred words of Kaguya at the end...! ! It's an anticlimax, but readers who really like this article and want to read it again will find it too frustrating! Disaster! By! Got it! ! 🥵🥵😆😆😆

Bold innovation, a different Naruto, definitely more passionate than Boruto 🙂

The author's writing is very good^o^~ Please update it quickly. I can't read it enough.

This book is one of the top three Naruto fanfics that I have read. It is not as exciting as the plot. It is not boring and the characters are well described. Danzo and Kakashi are the highlight in my opinion. After all, Kakashi cannot always be a scarecrow 😊

Well written. I find typing troublesome. But it's so cool to watch. It's hard for me to type.

The author's writing is great, and it ranks among the best among the many Naruto fanfics I have read. Unlike other fans, the protagonist is not like those useless protagonists who take the tired path of the Eight Gates of Technology or Orochimaru, but as a genius Uchiha, the Ninja Phantasm is fully developed. What's more important is that the protagonist not only has strength, but also has an aura of wisdom and intelligence, and his business is online. Moreover, from some of the plots in the book, it can be seen that the author is very serious in writing the book. He consulted the information and combined it with some of his own conjectures to write, so that it will not make people feel like a drama. For example, the name of the protagonist Mangekyo - Konohana Sakuya. As we all know, the names of the kaleidoscopes in Naruto are all Japanese gods, and Konohana Sakuya is taken from the name of the Japanese god of cherry blossoms. Also, the protagonist's golden fingers are not exaggerated, and are much more reasonable than those who constantly stop time to open treasure chests and jars. To be honest, those authors who write that the protagonist has a super-strong golden finger that seriously destroys the rationality of the world, like creating a core and popping a Gundam, have you really watched Naruto? Those readers, do you really like Naruto? In short, this author has hit my favorite points. I hope the author will continue to work hard and maintain this state to write a real Naruto book.

The protagonist should not have any burden if he opens the Mangekyō Sharingan and has the magic weapon Samehada to heal his body at any time. . .

