Keep It Together, Don’t Get Reckless

I am a female reader of ten years and would like to give you some suggestions. "Devil's Law" is a big hit. I have watched every work and I really like Wu Da's works. I'm currently at chapter 270 of this book. I feel like giving up on the emotional line, and it's stuck in my throat. The basic target of the Qidian male blog is male readers, so it is understandable to be a little YY when writing the love line. It is also reasonable to love Sun Keke and Lu Xixi at the same time from a male perspective. However, I really think that the plot of the Shura field with many girls is unnecessary. In recent years, it has not been popular to write one-to-many relationships, and it has become popular to write one-to-many relationships. It is because most male authors cannot write relationships well, portray female characters poorly, have stereotypes about female characters, and do not respect them enough. Wuda's character creation is of course no problem. The story lines of each of the girls in "Stay Steady and Farewell" are very complete. However, I can still feel that Wu Da's portrayal of women is not three-dimensional and not very empathetic to women. The Korean girl, the Japanese slutty lolita, the British blond buttocks, all have the same characters. They were all rescued by Chen Nuo because of their own misery, and thus became dependent on Chen Nuo and fell in love with him. Although it can create comic effects, the previous 200 chapters have been repeated many times. If it continues, I will just feel bored and even make me feel physically uncomfortable as a girl. This kind of shaping is actually quite unsuccessful. What they like is not Chen Nuo as a person, but the experience of Chen Nuo saving them. It is a filler called "savior", a very empty template. Therefore, I feel that these three characters have no personality charm, and I am even more disdainful of their actions. We can understand that after they were rescued, they regarded Chen Nuo as their only light and salvation, and even had a somewhat paranoid personality. But in real life, good girls, even paranoid good girls, will not stalk like them. When they know that the person they like belongs to someone, they will regret it and will bless him even more. Chen Nuo, as the male protagonist, also failed to handle these relationships well and was too indecisive. He said, Girl, you should become a firefly and shine by yourself; Girl, you should study hard to get into college; Girl, you should be independent and charming, and live well by yourself; but when people come to the door, it gives them the signal that "it's possible for us." It's okay if he's clearly a scumbag, but he also loses some of his charm as a male protagonist. I would rather some of them sincerely be friends with Chen Nuo, be assistants, be students, be silent confidants, have their own careers, and use their own abilities to repay their kindness, instead of all of them stinging this little scumbag Chen Nuo like flies. I don't know if male readers still like plots like YY where all the girls love me. If you like it, I understand. But as a female reader, I hope Wu Da can sympathize with women's thoughts. I hope Wu Da can have a charming female character with truly independent thoughts and personality. I don't know how many female readers there are, but everyone can gather here.

The writing style of the 2000s, the plot of the 2000s, the story of living in the past, familiar routines, rough psychological description, and not deep writing skills. After reading the free chapter, it's strange to go to death together, and I don't know where to complain about it. I feel like the author's thinking has not kept up with the times, or has his aesthetics improved too much by reading too many books?

Chen Nuo was resurrected with memories and powers. How does he want to live? It's definitely not repeating the original track, nor is it pursuing fame and fortune, nor is it living a hero's life. He wanted to live a burden-free and relaxed life, but he couldn't let go of his former companions. He couldn't bear to see honest people being bullied, and he couldn't stand by and watch injustice. When people are in the world, they should behave in a low-key manner and do things in a high-key manner. Looking forward to his wonderful new life. The heroine is currently unpredictable, and the two people who have appeared are not Chen Nuo's cup of tea. One is the sister and the other is the apprentice. Chen Nuo should appreciate independent and courageous girls more. I have been reading the book Dancing for more than ten years, and I am the only author who has never been able to put it down. Complete every book. I like Xiao Wu's words and expressions. Cheers for the new book!

No, I can't stand it anymore. The first part was okay, and the middle part was bearable. But the later part is so bad that it's just for the sake of filling the holes. The holes haven't been filled yet. It's really uncomfortable to watch

We are both born in the year of Tiger. Why are you so good? Fat Five

I hope the author can give Firefly, Blueberry, and Hummingbird a happy ending. It's true that Chen Nuo was reborn 17 times. Their lives were still so miserable in the 17th time. They were reborn for the last time. Even in the harem, I support it. Real life is already very tiring.

