The Rise of the Heir

The prime minister's granddaughter, Gillian, and his wife, Gillian, did not make him the queen, nor did he make He Qian, but she said she wanted to make Shiyu, who was born in a brothel, the queen. Is there something wrong with her brain?

I saw Chapter 540, and I don't know how I persisted. To be honest, I recognize the author's efforts and believe that the author definitely wanted to write it well. However, seeing it now, I really have something to say. 1. Regarding the names of the protagonist and supporting characters in the book, I feel that the author just rolled the dice and came up with it without any intention at all. Many of the names are incomprehensible. 2. There are so many typos, and some are even wrong from beginning to end. The most impressive ones, such as "None of my business", are typed as "It's none of my business" from beginning to end. I won't mention the others. I believe readers know what they are. 3. There is almost no military common sense. For example, when we went south to counter the rebellion, a team of tens of thousands of civilians was able to quietly reach the edge of the rebel camp without being discovered. Moreover, if the rebel scout was killed, just kill him, but did the rebel camp of tens of thousands send just one scout? ? Then I was also drunk when the rebels fought back. They fought back to the camp only to find that the camp had been burned to rubble? ? Even if it is a surprise attack, a small number of scouts should be sent out to conduct reconnaissance first. Furthermore, 200,000 troops attacked the city of Nanjing and were defeated by a surprise attack by a few hundred men. But when the vanguard of the former army or the commander of the Chinese army got the news, didn't they immediately send three to two thousand men to support them? ? If you think about it with your knees, you can understand that it is difficult for hundreds of people to maintain order in the huge city of Nanjing, let alone guard the four gates. Is it the coach who is arrogant or the author who is arrogant? 4. Ancient class common sense is too arbitrary. As a time traveler, it is understandable that the protagonist does not care about some ethical things. However, as an authentic ancient person, it is too casual. For example, Gillian, even though she is engaged to the protagonist, she has not paid a visit to the court for one day. They can only be regarded as the rich young lady who has not left the court. She gets tired of being with the protagonist from time to time, but she can actually stay up all night. This is going to break the spine of people, and not counting one of them, there is also He Qian, who is completely nameless and has no status. The protagonist can not care, how can others not care? ? ? In addition, the palace steward passed away, and the protagonist, a nobleman from Tianhuang, King Pingnan, and a general, actually kowtowed and knelt down. Was he trying to scare the steward and his family to death? ? 5. The timeline is confusing and unclear. For example, Jiangzhou was pacified. Judging from the time, the protagonist's army is still escorting the prisoners on the road. Although they have been told to send people to send the good news back in advance, in the blink of an eye, civilians are already spreading the story of the protagonist's achievements. What, did anyone in the team call or send text messages to their relatives? ? Brother, that was ancient times, ancient times! Even the latest report received by the emperor may have been a few days ago, or more than ten days ago, or even a month or several months ago. How did the common people know about it so quickly? 6. Hiding strategic materials privately. There is nothing wrong with hiding some strategic materials secretly. However, first, the protagonist has mastered such big weapons as muskets, grenades and even artillery. The emperor actually didn't send anyone to supervise him? ? The author describes how suspicious the emperor is, and how neurotic he is at the same time. Even if the protagonist is his own grandson, the royal family has been ruthless since ancient times, so it is impossible to achieve this level. In addition, I have read a lot of fictional farming stories like this. They all come up with strategic-level new technologies and first equip the frontline troops. However, the protagonist here first thinks about arming his own troops. He can clearly use his new technologies to capture cities and seize territory, but he has to hide them and let the soldiers who are really on the frontline bleed and die. What's even more ridiculous is that you have better steel, so you can first think about replacing the frontline troops with better swords, guns, swords and halberds, but it is actually used to produce agricultural tools first? ? ? What the hell kind of operation is this? ? ? To be honest, there are many shortcomings about this novel, which I won't go into here. I am not saying this to belittle the author, but I just hope that the author can write this novel more rigorously.

In fact, the previous book was very interesting, and I couldn't understand why I entered the palace.

This book is generally well written. The author was only in his twenties when he became emperor. The emperor who expanded his territory had a granddaughter of the prime minister as his fiancée when he was still the prince. Later, he married a matchmaker. Why did the courtesan in the brothel finally become the queen? This is the most poisonous point of this book. This oiran is also a very scheming and skillful woman.

The protagonist is super awesome. He doesn't kneel down to worship the emperor, yells at the emperor, contradicts the emperor, and is angry with the emperor. It's totally fine.

This book was really okay at first, but He Qian appeared and started to turn into a licking dog, apologizing to the maid? The licking becomes more and more intense. How many of you are willing to be a licking dog? There is no sense of immersion at all.

Don't show off your psychology in front of the ancient people. The few books you have studied may not necessarily make you better than them. The great people in ancient times understood psychology. Fortune-telling and calligraphy were all psychology. Not to mention that the emperor was a monster. In the feudal dynasty, the ancients had great advantages. In reality, politicians were very good at turning lies into reality.

I really don't understand what the author is doing. Under the premise that the male protagonist has a wife whom the matchmaker is marrying, he instead makes a brothel girl his queen. This is the first time I've seen such an outrageous operation.

It's not easy to write so poorly.

I've seen episode 49. The protagonist is a dandy. He can talk and laugh with the prime minister when he sees him. He even dares to fight a third-rank official. Are you really afraid that a governor will cause trouble for him? Drunk or not? I kept building a restaurant and gave it up. Trash within the trash, poisoning me to death