The Alchemist's Everyday Life in Another World

It has a stable brand name and is unique in everything it does. It is so stable that it can open a store, arrange for a princess to support it, and directly sell a semi-artifact. The author's aura of showing off is everywhere.

1. The previous story about Middle-earth was very good 2. After opening the store, it was lagging 3. There are too many big paragraphs, it is recommended to use one short sentence per paragraph 4. The characters are inconsistent. The previous Middle-earth gave people a calm personality, doing things in an orderly manner, and planning and planning; after opening the store, the character jumped out 5. Apprentices can make sub-artifacts, which makes people feel that sub-artifacts are worthless That's probably what comes to mind. If the style of the early Middle-earth period can be maintained, the writing style can be polished, and the layout can be revised, at least this book will not be a hit.

Talking about the industrial revolution replacing extraordinary professions in the extraordinary world is actually just the arrogance of those of us who are scientific supremacists. Ordinary ancient warriors cannot wear thick enough armor to fight, so firearms brought them to an end, but what about extraordinary warriors? The bulletproof armor is enough, and they are equipped with a revolving Vulcan. Are ordinary soldiers' firearms still useful? The extraordinary knight's mount must also be an extraordinary species, otherwise speed and load-bearing would be difficult. It has super mobility, thick armor, and strong reflexes. A grenade thrown into the barrel or exhaust port can replace a tank. Which is easier to build, a tank or a grenade? Not to mention low-level spells such as Fossil to Mud and Grease. Extraordinaries are powerful because of themselves and not their items. What will happen when they are equipped with modern weapons? Many people always like to use modern technology to crush extraordinary beings with primitive weapons, as if these human elites are fools who don't know how to adapt. And the strongest ability of the extraordinary is decapitation. What would a legion that has lost its command do like this? So his father is still his father. The prerequisite for becoming a high-ranking general is a transcendent. Otherwise, he will probably die before reaching the battlefield... Think about what it would be like to shrink the cannonball into the size of a bullet and have it shot out by a professional ranger with a big sniper from a thousand or two kilometers away? The target is still someone else's headquarters. Druid doesn't need to have any awesome effects to change the weather, he can just change the wind direction to direct the artillery's aim. To put it bluntly, mainstream attack skills and magic will be replaced by auxiliary skills to strengthen industrial products to achieve the effect of one plus one being greater than two.

The first few chapters were quite good, then I opened a shop, met a princess, and inexplicably started to lose my wits, and slowly turned into dog licking (dog licking is really disgusting), and my good mood suddenly disappeared 😒. I felt like vomiting when I saw this dog licking. The male protagonist paid a lot of money and received almost zero reward. According to what the author wrote It is estimated that the hero will have to hesitate for a while if he wants to marry the princess. There is also Monica. The hero not only gives away equipment and money, but also saves lives. She is not even willing to reveal her identity. On the surface, she is afraid of being involved. In fact, she just does not regard the hero as her own. The hero may be just a tool with some emotions.

The previous writing was quite good, and some minor contradictions were explained later. However, this chapter felt like the character design was a bit broken. The protagonist was set as a man in his 40s before time travel. As mentioned before, the value of the weapons made by the protagonist. And the protagonist didn't just wear it, but has been wearing it for many years. Then his world background at that time should be relatively clear. Take modern times as an example to buy a bag worth tens of thousands of yuan for a girlfriend. Boys may do it, but it is basically impossible to spend tens of thousands of yuan to buy a pair of shoes for a brother-in-law, and he is not considered a brother-in-law. I'm talking about the girlfriend, and the princess is not the hero's girlfriend yet. Isn't this character design a bit too great? And the princess's brother gives me the feeling that he looks down on the protagonist and just wants to get benefits from the protagonist. If you chase my sister, you must be good to me. Even if you lose everything, you must be good to me. Earlier, I thought it was reasonable for the protagonist to refuse to make weapons for the princess' brother, but later on, it felt like the protagonist was really being licky. I know that there are always a few unlikable characters in every book, but I hope that the protagonist can be more reasonable and objective when dealing with these unlikable characters. When the princess came out, I liked this female character better, but later on, it felt more and more similar to the female characters in other novels. It was almost a template, which was very annoying. And the protagonist's attitude towards female characters is almost the same as in other novels. It seems that all women are the same, giving women a one-sided stereotype. In fact, I hope the author can seriously consider it. If he cannot grasp the female characters well, he should not add too many female characters in it. This will ruin a seemingly good novel. In fact, I don't object to some stallion or harem novels, but as long as you can portray the female characters in them well and the various characters in them, then it's OK. And I don't care too much about the clichéd plot, but I can't let people feel that this novel of yours is familiar with other novels.

The protagonist can make money by making anti-corrosive coagulants, and all he needs to do is make some juice. If the world where the protagonist lives is similar to the Middle Ages, then there must be scurvy. I don't know if people in the world set by the author know about it. Fruits and vegetables can treat scurvy.

After reading 70 pictures, I personally think the poisonous part is: when the protagonist faces a "smart" enemy, both the enemy and the protagonist will appear to be talking nonsense, and even reveal their secrets to each other, as if they are afraid that the other party does not know.

The sub-artifact was sold for 500 gold coins? It's a pity that I didn't sell it on my knees, or I paid money and begged the princess to accept it.

The idea is good, but the concept is too bad. The protagonist is written as a licking dog, and the kind of licking is also done on the knees. It's a pity that the beginning is amazing.

I'm not going to change the person. The style has changed. The opening chapter was quite amazing.