Rubbish and unfinished books😆😆 A waste of time

I have read more than 300 chapters, but there are too many pitfalls and the storyline is too confusing. Author B talks too much and the names of the two chapters at the beginning are unbearable. The writing is good at the beginning, but it gets worse and worse later on. The more I write, the more ridiculous it becomes... Sometimes it feels like just to advance the plot, I suddenly write about an incident and slap you in the face. Then what happens to the protagonist...

In the past dozen or so chapters, you must have lost your way. If you want to go in the daily direction, the stall is too big. If you want to use multiple perspectives, delicate layouts, and fierce collisions, then you have been swimming for the sake of water lately. As far as my personal preference is concerned, a high-quality three or five thousand is much better than your watery one. Read your 100th chapter again. If there is too much pure water, I will switch to the browser 😒

"Short Hair" Gigi Leung "I have cut my hair short and cut off my worries." "Long, short, short, long, struggling inch by inch."                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Gigi Leung "She should be very obedient to you. She should follow your lead, stay at home obediently, and listen to the phone quietly."                                                                                                                                                                 does not have to be true.                                                                                                                                                     </ b>          Li Zongsheng/Lin Yilian "Love is a difficult problem that makes people dizzy." "It may be possible to forget the pain, but it is not easy to forget you." "You have never really left, you are always in my heart." "I still have love for you, but I can't do anything about myself."  ——"The Law of the Devil" Aragorn/Lolita Messiah "Dragon" Yang Zongwei "Looking at life and death, things are flying in front of me, hoping for the impermanence of things in the world, and letting go of my ego. I am greedy for the pleasure of the gift in today's decisive battle, but I hope that when I let it go in the future, I will follow my heart. I am obsessed with caring about my heart and my commitments, and I will be a chivalrous and righteous person in the world." "I am worthy of my heart's desire once in my life."        ——"Hunting Country" Saul Hannigan "Thank you for being so gentle" S. H. E/Fahrenheit "Thank you for being so gentle, waiting quietly with love in your hands, my hands are actually trembling too." "Thank you for being so gentle, lighting the light of your smile, only warming but not disturbing my cold winter."       ——"The Prodigy" Barossa/Chen Daolin "Melody" Tao Zhe "Finally I understand that you have become a memory." "Like a certain breath lurking in the street, inadvertently bringing back the laughter and tears of the past, and suddenly the heartache can no longer be suppressed." "It turns out that I have never forgotten."  ——"Hippie Smiling Face" Chen Yang/Lanzi "Can't Say Goodbye" Alan Tam "The more romantic this relationship is, the more beautiful it is." "Parting is the most unbearable thing." "I can't bear to look at you. Turn your back to me. Please don't be so attached to me if you have to leave for a moment." " "The ups and downs are like the tide of people, how can we not miss you?" "You and I are too sad to say goodbye." ——"Hippie Smiley Face". Chen Yang/Lanzi "The Love of a Lifetime" Lu Guanting/Mok Wenwei "A blind date is inaccessible, or I should believe it is fate." "Lover will never come back after leaving." ——"The Prodigy" Chen Daolin/Lanlan (Bulu) "Lilac" Tang Lei "When the flowers wither, when the picture freezes, such delicate flowers cannot escape the wind and rain." "A life of floating and swaying, so many beautifully woven dreams, you are gone in such a hurry."                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      does not leave you. Wu Qilong "The sky is shaking, the road is turning, the heart is beating, and I was injured." "The wind goes through the heart, the more chaotic the dream is, and the dream turns when I wake up." "How deep and deep love can be turned into two parts with one knife." "Let all this be loosened here. " "The road has turned, so why bother to break your heart? Love is a dilemma that no one can solve. " "It was already a loss when the lie was solved. " "It is the most beautiful turn in life. ——"Face-changing Warrior" Set/Miao Ge "How to express love" Zhao Chuan "How can I not be sad? You persuaded me to extinguish the fire in my heart." "What else can I say, no matter what I say, it is wrong." "How to express love, I feel so uncomfortable. If I can have you, I will hold back the tears."                                           ——"The Prodigy" Lucius/Gill Rollin "Over the Hills" Yang Zongwei "Over the hills, I met the nineteen-year-old me, wearing a pair of white gloves, drinking my wedding wine." "He asked me whether I was happy or not, whether I had said goodbye to sorrow." "Why were there so many people at the wedding." "There was no friend from back then."   ——"The Proud One" Shiloh Augustine "A Thousand Autumn Fires" Guofengtang "There is no need to worry about life or death, it can be ignored." "Putting righteousness over oneself and bowing with raised eyebrows."        ——"Hunting Country" Spahn "In Imagination" Xu Song "In my imagination, I will love you for a long time this time." "I have experienced the tenderness and warmth in your eyes." "You are suddenly frozen, completely different, leaving it to me to bear." "In my imagination, it is very different." "In my imagination, everything is different. It's different from later. " "I admit that I was so excited once."——"The Prodigy" Chen Daolin/Messiah Rudolph (Du Weiwei) "How Much Love Can Come Again" Dick Cowboy "I often blame myself, I shouldn't have done it in the first place." "I often regret not keeping you." "Why do we love each other so much." "We still have to separate in the end." "Are we always wandering outside the door of my heart." "Who I know that I meet you again in a sea of people. " "It's so frustrating to have such an arrangement. " " It's just that there is one person missing. " "You are still my constant concern. ——"The Unparalleled Talent" Chen Daolin/Lanlan (Bulu) "I Just Want to Be With You All My Life" Jacky Cheung "I have had the most beautiful encounter with you, and I have had some sorrows and sorrows with you." "You have been drunk and painful in the end." "But I find that I can't live without you." "It's not enough to teach me to be sad like you, but you didn't take away everything in the dream." "Why can't you see through letting you go." "But I ask you not to let go. Forgetting the old feelings, I would like to shed tears silently, and I would like to be with you forever. Even if the world changes, I will only pursue it in the wind, and I don't want to stay alone. " " But I hope you will not forget the old feelings, and I would like to be with you forever. You are in my heart, and I cannot live without you in this life. ——"Warrior Face" Roddy/Moussi