I feel like there are more and more third-generation Hokages who are cheating. I personally feel that this is very similar to a phenomenon. A good person has done a lot of good things, but someone discovered that he has also done wrong things, so all his positive images are completely ruined. So he is smug and says that he has discovered the true image, and the good person has become a hypocrite. The reasons why I say this are as follows: 1. Who still remembers the final battle of the second-generation Hokage? When Danzo was still engaged in a fierce ideological struggle, Sarutobi chose me to end the throne without hesitation. Apart from others, Sarutobi really wanted to trade his own life for the survival of his companions and teacher. No one objected to this, right? 2. The black spot analysis begins. The first issue is Naruto's treatment. As the son of the fourth generation and the legacy of the hero who saved Konoha, Naruto's treatment is really criticized. So the third generation is a bastard? Why did the third generation do this? It's very simple that the third generation wants to control the Jinchuuriki. When a person gets a life-saving straw in despair, he will definitely hold on to it. This is human nature. Controlling the Jinchuuriki through this kind of human nature is the most reasonable explanation. This is very inhumane and challenges people's morality, but let's put it another way. In Naruto, the tailed beast is the nuclear bomb, and the jinchūriki is the unstable controllable nuclear bomb. The question is, if the nuclear bomb is not controlled by the supreme leader, then who should control it? Danzo or the Elders? And everyone should remember one of Iruka's memories. As soon as Iruka joined the ninja school as a teacher, he was the teacher of Naruto's class. Do you think this is not the arrangement of the third generation? And when Iruka was confused because of Naruto's problem, it was Sandai who gave him guidance. It can be said that the bond between Sandai and Naruto is utilitarian. The bond between Iruka and Naruto like a father and a brother is the mutual comfort of two people who are riddled with holes. The person who created this bond is Sandai. As a leader, Sandai is unqualified, because if the Sandai and Iruka have a conflict, then who will Naruto help? But what is there to criticize for Sarutobi as a person? 3. Black spot analysis 2. He gave up Orochimaru and chose Minato as the fourth Hokage because Minato was easier to control than Orochimaru, making it easier for the third generation to control Konoha behind the scenes. To be honest, I am a long-time conspiracy theory supporter, but when I see this argument, I want to laugh. Who is Minato? A commander who has experienced many battles and killed countless people on the battlefield. Any mistake or hesitation on the battlefield will cause unimaginable losses. Minato can lead the Konoha ninjas to victory after victory. His judgment and decisiveness will make him a puppet for the third generation? So the question is why Orochimaru can't become the fourth generation, and why can Minato become the fourth generation? Remember point 2 I said? Nuclear weapons must be in the hands of the supreme leader. The first generation of Kyuubi Jinchuuriki (I forgot the name) is her husband. The second generation Hokage is her brother-in-law. The third generation Hokage is his brother-in-law's apprentice and designated heir. They are all people she supports. So who does she support and get close to the second generation of Kushina Kushina? And with Orochimaru's personality, can he get along well with Kushina, who can detect people's hearts? What to do if a conflict occurs? So when Minato met Kushina, the aggressive and cold-blooded Orochimaru was out. The fourth generation could only choose the relatively gentle Tsunade and Minato's master Jiraiya. However, during this period, Tsunade had hemophobia, and Jiraiya's character... So who can the fourth generation choose? Only Minato (a typical example of twenty years less struggle). 4. Black spot analysis 3, the death of Konoha White Fang. Countless fan fictions have analyzed this point. This kind of conspiracy theory comes out randomly, what threatens the succession of the Hokage line, what threatens the rule of the third generation, etc., One by one uses Chinese values ​​​​to analyze Japanese affairs... Put aside all the fan fictions, only talk about comic information, White Fang gave up the mission for his companions, causing the mission failure to cause great losses to Konoha. No one questions these, right? Let's take a look at the thinking of Japanese samurai. What would they do? All the blame falls on me alone, and I apologize by committing seppuku. Then we see what the third generation did, Kakashi entered the Minato class. According to my third point of analysis, during the Third War, Minato was actually the only candidate for the Fourth Generation in the Third Generation's mind. Kakashi was basically a close confidant of the Fourth Generation and the future top management of Konoha. How could the Third Generation be sorry for the White Fang of Konoha? 5. Black spot analysis 4, treatment of Uchiha. A lot of the analysis here is based on my subjective speculation. First of all, it cannot be generalized. I think the third generation has three stages towards Uchiha. The first stage wants to integrate Uchiha. Examples include Uchiha Obito entering the Minato class (my arguments 3 and 4), Shisui and Itachi breaking tradition and entering Anbu (this can also be said to be the second stage), but it ended because of the death of Obito and Minato. In the second stage, estrangement appeared. Observation and surveillance wanted to solve this problem more peacefully. In fact, according to my analysis, Obito's death had a great impact. This represented the second failure of Konoha's senior management's plan to accept Uchiha (the first time was Kagami). Then the influence of the Nine-Tails Rebellion directly made the third generation lose the confidence to accept Uchiha. The death of the fourth generation caused a gap in Konoha's strength. The death of a large number of elite elites caused Konoha's internal and external troubles. And the Sharingan in Kyuubi's eyes intensified the conflict. How to solve it? The third generation acquiesced in Shisui's plan. This is my conclusion. The third generation acquiesced in Shisui's plan to use the kaleidoscope to brainwash Uchiha. As a result, Danzo destroyed the plan, Shisui committed suicide, and the second phase ended. This can also explain why Shisui was so easily attacked by Danzo. When the top management of Konoha, headed by the Third Generation, agreed to Shisui's suggestion, could Shisui have thought that Danzo, who was also one of the top executives, would take action from the beginning? Normal people would only consider silencing them afterwards, right? And Shisui's plan is basically the lowest cost, right? If it becomes a solution to the Uchiha problem, if it fails, it will lead to civil strife in the Uchiha. Whether it succeeds or not, it will be beneficial to Konoha. In the third stage, the genocide was ordered. Many fans said that the third generation pretended not to know about the night of Uchiha's genocide to prove that the third generation was a hypocrite. In fact, there are many places in the comics that Itachi made a deal with the top management of Konoha. The condition for Itachi's demise of the family was Sasuke's safety. So the question is, who is this top level? In fact, it is easy to guess. In the comics, just after the death of the Sandaime, Itachi returned to Konoha to show his face. Later in the comics, it was also said that it was to shock the top management of Konoha, and the top four except Sarutobi were all alive, so Itachi's trading partner could only be the Sandaime. I couldn't see any hypocrisy or selfishness in the Third Hokage's actions. I only saw Danzo's stupidity. He thought he had everything but was played and applauded by the Third Hokage. The last move he sent to clean up Itachi made Itachi legitimately join the Akatsuki organization as a spy for the Third Hokage. Danzo may not be that bad, but he is really stupid. Being stupid in his position is the original sin. 6. Black spot analysis 5, Hinata incident. There are different opinions on this matter on the Internet, but generally speaking, I think the Sandaime is weak. I think so too, but as an outsider, it is understandable. Does Konoha, which is suffering from internal and external troubles, really have the strength to be strong? Judging from the results, this weakness of the Third Generation did end the war and bought Konoha time to develop.

