
Our Secret Base
我们的秘密基地
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- 534k Words
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- Sci-Fi
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- Male
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- Evolution & Mutation
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- 2y ago
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The secret base in my mind
I accidentally clicked on it by mistake on my phone. I started reading it from the beginning with the intention of giving it a try. The story is really attractive. I devoted myself to it as I read it. I didn't realize I had finished it until I reached the last page. I'm too stupid to speak words of praise, but the story the author carefully describes is worthy of the name of youth. It makes me, a social beast like me, feel passionate and taste the taste of youth. Everyone has more or less imagined in their childhood that they might be different from ordinary people, get different powers, or stray into strange events and come into contact with people or things that are different from ordinary people, and start a life that is different from the past and absolutely novel. When I was in junior high school, I also liked reading books about the unsolved mysteries of mankind, UFOs, aliens, and objects with mysterious powers. The unknown was really fascinating. I even fantasize about returning to my hometown, getting in touch with the unknown other side, exploring with my friends, mastering powers that are different from ordinary people, and gaining family, friendship or love in the restless youth. This story really fulfills my childhood fantasy 1000%, it's really cool! Very youthful! Just like the title of the book "Our Secret Base", this book is also the secret base in my mind!
Author: A Clockwork Orange Dream (Invasion of the World, Women in Difficulty) Keywords: radio series, thriller, supernatural power, harem, campus About the work: The summer of 14 years old, the hot season—— He is ordinary, she firmly believes in the existence of aliens, and she calls herself a realist. The fate of the boys and girls who met in a seaside town began to be gradually connected with a mysterious and terrifying distant planet... This unknown boyhood adventure is about to overturn the world. Introduction: Continues the unique time and space that invades the human world, and places the main time point of the story around 2000. For people born in the 80s and 90s, there are many familiar products of the old generation in the story. The male protagonist, who was forced to leave the city, met two romantic girls in a rural town in the early 20th century, and embarked on a realist super adventure through another world at a time when Chuunibyou disease broke out. In terms of the composition of the protagonists, it is still a triangular relationship with a single male protagonist and two female protagonists, but unlike the previous work, which was relatively simple, Sun, Moon and Star, "Our Secret Base" tentatively integrated the three strong historical symbols of divine power, royal power, and military power into the three protagonists. This not only laid a solid foundation for the triangular relationship, but also established a stable framework for the development of the subsequent fantasy plot. The future is promising. Protagonist profile: Ji Chunzao: A vigorous girl bound by a traditional family. The author obviously extracted many elements from Haruhi Suzumiya. She is full of adolescent fantasy, optimism, and persistence, like a deer freely jumping over the mountains Xie Yuzhi: A lady, top student, pragmatist but not indifferent, Behind the image of a good student is full of cat-like cunning, and she is the woman who can be my mother ( Yan Jingxing: A male protagonist who truly embodies gentleness in his dealings with others. He has a high EQ but not a saint, and a high IQ but not a superman. Reason for recommendation: "In the writing of A Clockwork Orange Dream, the story is describing itself." The author's words are concise and emotional, and he is objective in his narrative. As a youth-themed novel, the daily part touches a lot on the youth we have experienced together, and the adventure part more or less shows the sincere interactions we have in bed at night. The protagonists are full of the unique vitality and sincerity of young people. Reading their dialogue is like a clear spring in the summer, which can give us a sense of coolness when we are tortured by the heat of reality.
After the stumbling pursuit, I feel even more disappointed.
I am a reader who came to pursue this book after reading Invasion of the World, but I have never read Female Difficulties. I really liked the first half of the previous book, but not so much the second half. I liked every word and deed of the male and female protagonists in this book, and the beautiful youthful touch of "sharing secrets." This is the reason why I pursued this book. The beginning gave me a strong sense of déjà vu as a "radio girl young boy". I particularly liked the description of Haruna's curly hair, and the description of the mermaid was also great. I happen to have come across several of the works mentioned by the author. The description of astronauts can indeed evoke this desire to explore the unknown - after all, astronauts themselves represent the exploration of the unknown, don't they? I especially like this kind of happiness, this child-like happiness with a secret base as its core, which allows me to look back on the time when I was a child and shared secrets with my playmates. Just like the radio wave girl and young boy, the very innocent happiness of "we have a common secret, a secret that is not told to adults" really makes me intoxicated. A small group of three people, young and beautiful girls, a secret base that they stick to together, mysterious superpowers, secrets that cannot be told to adults, and the desire to protect the world together - this is really cool! This is a very small, but very touching element for me. It is not a grand world view or an affectionate scene, but it can give me a sense of satisfaction. Meeting a beautiful girl with problems, getting to know her, sharing this secret with her, and sticking to this secret with her... This really gives me satisfaction and joy based on possessiveness. In the middle period, the element about the secret base was a little weakened, but the superpowers made up for it. The "warrior instinct" about fighting was really touching. I had a sense of déjà vu at first, but I thought it was Kamen Rider or something like that. I didn't expect it to be the Forced Armor Cap, and the monsters were also modeled after the beast-turned-armors. I happen to be a fan of the Forced Armor, and this really struck a chord with me. As for the later period, I can only say that the later updates were too annoying. I have forgotten many plots, and I no longer have the same enthusiasm as before. The author has also begun to lose enthusiasm for creation. From the appearance of the heroine Qiu, I feel that the perception has plummeted... Same as the previous book, the pursuit of higher intentions resulted in the loss of the emotions between the three people, and the follow-up also ended hastily. Just like my comment.