New title: Endless Explanations

Those big gods who give rewards are really tough.

Why does Chen Nuo need a public substitute? Is it because he is not strong enough? What is the significance of the character Brother Haonan? There are so many scenes, does it mean that the protagonist is actually very afraid of death and must find a stand-in? There is also the Octopus Forum. Whether it is the user name or the speech, it is too domestic forum style and not like an international forum. There is no sense of people from different civilizations from all over the world gathering to communicate. It is like an ordinary forum in China. This forum only has Chinese people. Be it ancient martial arts or supernatural powers, why are there so many ancient martial arts with supernatural powers in one city of Nanjing? The quality of the game is instantly reduced. From the beginning, it felt like only the protagonist had supernatural powers, then people with supernatural powers were just a handful of people in the world, and now, just a few people on the road are people with supernatural powers. The biggest mistake of this book is the inclusion of ancient martial arts. From there on, the taste feels wrong, and I skipped the rest of the book. Brother Haonan feels that the author is led by the readers, and the ancient martial arts teacher feels the same way. Gu Wu was also joined by a large number of people with special abilities in Nanjing. There are too many Chinese people with special abilities coming out of the factory. Could it be that Chinese people can mutate? Among the Chinese, Nanjing people are particularly capable of mutation? It seems that fate stay night all happened in Fuyuki City, making it seem like there is only one Fuyuki City in the world, and the whole world is equal to Fuyuki City.

Since I saw a series of mother body, seed, and body snatching incidents that I experienced while disguised as Harvey, I felt so uncomfortable that I closed the book Goodbye Spicy🥵

It's so bad. From the rainforest pyramid to the ice ocean, the author doesn't know how to end it.

