The Musket Couldn’t Pierce the Pantyhose

The writing style of the book is my favorite. The settings are both referenced and innovative. It's really good, but it's not really popular. I actually ranked 12th on the fan list. Author Jun, are you sure it's not because the name is too revealing of sexual fetishes that scares readers away? 🤭 It is necessary to change the car to go to the kindergarten and trick people into the car first.

The book and the author are quite thoughtful, but, well, I feel like the author could have written it better, but it's just short of breathtaking. The beginning of this book was okay, but as I went on, there were more and more problems, and in the end I couldn't finish reading it. The two most troublesome points are that one is that it relies too much on coincidences and deus ex machina-like insertion of plots/characters to promote the plot. For other novels, this problem may be insignificant, but this novel places more emphasis on characters and conflicts from the beginning, and this problem dissolves the atmosphere that the author worked hard to create. To put it bluntly, the author's deliberate traces in some places are too obvious, destroying the atmosphere of the novel. The second point is that the author is a bit, uh, anxious. The state of writing can be felt. Sometimes he is eager to unfold the plot, and sometimes he is eager to output his opinions. And when it comes to outputting opinions, there is still that problem. The traces of the author are too heavy www Well, there are other small problems, such as some small bugs mentioned in the comment area, but these are minor problems. Of course, this book also has advantages. In addition to what has been mentioned in the comment area, let me talk about the writing. First of all, I say that this beginning is good, mainly for two points. One is that the protagonist is placed in the conflict between life and death from the beginning (although it is because the protagonist is greedy for occult skills and wants to become a human, and skips the communication link xd, but at least it is passable for the novel). This makes the reader attracted at once. This is of course a common trick, but to use it like this, I think the author still has his own efforts. Another thing that I think is well done is about settings. Settings are the rules set by the author himself. The more he explains them in advance, the more readers will accept them. Therefore, the more basic and important the settings are, the more they should be explained in advance. I think the author did a good job in the first part, but a little bit in the later part. . . Then I think that the protagonist, as a time traveler and a cat, can actually have a great and special narrative angle, or simply make him a problematic narrator, like in many movies, but it is a pity that we have not seen this www Finally, I heard that the author also has a new book. I wish the author good results and progress in writing!

I have basically finished reading the book in the past two days, and overall it is good. Although there are always many flaws to pick out, at least it is much better than the pile of stuff on the ranking list at a certain point (you know which books I am talking about). The writing style is still good, and it is quite good for a web article. If the author can continue writing, there is room for improvement. To avoid spoilers, I will say as little as possible about the plot. The references are visible to the naked eye, but they are handled well. However, although the plot reversal in the early and middle stages is very cleverly designed, it also causes the pacing to be not handled well (I don't know if this is the original plot design or the outline was changed later). Personally, it is more interesting to divide these two parts into two books (although it is inevitably similar to a certain protagonist). There is no problem with borrowing from it, but by suddenly abandoning this setting, a lot of early foreshadowing and character portrayal were wasted (certain characters were also wasted), which is a minor disadvantage. In addition, the middle and later stages are as homogenous as most online articles, and even the big method was used three years later. In fact, there are many places that can be expanded and written. For example, the split body section can be written in the form of the Holy Grail War (this section in the book has too much foreshadowing but ends too quickly). The most surprising thing is the color description (you know). I have to say that I didn't expect that the author could write the emperor's uncle like this while in shackles. I am satisfied with this book for those who control pantyhose! In general, it is a good online article, but it can't compare with the strongest ones, but there is nothing wrong with it. There are some minor flaws (the rhythm is not handled well). The quality of this work is far greater than the performance. I hope the author can continue writing it (do you know how difficult it is to find books that I can read nowadays?).

Muskets are a product of the development of science and technology, and they also represent the capitalist class that has gradually grown with the development of science and technology; while pantyhose are exclusive clothing for the aristocratic class, and are even a symbol of the upper class in a sense. Historically, it was the emergence of muskets that made it possible for the emerging bourgeoisie to defeat the nobility based on the knight class. So the title of the book is just right, and the author is really a genius at choosing names.