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I hope "he" won't be too ordinary, even though I am an ordinary person. The female protagonists are so well written, but I always feel that the male protagonists are not attractive enough to be worthy of them. Perhaps I am an ordinary and despicable person. Rather than seeing the ordinary "me" encounter the extraordinary "them" in the works, I hope to encounter the "extraordinary self" and their stories in it.
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"Write it yourself if you want to see women in trouble", "You come to be a midsummer night's dream", "I really don't have time". For an author who can have such an attitude towards his work and readers, I don't believe he can finish a work without it being unfinished. I had already anticipated the failure of this book.
Is it difficult to write a female-written ending? Without asking for more, this volume has over a hundred chapters. Is it too much to finish writing this volume in three years?
Maybe it was because of the filter I had after finishing the previous book. When I read this book, I quickly got into the mood. Before I knew it, I came to the seaside town with the protagonists in the book. The summer of fourteen years old is really a word full of fantasy. Let me express my feelings and continue to talk about my thoughts on this book. I have been a person who likes to explore since I was a child. If you really want to find any advantages from me. I think curiosity is my greatest asset. The writing of Orange Dream perfectly matched my curiosity about the story. Different from the cliche-style web articles, the story of Orange Dream is very fresh or youthful. There is no doubt that this requires a lot of effort. I have also tried to write novels, which require too much thought in terms of plot planning, character materials, writing style, etc. If I have written a novel myself, it is easy to see the efforts of Orange Dream. Take the last book as an example. While it creates distinctive characters, the plot does not make any major mistakes, and the writing style is also very attractive. In my nearly 10 years of reading online novels, few authors can do this. What I said above seems easy, but it is really difficult to do it. Because of this, I have great confidence in this novel. Finally, as a digression, I think Orange Dream may change the style of this novel and add more popular elements to attract more readers. At least in my opinion, Orange Dream's user stickiness should be very high. What is missing should be traffic and user acceptance. I think it is very necessary to add some cool points appropriately. Even if he is not the supreme leader of a behind-the-scenes organization, he is an unknown urban soldier king in a junior high school class. This type of story can turn things upside down at critical moments. Just using this small technique of accidentally shocking everyone can improve the reading experience of readers. Well, that's all.
"Our Secret Base" is a romantic science fiction novel about youth growth and juvenile adventure.
Recommended Copywriting If you are following your uncle on the highway back to the town from the city, you accidentally see a girl who looks like a mermaid. So, after you meet two girls who are convinced of the existence of aliens and a self-proclaimed realist in a seaside town - Do you feel that in your unique and unknown boyhood, an unprecedented grand adventure is about to come? "Work information" Book title: "Our Secret Base" Author: A Clockwork Orange Dream Type: Science Fiction·Evolutionary Variation Tags: Campus Love, Youth Growth, Teenage Adventure, Radio System Two heroines Number of words: 160,000 words Status: Serial Recommendation index: ★★★★★ (5/5) "Brief description of the work" The novel is set in 2005. The protagonist Yan Jingxing returned to his hometown following his uncle Yan Yongzhi's job transfer. The co-pilot of a car that was driving smoothly started by accidentally seeing a mermaid-like girl on the highway as she was singing. It tells the story of Yan Jingxing, the protagonist, who left the city and returned to a seaside town, and met two girls who were convinced of the existence of aliens and who called themselves realists. From then on, the gears of fate began to turn, and a secret and grand adventure that took place in his boyhood had quietly set sail. "Reason for Recommendation" In the novel, Yan Jingxing, Ji Chunzao and Xie Yuzhi embark on an unknown grand adventure of their own boyhood. The romantic and sincere youth love is entangled and intertwined with the author's magnificent and romantic narrative style. It is completely and unreservedly presented to the readers, just like a bouquet of proud roses in full bloom is delivered to you. In the novel, there are differences in ideological concepts between Ji Chunzao, who firmly believes in the existence of aliens, and Xie Yuzhi, a self-proclaimed realist. After witnessing the existence of alien creatures with his own eyes, Xie Yuzhi's ideological concepts changed, and he also actively participated in this adventure that belongs only to young people. When reading this adventure that belongs only to young people, it was like having a grand dream that took place on a summer afternoon, full of hot atmosphere, but full of vitality and hope. The combination of elements of youthful growth, teenage adventure and young love in the novel allows readers to feel the unique vitality of the collision, which seems to pull you into this beautiful and innocent summer dream. Wearing your own dream helmet on your head, you are isolated from the world and doing a daydream that is colorful, absurd, and in line with your own romantic fantasy that you don't want to wake up for a long time, struggling to pursue the obscure and concrete radio waves floating in the sunset. "Recommended Group" ❶Readers who like daily love novels with two heroines; ❷Readers who like novels full of youthful love; ❸Readers who like radio-wave novels full of literary romance. "Similar Recommendations" ❶"Invasion of the World" A Clockwork Orange Dream; ❷"The Rebellious Demon King" Zhao Qingshan; ❸"Love Begins on the Island (original title: Me and the Hatchling Girl of Zhitori Island)" Foolish Goose. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}
After reading "The Female Difficulty Eunuch" for yourself, have you ever written a work that surpassed the "Female Difficulty Eunuch"? I had promised to go back and fill in the holes after writing Invasion of the Human World, but I broke my promise again. I advise you to calm down, go back and finish writing "Women Difficulties" before starting a new book, otherwise you will definitely write one book after another!