It is a bit regretful to see this book gradually go from the second place in the monthly ticket to the top five, to the top ten, and now in the top dozens, but it is also expected. When it first came on the shelves, I cheered for this book. I was very excited when it got good results. Now I am too lazy to look at the monthly ticket results. This book was really interesting at first, but now it's so boring that I haven't read it or thought about it for a few days. Just because I'm a fan of dancing, I haven't given up and I'll come back to read it every once in a while. Why is this happening? I think there are many reasons The main reason is that the structure of the story is too exaggerated. Why did it make me feel uncomfortable at first? The rebirth of a sinister and awesome boss and teasing innocent campus beauties are cliche, but the chapters about going to Korea were super interesting. They teased the campus workers and saved the Korean girl, which left a deep impression on people. Later, the protagonist The story about my sister aroused the readers' emotions again. In fact, I should always be like this, a sinister and story-telling, somewhat awesome and coaxing boss in the guise of a boy. He hangs around in the city. It would be good to occasionally act for justice to punish evil and promote good. Or it would be good to settle the regrets of the previous life and write more touching stories like saving a Korean girl. I feel that if you are not determined to write about a harem and cannot handle the relationship between these infatuated women, in fact, their stories should not be written after their segments are over. It is better to leave it to the readers' imagination than after they all go to Nanjing What will be written now about the Korean MM, the Japanese girl, and the British one? He had a lot of personality in the beginning, but now he is vying to be the mistress, mistress, fourth, and fifth, but the protagonist doesn't want it! ! ! If not, there is no need for them to appear. It will be embarrassing every time they appear. At that time, Da Feng was the first in the monthly ticket, and Bielang was the second. Looking at Da Feng, it was clear that his tone was a harem story, so the heroines appeared to scheming, which made the readers smile knowingly. On the other hand, Bie Lang wanted the girls to fight each other, but was not sure about their relationship, so it was meaningless and extremely embarrassing! In the middle section, Zhang Linsheng took the lead. There were many criticisms at the time, which I won't go into here. The protagonist has "died" several times. Death once can still touch the hearts of readers, but death twice will make it boring. Many people don't want to follow it, and that's probably it. Because this is really not interesting anymore. I hope that Dancing will determine the tone of the novel, adjust the structure of the novel, and clarify the purpose of writing, rather than writing for the sake of writing. It does not mean there are many words and fast updates, which means it is excellent. Moreover, compared with most authors at the starting point, they do not update quickly! So it's time to work hard

At first I read the comments and said it would be unfinished. I didn't quite believe it, but it turned out that the rest of the game was really messy. When the battle was at its fiercest in more than 400 chapters, the protagonist was locked up by the enemy in a space with himself as the anchor. After the protagonist discovered the loophole, the enemy suddenly went offline. There were no enemies for several chapters. News, I have been writing scenes for several supporting characters, not only before the reincarnation, but also after the reincarnation. I have been talking about a setting concept for a long time. It is so boring. How can the supporting characters suddenly start chatting with each other when the battle is the most intense? The enemy seems to have disappeared. How about this Boruto? When I first started writing the supporting role scenes, the writing was actually quite good, and the rhythm of interweaving with the main plot was actually good. But later on, I realized that the author didn't know how to write it, and started to add water to the supporting plot crazily. The main plot was not promoted at all, and the fighting scenes were said to be good. It's okay, but the details of the entire power system are never added, which is very rough. At the beginning, it is said that the protagonist's characteristic is that he has a very strong sense of perception and can even learn ancient martial arts at once, but this characteristic has never been mentioned much later. He is either led by the seed or forced to become stronger by the seed. The protagonist never takes the initiative to use his own characteristics.

I still like your devilish laws and awe-inspiring evil spirit the most...

Oh, Fat Five, although I feel a little uncomfortable seeing your pure love turn into a harem, and I subconsciously quit three times after reading one chapter, but it's about to give an ending, right? Fat Five, Fifth Brother, keep writing bravely, really.

If I don't write it, I will have to go upstairs and ask someone to carry it!

Seeing the main foot being pulled into the consciousness space and being reborn 17 times, I vaguely saw "Inception" for the first time, layer by layer. I don't like it a bit here. Later I saw that the main character had returned to the 1980s, so I gave up decisively. The age difference is a bit big, so I don't have much impression, and I am even more afraid that the author's mind will soar and travel infinitely.

With this update speed, I wonder if Fat Five has to read the previous posts before updating each time!

