One Piece: Saving Onigashima Starts with Becoming an All-Star

Your last book was very good, this one is Fruit of Silence. . , You should do a survey. Audiences like to watch powerful fruits, but no one likes to watch imagination. Oda has already slapped you in the face. The saying that there are no weak fruits, only weak people, is a paradox. A strong fruit is strong, and a weak fruit is weak. If you give Doflamingo a natural type or animal type fantasy beast, he will be basically invincible. A line fruit can only match the strength of the big board.

This book was written two years ago and is very promising, but you have already been stabbed in the back by Oda. If the fruit is strong, it is strong or weak. There is no such thing as imagination 😭

All I can say is that the Silence Fruit is weak. It doesn't make any sense. It can silence the sound, so it can be used as a sneaky sniper. There is still a sound of wind when the bullet is out of range. As for eliminating vibration, it is pure nonsense. When did Pirates ever talk about physics? Not to mention that in other plots, in order to explain the ability, people are shooting rocket launchers. If this can eliminate the vibration... It can be stopped directly. In the past, it was just a smashing and digging. Of course, if you develop the concept, I didn't say it. After all, the chain fruits next door are directly playing the gene chain. If you want to directly play the power of my thinking, it is better to directly create the original fruit, and talk about atomic development... I just want to ask who is the boss?

Is it popular among pirate fans to eat garbage fruits now? Is it difficult to make up your own fantasy beast species?

To be honest, using such whimsical ideas makes me feel bored. It eliminates sounds, eliminates vibrations, and performs a technique of peeling off the original world. What is the difference between it and the mustache in the Yu-Gi-Oh anime? Although this effect is not written on this card, I think he will have it if he has it. To put it bluntly, can frozen fruit be frozen to absolute zero? Couldn't the Line Fruit be used to play with the timeline? The three sisters of fate in Nordic mythology are the loom of fate. Isn't fate also a thread? What is the difference between the Thunder Fruit and the Magnetic Fruit, which produce electricity and magnetism?

Isn't the protagonist a time traveler? How come he is with a chick? It's so awkward.

I can tell when you write a book, you always write well in the early and middle stages, but when you get to the later stages, the ending falls apart. Anyway, it's very uncomfortable╯╰.

It feels like the author just wants a hot topic... People want the Silence Fruit to be an undercover agent. Why does the protagonist want Silence? The needs are different. Are you enjoying the silence in Beasts? Really talented. The goods are not right. They keep talking about special races. After reading a few chapters, I feel that you might as well write about a long-haired tribe and eat them all. Then go to sleep in an ancient town and eat vampire fruits. Add orcs to fantasy beast species. Increase the upper limit of swallows. The martial arts faction among the fighting factions. In the pirate group where the strong respects the strong, and then take control of the big river. The future is bright.

Isn't this the most rubbish fruit that Brother Ming and his younger brother ate? Another imaginative idea? A weak fruit is a weak fruit, and a strong fruit is a strong fruit. This fruit should be regarded as the inferior fruit of the invisible fruit.

Your starting point is good. There is now a small craze to join Kaido's camp. However, in a world where pirates are cheating, ordinary people are destined to be unable to wake up, let alone ordinary people who have eaten the Silence Fruit. This fruit has been almost fully developed. At most, you can only restrain the Shock Fruit and the like. No matter how you develop it, it will cause discomfort to readers.