The Rivers, Mountains, Wind, and Moon of the Five Dynasties

Zhao Kuangyin has his own ten brothers in the charity society, and it is not easy to get into that circle. After all, the Shi family can be regarded as a direct descendant of the Later Zhou Dynasty. It is difficult to say that Zhao Kuangyin would be trusted if he really voted for him. It's better to support the little emperor, and when the time is right, another wave of yellow robes will come to join him and give Guo Rong a few sons glory and wealth.

The next step should be to attack Qinzhou of Later Shu and Huainan of the Southern Tang Dynasty. I will share a few maps

There are a lot of little nuggets in the front of this book, can't it be revised? 1 The protagonist's mother fled alone to avoid being raped. 2. The protagonist doesn't know Chinese characters. Is it difficult to use traditional Chinese characters? Some people don't know what's normal. 3 Killing the ears is better than killing the head to record merit. Why didn't the Central Plains Dynasty do this? 4 Opening your mouth to call your lord, these five generations are really different.

Come on, come on, let's choose a heroine from historical celebrities (ps: The author has a heroine in mind anyway, and won't change it) 1. Queen Da Fu (Guo Ronglu) 2. Queen Xiao Fu (Guo Rong...) 3. Mrs. Huarui (Meng Changlu) 4. Empress of the Great Zhou Dynasty (Li Yulu) 5. Empress of the Small Zhou Dynasty (Li Yu...) 6. Xiao Zhuo (still young, can only go to Liao Kingdom to rob, Yelu Xianlu) 7. Empress Li (still young, Zhao Erlu) Additions welcome

I've only read a dozen chapters, but this little bit of poison 😅 1. Your officer, you stabbed him, but I thought he was a ruthless person? As a result, he went to the battlefield and was submissive. 2. To maintain order at the ferry, you don't want money when others give it. Your argument is a bit persuasive and I can accept it. The common people still stuff things to the soldiers, but I just can't understand. Damn it, in troubled times, I don't have enough to eat, and I don't want money, but I still stuff things to the soldiers. How is it possible? 3. Arrange the funeral arrangements and give the remaining money to the woman. Will she go to the battlefield to protect you from the knife or give you advice? Giving the remaining money to the brothers probably won't be enough. You can use the money to treat the brothers to a nice meal, talk about some good things, and draw some cookies. Isn't he good? That is to say, with this background, having personal soldiers, and working alone, I don't know where my head fell. 4. You save your father's lap, I understand. After that, practice writing and martial arts, and read more military books. Damn it, let me read the comments. They are complete trash. 😅

Iron-Blooded Strong Song

How can I put it this way? This novel is readable and pretty good. There are just some logic issues. 1. You said you were going to taint yourself, but in the end you gave all the beauties rewarded by the emperor to your subordinates. Please note that they were rewarded by the emperor. Do you think the emperor is a fool? Will you ignore it after I reward you? The most appropriate thing to do is to keep it. If you don't want it, you can keep it as a vase. When the emperor dies, you can buy it for your subordinates, or you can keep one for yourself and give the rest to your subordinates. It's so obvious that you're trying to win people's hearts, and you've even given it to your subordinates directly. Aren't you blaspheming yourself? You are tantamount to rejecting a beautiful woman in front of the emperor, and trying to win people's hearts in front of the emperor. The emperor must be thinking, are you lying to him? 2. You almost always spend your own money to reward the army, or there is a chapter where you spend your own money to train scouts. My brother, you are too brave. The emperor is still here, how dare you pay for your own training? ? What's the difference between your military training at Yuan Datou's small station? Tell others openly that you are trying to win people's hearts and want to rebel, and do you really think that officials in ancient times were fools? ? Everyone knows that the most important thing in the army is rewards and punishments. You have directly obtained the emperor's right to rewards. How can the emperor not doubt you? 3. There were too many typos in the early stage, but I can still read it. I hope the author will make a big change. I say this because I really hope you can write it well. After all, I have been following it. I hope you can understand.

The character of Zhao Shijian is a failure. The protagonist is a teacher and a time traveler, but there is no maid who can see the situation clearly? Is the author a feminist? The protagonist in the author's novel is a complete insult to the profession of teacher. Although it is ancient times and although you have traveled through time, you are flirting with a little girl all day long. The content of the letter is completely an insult to the teacher's ethics. If it is so easy for people to misunderstand, the protagonist also feels like a bit of a gangster, which is completely compatible with the teacher. Not to mention, the teacher I know doesn't talk about emotional intelligence, but has a good understanding of literature. The protagonist in the author's novel can't even write... I just want to laugh. This book is a failure. The teacher's template is doing things like a gangster. The heroine's template IQ suppresses the protagonist, a teacher who has lived in two generations. This book is too poisonous.

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I have nothing to say about the writing. Apart from the protagonist, the other characters are also well created. The downfall is that the IQ of the protagonist does not match. The librarian is a teacher. Being a teacher now is very demanding. Many logics do not match the character. It is often repeated that the protagonist is a history teacher. It feels like mouse shit. I had forgotten it, but the author often mentioned this mouse shit. Don't you know that the gap between your teacher character and the protagonist's logical IQ is too big. In summary, the author is either a college student or a recent graduate.