Alas, I thought I had been reading this novel for a long time. Looking back, I started reading this book on March 25, 2025, and it is only May 13, just over 50 days ago, right? I finished it so quickly? Alas, I really couldn't hold back when I saw the ending. Another novel ended in front of my eyes. It seems like I haven't read a relatively long novel like this for a long time. Recently, I always read the beginning of novels. When I saw that the middle was not good, I got angry. This novel is the longest novel I have finished recently. Alas, some of the twists in it are really amazing. Alas, it's not that it's reverse. Let's go back to the plot alone. It's awesome. Oh my God, there are other things like space and time. It's really shocking and I couldn't imagine it. I actually had some other points when I first watched it. For example, I saw many female protagonists. To be honest, I felt quite uncomfortable. When I saw the rest of it, it was actually okay and she didn't do anything very disgusting. How should I put it? I'm quite satisfied with it. In fact, I didn't read it for a long time, maybe 20 or ten days. I saw more than 600 pictures at that time, but I couldn't stand the exploration of the octopus monster. Then I picked it up in the past two days, and then the finale. Well, it's really good. It feels good to accompany the finale. Usually when I was a child, it was in front of me. It's over. I finished reading it. To be honest, I feel quite accomplished. The moment I finished reading it, it seemed like a promise and disappeared from my world. But I know that he has not disappeared. He is still living a good life in that world. Maybe he is still looking at me now. Alas, in fact, I also want to see a sequel. I don't need to fight monsters, just watch your ordinary life. Write about your daily life with your daughter, as well as some little pitfalls from the past. If you want to see them, fill them in. If you don't want to, forget it. Or just talk about some small things in life, something interesting, relaxed, relaxing, and funny. But I know that there is a high probability that this is impossible, but now the small AI has become more and more powerful. Maybe in a few years, only readers will use AI to start writing sequels, so that other readers like us can take a look at the next story, not to mention it is really possible. AI is progressing too fast. I hope that time will come I hope it will come at that time. , I can throw to AI what I have read to the end, or some of the author's unfinished works, and let him continue to write the end. I wish the author more and more success. Oh, by the way, I was at the starting point, and finally saw a comment from someone saying that his reading of evil helped him establish his outlook on life. I think this is good. Maybe I will continue to read him in the next book. I have already added him to the bookshelf, and dance. How did you do it? Why has Xie Qi been removed from the shelves? I still have to find this book on other software.

With this update, no matter how great a god is, he cannot be arrogant.

In the first two days of the event, I read the entire book for free. I have to say that the dancing is really good, but it is still the same as before. Just when you feel that you are getting better, the author has fully revealed the grand story of Beijing in front of you, and you are ready to enjoy it to the end! Click... It's over... I always feel so strange. It feels like the author just stops writing after finishing the most difficult things to grasp and write... Why? Did you realize the epic feel of the novel? Every time the novel ends just two-thirds of the way through, every time...

In fact, sometimes I get very angry! But Xiao Wu is still Xiao Wu, and the story she makes is very interesting!

I have 160 chapters left to read. Should I read it or not?

Long suite building. You know I'm a sucker for naming names. Please write down your name, and I will include it in the set library of this book. Mom. 😍

{"TopicId":"664046868619264000","TopicName":"Social Ceiling"} Chen Nuo still remembers the first time he saw Lu Xixi, Lu Xixi asked himself. "Do you like dragons?" He looked at the deer carefully and had an inexplicable feeling. He was thinking about how to name this feeling, but he felt that it was in vain. It is difficult for him to connect this emotion with more advanced words, just like a giant dragon waving its wings and jumping down from the sky. It stands in front of you and dare not breathe loudly. It is not fear, but fear that breathing too hard will blow the weak human in front of him. That was what was in his mind at that time. Lu Xixi is such a person. However, Chen Nuo was also a puzzled person. He asked, "Why do you think the dragon allows humans to ride on it to fight with its own race?" The crowd around them who wanted to join their conversation fell into a weird silence. It seemed that no one had ever thought about why the dragon fought with its own race. People always seemed to think that they had tamed the dragon and made the dragon a tool, without thinking about the dragon. Lu Xianxi picked up the cat in his arms and looked at Chen Nuo for a while. Chen Nuo was a little disappointed, thinking that this person was probably not much different from those people. He really didn't understand why he heard his heartbeat when he heard this person's first words. The deer put the cat on top of his head and winked at him. What does it mean? Chen Nuo didn't react, but he guessed that Lu Xixi had already replied to him, and it was him who didn't react. "Have you ever helped a cat fight?" Lu pointed at the cat above his head. "No." Chen Nuo doesn't raise cats, so naturally he can't understand the delicate brain circuits of deer. "Have you ever thought that your cat was bullied, and it would be cool for you to beat the bully back with it, and then put it on your head to show off." The deer carefully raised the two paws of the cat above its head in a pose like a roc spreading its wings. Chen Nuo feels like he understands but also doesn't. "Perhaps we have entered a misunderstanding from the beginning," Lu Xixian put the cat into his arms again, "Why do people want to control something weaker than themselves?" "In fact, to dragons, we are cats." Lu Xixian smiled and bowed slightly. Chen Nuo was probably too close, so he subconsciously ducked back. The deer raised his hand to help him. The soft blond hair that covered half of his face revealed an erect blue pupil. He saw the deer smiling at himself.

Zhihu can reply 12 times a day, but the novel can't update one chapter in 8 months, right?