I can't stand it any more. Ever since I beat Pain and took away the Samsara Eye for nothing, the rest of the content fell apart after reading it for a few chapters while holding back my nausea. The author must be talented in writing, but the rest of the content is just a perfunctory mess. If you are not good at it from the beginning, and you pull your hips, I will think you are a loser and I will not read more than a hundred chapters of this book. The question is, what level are you in front of and what level are you in behind? You have to have ninety points in the early stage, right? In the later stage, you are not required to be 90%, but you must have 60% or 70%, right? Your whole forty-fifty-level thing is fooling people, right?

The battle against Kumogakure in the middle made me vomit. Before the protagonist arrived, the vanguard took the initiative to fight a decisive battle with other people's troops. Then the protagonist appeared for a total of one minute. Those who died in the front were all stupidly killed by the protagonist. If you have the strength, you don't have to wait for your tribe to die. Normal people will never take the initiative to fight in a decisive battle without weak troops and the absence of the main combat force. The protagonist is definitely not an ordinary idiot.

The writing was very good at the beginning, and it was eye-catching Later on, it started to pull my hips Recently, I don't even want to subscribe anymore Especially the plot with Ma, it's just rubbish

According to the author's knowledge, the idea that Samehada is the follower of the Three-Tails appears in the earliest batch of Naruto fan novels. The original manga did not mention the identity and origin of Samehada. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. If there is any clear evidence,,,,,, Please be gentle when you slap me in the face😂

To be honest, if the protagonist goes to fight Nagato and can't get a crushing round, the protagonist is fvv. Nagato uses other people's eyes to have a lot of side effects. He can't even use the special ability of the samsara eye. If he doesn't get crushed, it's a joke.

Looks good early on. The water started to flow in the middle and late stages. And it was extremely watery. I jumped to see it, but it didn't affect me at all. It's easy to write more than ten chapters. It kills the fun of reading too much. Just for me. If the protagonist of the novel does not appear for a long time, then there is no need to read the book. And what about this book? The early stage was okay. In the middle and late stages, there were more than a dozen pictures without people. So I gave up.

The protagonist's six-petal windmill kaleidoscope sharingan should be very vivid, right?

One thing to say, it's okay, but no matter what, the key is to persist. Maybe you won't be famous when you start writing, but generally if you can keep writing without unfinishing, the basic results will be okay.

I totally agree with Dalu Chaotian's evaluation, it was really amazing in the early stages. It's completely vulgar now. It's watering down without meaning. It's intentional delaying whether it's possible to kill or not. The author just wants to waste money and have a bottom line. It's so disgusting.

Drive high and go low, the front is okay, but the back is getting worse and worse.

Starting from the plot with Kazuma, it's crazy and ridiculous. It's so long and smelly. You think we should keep the villains who are named in the original work, but such a crazy and trouble-making trash should be kept for the New Year? I'll abandon the book if I don't resolve this garbage within ten chapters.

