One Piece: Followed by Misfortune

The male protagonist's sister is too strong! She only ate a fruit, yet she was able to block the great swordsman's attack?

Where did chapters two, three, eight, nine, and ten go?

You can write about disasters, but it can't be all about them, otherwise it'll become a disaster fruit instead of a misfortune fruit. If you only focus on disasters, the later parts are likely to fall apart and run out of material. It's just a mixed naturalistic genre, which many novels have.

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What utter garbage! The sister is the captain? And the main character is lazy? I watch One Piece for fun, right? This is so frustrating, so many bad points, I'm forced to quit.

If all disasters can be considered misfortune, then this fruit is equivalent to countless aggregates of natural elements. Does the Misfortune Fruit have the same limitations as the Luck Fruit, such as restrictions on the amount transferred and released?

The protagonist in Chapter One is 12 years old this year, and then he transmigrated to this world 15 years ago?! Seriously?!

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Your "Misfortune Fruit" should be superior to the "Lucky Fruit" from the movie. The "Lucky Fruit" only allows you to steal someone's luck by touching them, making them unlucky but not fatal. Yours, after awakening, should be able to do even better than the "Lucky Fruit."

The author's imagination is too limited. "Misfortune" equals "ominous" and "despair," a very broad term. More specifically, it refers to pain, sadness, and bad luck, which are related to emotions. This ability is incredibly overpowered. Being robbed, having your wallet stolen, or choking on cold water are all examples of misfortune.