One Piece: Saving Onigashima Starts with Becoming an All-Star

Your last book was great, but this one, the Silence-Silence Fruit... You should do a survey. Audiences like powerful Devil Fruits, nobody likes wildly imaginative ones. Oda has already proven you wrong; the saying "There are no weak Devil Fruits, only weak people" is a paradox. Strong Devil Fruits are strong, weak Devil Fruits are weak. Give Doflamingo a Logia or Mythical Zoan type and he'd be practically invincible. But with the String-String Fruit, he's only on par with a top-tier member.

This book had great potential if written two years ago, but Oda has already betrayed you. A Devil Fruit's strength is strength, and its weakness is weakness; there's no such thing as wild speculation. 😭

All I can say is that the Silence-Silence Fruit is weak, it makes no sense. It can only silence sounds, so you can only snipe a bullet out of range and still hear the wind. As for eliminating vibrations, that's pure fan fiction nonsense. When has One Piece ever talked about physics? Not to mention, in the story, they even used rocket launchers to explain their abilities.

Is it trendy in One Piece fanfiction to have characters eat trashy Devil Fruits now? Is it really that hard to create your own Mythical Zoan type?

Honestly, these kinds of wildly imaginative ideas just bore me. Eliminating sound becomes eliminating vibration, and then they come up with a "Plasma Separation Technique"—what's the difference between that and the nonsensical nonsense in Yu-Gi-Oh! Anime? Even though the card doesn't explicitly state this effect, I feel it has it. If this is really going to happen, what's the point?

The protagonist is supposed to be a transmigrator, so why does he seem like a complete novice? It's so awkward.

I've noticed that with your writing style, the first half is always great, but the ending is terrible, which is really frustrating ╯╰.

It feels like the author just had a brain fart and wanted a trending topic... The original character needed the Silence-Silence Fruit to infiltrate an undercover operation; what does the protagonist need the Silence Fruit for? Their needs are completely different. You're going to eat a Silence Fruit in the Beastmen's Kingdom? Seriously, what a load of nonsense. It's not what you're looking for.

Isn't this the worst Devil Fruit that Doflamingo's brother ate? Another one with this wildly imaginative plot twist? A weak Devil Fruit is weak, and a strong Devil Fruit is strong. This one should be considered a lower-tier version of the Invisible Fruit.

Your intentions are good; there's a slight craze for joining Kaido's side right now. However, in a world where everyone in One Piece has overpowered abilities, ordinary people are destined to be outmatched, especially those who ate the Silence-Silence Fruit. This fruit has already been largely exploited; at most, it can only counter things like the Tremor-Tremor Fruit. Exploiting it further would make readers uncomfortable.