In fact, I have never understood why the Third Generation and Danzo wanted to attack Uchiha? It was as if he could continue to be Hokage for 100 years if he killed Uchiha. He was already in his 80s and failed to do anything when Konoha was at its strongest. His ambition only grew when he was weak. Danzo's ideas were also strange. You said you wanted to treat Uchiha like a dog, but the key point is that you can't pounce even if he treats you like a dog. You don't want to give out dog food, but you also want an obedient dog. That's not how Yun raised a dog. You said you only wanted to get the Uchiha for the sake of becoming the Hokage. You damn thing don't even have an heir. It's as if Danzo can live for 100 years even if he succeeds to the throne. It's like the Uchiha dug up his family's ancestral graves, doing things all day long. If Tsunade doesn't come back to inherit the position of the Hokage, the rest of the plot will be unfolded by God. I don't have any B-numbers in my heart. If you say profit distribution is the only way to engage in Uchiha, I have no choice but to accept it. What's the point of fighting for the interests of a village? Wouldn't it be nice for you to go out and buy a few acres of land and open a few shops? The harvest in the field will be given to bandits and robbers. It's as if the outside world belongs to you if you kill the people in the same village. You still complain about Uchiha's abnormal brain every day. Do normal people do this? If you tell me that I want to pick out some Sharingan for fun, I can only accept it. Well done, keep working hard. I have nothing more to say.

When Naruto's pants were torn, Sakura was the first to notice and patch them up for him, not Hinata. It was Sakura, not Hinata, who helped Naruto clean up his room. When Naruto suffered from insomnia and couldn't sleep, the one who stayed with him and promised to become stronger with him was Sakura, not Hinata. When Naruto was training in the rain, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who helped him make soldiers' food pills to accompany him in the rain. When Sai insulted Naruto, he punched the tree to pieces and warned that the next person to hit Sai would be Sakura, not Hinata. Naruto turned into a tailed beast. He knew he couldn't stop Naruto, so he ran up to stop him. However, he was beaten to death by Naruto who lost his mind. However, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who endured the pain silently for fear that he would blame himself. She felt guilty because Naruto was injured while saving her, and it was Sakura, not Hinata, who decided to become a medical ninja. When Naruto went through life and death, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who almost exhausted all his chakra to save him. Naruto introduced Sakura, not Hinata, as his girlfriend to his father. It was Sakura, not Hinata, who Minato said personally, "This girl really looks like Kushina." When Naruto makes a mistake, it's Sakura who stops him and tells him it's wrong, not Hinata who lets him go. When Naruto was hospitalized, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who came to visit him holding flowers. During the genin exam, it was Sakura who chose to uprightly give up the exam for Naruto's dream of becoming Hokage, instead of directly copying Hinata's answers to Naruto regardless of Kiba and Shino's life or death. When Naruto was sitting alone on the horizontal bar, it was Sakura, not Hinata, who held his hand. Kushina said, "Look for a girl like your mother, don't be snatched away by a strange woman." Naruto's first impression of Hinata was "a strange person." Minato said, "I'll leave my son to you." It was Sakura, not Hinata, who entrusted Naruto to her. Until now, mom and dad thought their daughter-in-law was Sakura, not Hinata. Kishimoto's original words, "I didn't want to write Naru Hina's love story at all." This is what you call an official match [laughs]​

It is said that black Zetsu is difficult to do, and all the fans are afraid of black Zetsu when they write about it, and they all brag about black Zetsu. In my opinion, Hei Jue is a piece of shit, a thousand years, not a thousand days. What did it do? The easiest way to solve Black Zetsu is to seal it. I'm just going to talk about the methods in anime, without any personal information. The six-path gourd, the ten-fist sword, the six-path box, the witch-type sealing technique, the whirlpool sealing technique, the inner sealing technique, etc. Are all fine. According to what you said, Black Zetsu is more powerful than the six paths, so it still can't be solved?

The author of this book yesterday became a disciple of a book and a deacon of a book. This book has not been updated for eighteen days.

Could you please write down the ending before we talk about it?

When reading the book, you have to turn to the last chapter to see if it is a eunuch, otherwise it is a waste of money.

Why did I only know he was a eunuch at the end?

After reading more than 60 chapters, my relationship with this novel has run out. This book gave me a good first impression, but the subsequent plot development route is "pretending to be slapped in the face and getting killed", which is okay, but for this reason, the characters in the fanfic are too different from the original characters. I think it is a Naruto fanfic. If the third Hokage is not an easy-going old man, even if this is just his superficial image, the third generation's true appearance should not be a clown full of violence. This kind of role should be played by Danzo.

Sure enough, it's a eunuch. Fortunately, I took a look at the progress bar. How can I find a novel that is almost finished but still hasn't advanced the main plot?

In the parallel world line where four generations are still alive, the Uchiha family resolves their conflicts and gets out of their predicament in their happy daily lives~