Swallowed Star: Lord of the Mind

I haven't watched it yet. After reading the synopsis, I want to ask, what's the point of changing the fate of the Earth? With Luo Feng around, the fate of the Earth is already very good, and the future is infinitely bright. What are you going to change?

Hello everyone, I am War God Li Yao. My son was murdered in the wilderness. After investigation, I found several suspects. With the mentality of "better to kill the innocent than let the guilty go free", I killed them all. The last one I killed was named Luo Feng, a mentalist. He was quite difficult to kill! A colossal yellow monster ravaged the globe, plunging the world into fear.

What's the point of creating an organization in the early stages of a world like this? Improving your own strength is the most important thing.

Seeing the genius standings is a bit speechless. Hong and Lei Shen, both beginners in the Time Law, are ranked over 100th in the first round? They still have to run away when they encounter Rong Jun, who's only at the beginner level in the Space Law? And the protagonist's understanding of the laws... Only sixth?? What's he doing?

I'm disgusted. Don't waste a good book like this. What kind of crappy faction are you building? Can your faction even compare to the virtual universe?

I'd like to comment on the protagonist's highly contradictory personality. In his previous life, the protagonist started his own business and had a fairly profitable company, so he could be considered a successful person. Such a successful man should have high IQ and EQ, right? Author, you also mentioned in chapter 100 that the protagonist was also a social expert. It's inappropriate to give such a genius with high IQ and EQ a personality that's like a clueless, low-IQ straight man, isn't it?

This level of writing is so bad it makes me cringe. I have no idea how the author managed to produce it!

After reading the first few dozen chapters, all I could think about was the protagonist, and I kept thinking things like "Damn it!" And "Holy crap!" Especially "Damn it!", Could you please write less of that? At least the Lord of the Mind should be a little more mature, right? Was this the kind of mentality a company boss had before his rebirth?

#Swallowing the Starry Sky# As of August 1st, this is the fan fiction that is still being serialized.

Since the book is titled "Lord of the Mind," the protagonist should be strong in mental attacks, right? Also, the world of Devouring is all about strength. In the original story, as long as Luo Feng was alive, no one dared to touch his family. But once news of his disappearance spread, anyone could attack his family. So, power and influence are basically meaningless.