Immortal in Ten Steps

Upgrade I feel that this book is not about upgrading, but about the end of each paragraph. From the beginning it was 50/50 with the evil spirit of the mountain god, to the 50/50 with the white tiger in the middle, and now it is 50/50 with the suspected big medicine winged demon. No one can beat the protagonist, and no one can be killed. In fact, we can vaguely see that the protagonist is getting stronger and upgrading. There's nothing wrong with that. The point is that if Hedao Jade is used as a node to divide chapters into chapters, it seems that no story has an end. I think the mountain god at the beginning is the best written, not because he got the Hedao Jade, but because this story has an ending, the evil spirit is suppressed again, and there is foreshadowing, and it will start again in the future. Is the City God really ordinary? The reversal of the City God? Do you think I haven't watched Conan? Prince? It's really the old-fashioned way of filling a cup. On the contrary, it is the end of resentment. This kind of unseen but well-founded research is the unique charm of "classical" Xianxia. But the final Yin-Yang Pot, Yin-Yang Pill, and Pangolin, you will know just by reading the book reviews. You can't just leave it alone. It has a beginning and an end, and it is impossible to convince everyone by just saying "that is foreshadowing." We readers are not saying that we must have Hedao Jade. If it were the routine of encountering, taking, and upgrading every time, we would have run away. But we need an explanation. What did the pangolin say? Why did Zhengtai Baihu run away after being kissed? Why does the protagonist have to go to the capital? Did I miss a chapter? Why did it suddenly end? Did the protagonist lose his memory or did I? Isn't this just a bad ending? Reading this book always feels like reading a series, it's still a daily series, and it's all over without doing anything Anyway, come on, maybe I'll switch to a light novel.

Cultivation: The golden elixir destroys the country, the Nascent Soul lifts the continent, transforms into a god and collapses the stars, merges into the sun, overcomes the tribulation and crushes the supernova, the Mahayana half-immortal is like a black hole, the true realm, the main realm in the universe. The immortal body can swallow the Milky Way, and the true immortal body is immortal. Daluo Jinxian is like the way of heaven, and his ability to create things is beyond human. The great universe above Luotian, the nine-level universe transforms into a mysterious being. Break through time to become the Immortal King, cut off time to become the Immortal Emperor. The immortal time turns into points, and half a step of eternity becomes the source. Reopen the chaos of time and space, and eternal life is God. Stepping into time and space, your true destiny will change with you. The gods are only minor overlords, and only the main god can obtain the source of chaos. Great Chaos is the God King, and Eternal Chaos creates the God Emperor. Endless chaos attains the status of god. Breaking through the infinite is not a saint, a half-saint can reach the sky with one step. In the process of Hongmeng becoming a saint, it became clear that there was no trace of the saint until nothingness existed. It is impossible to ascend the dimension, so I can only break through the gaps between dimensions. My past body was in the fifth dimension (in nothingness), and my physical body was sandwiched between the fifth and sixth dimensions. Every moment is countless times stronger than the last. And my soul is in the sixth dimension (this is a world of rules, an incredible realm, I can lift myself!!!) And my true meaning seems to have disappeared after breaking through the six dimensions. Various ultimate existences, omnipotence, invincible systems, etc., You are only under the sixth dimension. Everyone, do you want to get in the car? I can send you to the sixth dimension, only I can! The gap between dimensions is so lonely!

This book is still flesh and blood, and some book friends need not be so aggrieved. From another point of view, the more you jump around, the more it shows that this book still has merits 😁 After all, you have already withdrawn this book, which is really worthless, so how can you come here to criticize it? However, again, the frustration is too high, the sense of gain is too low, and the plot line is too scattered. This protagonist always gives people the feeling of "stealing a chicken but losing a handful of rice". If this continues, readers may really lose.

