In Swallowed Star, I Became Luo Feng's Golden Finger

It feels okay. In the first few pictures, I saw the protagonist deducting nine levels of energy and saving it. I feel that I don't have a long-term perspective. Later, I can understand. The energy is too little every time and I can't give anything good. I save it and give it to Luo Feng for something better.

Goodbye Jianghu, the biggest flaw is that as a Devouring fan, the writing is too detailed, you think you are original 😦, reading this book is just to tease out the differences in the plot. I saw a reader say before that he thought the book was very interesting even though he had never read Swallowed. It's hard to describe in one sentence 🙂. If it were original, it would be fine to fill in the details, but what you wrote is a fan, the author

The strength of all created items that appear in this book has nothing to do with the world where the items come from! Nothing to do! ! Nothing to do! ! ! Because the protagonist creates items based on the ideas and thoughts in his mind, it needs to be consistent with his own reality. For example: the protagonist consumes energy in the Devouring Starry Sky to create the Storm Devil Fruit based on the One Piece Devil Fruit setting. Then the strength of this Storm Devil Fruit depends entirely on how much energy the protagonist wants to consume. It consumes less energy, so it may be just an ordinary talent that can affect the wind. If it consumes a lot of energy, the being who eats this fruit may gain a very powerful wind attribute talent. Even the protagonist is able to create a light and wind dual attribute devil fruit that combines the storm fruit and the light fruit. After eating it, he has both the light attribute law talent and the wind attribute law talent. Another example: the protagonist creates the elf 'Pikachu' in Pokémon. According to the expressive power of Pikachu in Pokémon, it is certainly impossible to break the continent with one punch, right? But if the protagonist has enough energy, he can completely create a Pikachu who has the talent for the law of thunder and lightning comparable to the peak starry sky beast, can reach the level of Realm Lord in adulthood, can release billions and billions of... Million volts, and makes a living by devouring all kinds of powerful thunder and lightning in the universe'! Everyone should understand this, right? I don't want to write a book later when I write about talents and treasures derived from novels and animations, and some people will criticize me, saying things like, 'This thing is so awkward in the animation, it doesn't even explode stars, it's just random writing. Once again, the protagonist is not something taken from the world of animation, novels, or movies, but is created based on his own ideas. So, I don't want to see that when I write about the skills and items in a certain novel, someone will jump out to compare whose world view is greater and whose combat effectiveness is stronger. This is meaningless, you know?

Seeing that the only one who is a little bit embarrassed at the moment is the cat girl, everyone knows this, she has white hair and red eyes, but why did you write so greasyly, and why did you come up with a reason to help Luo Feng work as a detector and use Luo Feng as a shield? Do you think readers are stupid? Does anyone know what the hell the cat girl wants to do? The name is not very good either. Isn't chocolate or vanilla ten or even nine times more powerful than energy? What are you pretending to be? Why, you have to say, I have a friend who wants to be enlightened? As for the protagonist's character, let's put it this way, as long as you don't write the protagonist as a little brat, there won't be any problems. Goldfinger is incredibly strong, which is the guarantee for the character's character. But if you make the protagonist more abstract, a brat, and Goldfinger, you can't keep the character, and the cat girl thing is not good. I have read more than 300,000 words so far, and the entry point is OK. Luo Feng can have a better start, and there will be no regrets if the start goes smoothly. As for tempering and entering the virtual universe, there are plenty of opportunities within the company. Anyway, don't be overwhelmed by the rest of the book, this book feels like it's going to be interesting.

Cat girls are boring, not as good as Elu Cat. In other words, the protagonist who created cat girls has a sissy smell, the kind that lies on the bed with mugwort.

The main task at present is to break away from Luo Feng, not to create any companionship

The author's soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving a long whip and setting up six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... And singing over the mountains... Is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul is back... Singing high and triumphant... And sharing the same robe with all the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back… 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌​

Overall it was ok. It's a pity that it just leaves you free. I have to rub that pussy out.

Let's fill that cat girl's trap. Cats can go to the outside world, why can't the protagonist? If it doesn't work, you can make up for it by having a barrier.

One chapter a day, your breathing is wrong 🙂