After restarting I can no longer watch it. The more I looked, the more confused I became. Well, it started off really well, but after the reboot, the plot line just eluded me. To put it bluntly, it would be outrageous to directly switch back in the early stage. An early stage boss will directly turn the world back in time, and there is nothing to say.

I have seen many people say that they cannot quite imagine the art style of the Chinese imperial court in the steam age/first industrial revolution period, and they cannot understand it when describing people's Hanfu attire. I have some pictures here for your reference, which can serve as a starting point. (All pictures are from the Internet, infringement and deletion) (Some of them are from different TB merchants. I am not advertising, so I will not point out what merchant they are. I hope those who are curious don't ask, you can find them yourself) Modern style (actually not the first industrial revolution /steam age style, but you can imagine) some Hanfu There is also a steampunk style Han element In fact, if Hanfu continues into modern times, people are You will not be unfamiliar with this style. After all, it is a historical law and a natural thing. The example that has existed in history is a cheongsam and a mandarin jacket paired with a suit, a Western hat and Western shoes-but both of them were born in the Republic of China period with a very short history, using Western three-dimensional tailoring, and are modern clothing products. Strictly speaking, The traditional Manchu costumes in the sense are completely different from them. So no matter which ethnic group we are, we Chinese have not experienced the process of traditional costumes entering modern times (Hanfu is now an attempt) But Japan is different. There is a ready-made example in Japan, which was like this in the Taisho era

It's very well written and very tiring to read! The lame naming makes people feel like beef jerky is delicious, but it just makes your teeth grind after eating too much. Punk Dynasty is an alternative version of Cthulhu; Forbidden Object Fate Map is about containing objects and suspicion; Purple Bamboo Taoist Temple is about attracting people, which is the routine of the Lord of Weirdness. The scammers are all different. High-end water injection, the plot goes aside normally, and then goes back to explain it again, and then relive it again ~ like Korean dramas, the wonderful plot points are repeated by the supporting characters in the form of chatting and boasting again, which is what we are familiar with ~ the 'rumination' of mammals such as cattle and sheep. This makes the rhythm a bit draggy and the main plot moves slowly. The initial stage of Fat Cat's struggle has a strong sense of immersion, and the animal kingdom section is the most brilliant. From Zizhuguan onwards, the plot becomes a bit bland and boring. It's generally not poisonous, it has some highlights, but it's not particularly outstanding. Belongs to grain and grass.

There is no reason why it is not popular. This book does not belong to the type of progressively fascinating book. The author has his own unique creative ideas, and prefers to create for himself. It is a newcomer's attempt of self-narcissism and self-expression (I guess the style will change a lot if there is a next book), so the readability aspect is ignored (except for the preface, which can attract some traffic while driving, the content style is actually quite different). This novel is very suitable for a manga adaptation, and the look and feel may be much better. Many plots in the novel gave me the same feeling as if I had read a Japanese manga.

You can't read this book carefully. It's easy to find bugs if you look closely. But this kind of book is meaningless if you don't read it carefully... At first, the cat brought back the little white ball, hid it in a cloth ball, dragged it back to the nest and hid it... Later, when he went out to cause trouble, he could switch to a puppet anytime and anywhere... It is estimated that some readers discovered this problem, and changed it to the cat hanging the small white ball on the collar... Not to mention how you hung it, just assume that the small white ball is magnetically attracted, or there is a pocket on the collar... I just want to ask, wouldn't the owner find it strange that there is a pendant suddenly added to the pet's body, and don't he care? The same trick was repeated later, hanging purple bamboo pieces on the owl, but the owner was still not curious and didn't care... These pendants are put directly into the equipment slot, so others can't see them, right...

Another LSP who was deceived by the title of the book