Modern people have basically achieved some of the ancient magical abilities, that is, it costs money to cast spells, fly to the sky and escape from the earth → plane and subway, carry items and change food → Taobao and Meituan, longevity → the life span of modern people is X2 × 3 × 4 compared to the average life span of ancient times, see thousands of miles → video, and know the world without leaving home → mobile phone network. The meal style is a bit difficult, drinking various nutritional solutions,

The author's story settings are excellent, whether it's the Seven-Two Methods or the Ten-Step Immortal But probably after finishing the plot of City God, I feel like I don't have an outline to let myself go, and the plot is coming up one after another. Small plots come one after another without any improvement. The protagonist's personality is too exciting, and the whole story is filled with dialogue. Can this bring out the protagonist's personality and abilities? In other words, the scattered plots that follow serve to expand the world view. It feels like writing casually but taking it seriously. For the first sixty or so chapters, I could still read them word for word. Later, I felt like I was just using my speaking time to talk about settings and concepts. This was too draining on the audience, and I felt that the whole story was nonsense. It is naturally good to have a connection between the two plots, but all the plots in the nearly forty chapters since Cheng Huang are too fragmented. I can hardly see a big plot (or maybe I am not reading the text carefully). There is also the matter of the author depositing the manuscript, which is naturally very good, but if there is no connection, it doesn't matter, and the previous plot is not as good as nothing. I hope the author will bring you a good novel. What I said is all nonsense, so keep up the good work.

It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless. The protagonist tries to show off, pretends to be a coward, and tries to show off his virginity. It's so embarrassing that the more you watch it, the less interesting it becomes.

I went to Chiji for recommendations twice, hoping to have some effect. This result is not worthy of this book

Congratulations, you have gone to Sanjiang, but I have to remind you that after you have gone to Sanjiang, there will be more people to come and see. The more people there are, the more opinions there will be. There are people with all kinds of tastes. Please don't pay too much attention to what the people in the book review area say. Don't compete in the book review area. It's not necessary. They will run away after they are happy. You still have to write an update Also, there is a saying called Bi Xian and I Poison. Every book has its own potential readers. You have to What you do is to write the follow-up plot well and leave more potential readers, so that your grades will be good. What is the use of online book review area? The only realization after so many years on the Internet is that you cannot convince others If you are afraid of affecting your grades, then the book review area should be more strict. Just delete the book reviews that are too negative and inexplicable. If you don't have time, I will come, I have a lot of time, and I haven't managed the book review area for a long time.

Now that I have seen the latest chapter, let me give you a personal summary after reading it. Currently, I have divided the more than 100 chapters into the Beginner's Chapter, the Mountain God Chapter, the River God Chapter, the City God Chapter, the Ghost King and the White Tiger Chapter, and the Plague Ghost Chapter that has not yet been completed. Apart from the Epidemic Ghost Chapter that is still being written, I think the best one is the City God Chapter, and the worst is the Ghost King Chapter. And the White Tiger Chapter, let's rank them in order from best to worst: City God Chapter, Mountain God Chapter, First Entry Chapter, River God Chapter, Ghost King and White Tiger Chapter First Entrance Chapter: From the beginning to meeting the Mountain God, I personally think it is a very good beginning, straight to the point, without so much nonsense, and explained very well It was clear, so I read it right away. The beginning is quite important to me. Many novels are abandoned because I can't read it at the beginning The Mountain God Chapter: from getting lost in the mountains to getting on the boat to cross the river, it connects to the first chapter. Personally, I think the transition is very good. I went to Chiji to recommend the book because This article has the charm of a classical fairy tale, whether it is the Five Demons or the Yin Soldiers Marching, it is full of charm Jiang Shen Chapter: This should not be regarded as an article, but a short story. The purpose is just to introduce Jiang Shen and explain some background settings City God Chapter: What happened in Xiahai County The story, in my opinion, is the best one I have written so far. Although I did not get the pangolin's Hedao Jade, the city god's reversal, the appearance of the prince, the information left by the local cultivators, and the feedback of the spell when used are all present in this article. It has both plot, setting details, and jokes, but It can be said to be the best one The Ghost King and the White Tiger Chapter: The most controversial one at present, and probably the one with the most discarded books. To be honest, it is also the one with the lowest evaluation here. The reason for my negative review is not because other book friends in the book review area said that they did not take Hedao Jade, the protagonist Our Lady, etc. Etc. The main reason is that there are too many stalks, which are relatively watery, and the plot advances slowly. Although there is a lot of useful information, it is not as good as the previous articles The Epidemic Ghost Chapter: Although it has not been finished yet, the current plot has the flavor of the City God Chapter. The plot, stalks, settings, and new things are combined It's quite good. If I can maintain this level and finish this story, I think it can compete with the City God Chapter for first place Advice to new book friends: As the saying goes, everyone is attracted to their own eyes, and others are poisonous. Whether a book is good or not, you still need to read it carefully by yourself, and don't be too influenced by the comment area.

Author, you must recognize the form and do not be an enemy of the people. There is no way out for eunuchs.