It's obviously good at writing about young emotions and the fantastic fantasies of teenagers and girls, but it focuses on the shortcomings and avoids the strong points by writing about love triangles and monster-fighting upgrades 😂 Next time, try light fantasy or light science fiction, focusing on describing feelings. There is really no other book in Qidian that can have the atmosphere you had in the early stage.
Thoughts on reading books At first I wanted to listen to a new book to help me sleep before going to bed at night, but I didn't expect it to be so fascinating. After just two or three chapters and tens of millions of words, I have already understood the wonder of the coincidence of a boy and girl meeting, arousing my desire for the fantasy story that is about to unfold, and also arousing my long-standing fantasy of strange things that belongs only to youth. This can't help but make me sleepless. After meeting and getting to know each other, , understand each other, travel together, and after exploring the alien planet together, I suddenly realized that we were a little closer (it was really uncomfortable 😭, and I reluctantly pressed curiosity after a strong struggle). After the alien planet awakened its abilities, the boys and girls helped each other develop their abilities, and ignorant emotions also sprouted here, and their mutual affection increased. As the adventure and exploration deepens, the understanding of the world becomes clearer, and the pleasure of blowing away the fog that covers the unknown is really irresistible. Until today's newly released chapter 86 of the squad leader (bushi), Yuzhi expresses his feelings. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 86, after reading these 310,000 words, I actually felt a sense of satisfaction that the story could end here, (of course it couldn't end here), woo woo woo, it has indeed turned into the shape of a eunuch and a dove. All in all, the author's writing style is very good. It is not excessively packed with gorgeous words, but it has a sense of freshness, the plot is relaxed and powerful, innovative, and the characters are profound. The disadvantage is that after 3 months, it only has 310,000 words (annoying)! ! The opinions are only the personal feelings of one reader. It may be inconsistent with my remarks due to my lack of knowledge, ignorance, short-sightedness, and excessive emotion. Everyone is welcome to express your thoughts politely.
Teenagers and girls' adventures! ! !
{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} Do you still remember your childhood fantasies? Do you think there are really aliens in this world? Do you still want to explore this issue? If someone said that aliens exist, would you go with her? What would you think if someone said there are super powers? Book title: Our Secret Base Author: A Clockwork Orange Dream Number of words: 120,000 words (serialized) Elements: love, development, superpowers, students Introduction: The summer of 14 years old, the hot season-- He is ordinary, she firmly believes in the existence of aliens, and she calls herself a realist. The fate of boys and girls who met in a seaside town began to be gradually connected with a mysterious and terrifying distant planet... This unknown boyhood adventure is about to overturn the world. Tweet: 1. The author's writing style is excellent, and his ability to describe the environment is still very outstanding. When reading his works, I seemed to be able to clearly see the scenes he described, and the feeling of the pictures was particularly strong. He conveyed the details of the environment in a unique way that made me feel as if I was there. Whether it was a beautiful scene in nature or a busy street in a city, he was able to bring it to life in front of me with elegant words. I was deeply attracted by his descriptions, as if I could personally feel the wonderful scenery and unique atmosphere in his works. This kind of description made me immersed in it and enjoyed the intoxicating reading experience. 2. In terms of characters, there are two heroines, whose image is somewhat similar to "Invasion of the World". The first heroine, Ji Chunzao, faced family problems and was alienated by the people around her, but she did not give up on herself because of this. Instead, she chooses to keep to herself and explore the aliens on her own. The second heroine is Xie Yuzhi, a well-known figure in the school, who is also Ji Chunzao's roommate. She comes from a wealthy family, has excellent academic performance, and has provided a lot of help to Ji Chunzao's life. However, as a realist, she always wanted to persuade Ji Chunzao to give up his fantasy. But by chance, she also discovered alien creatures and actively participated in the exploration of alien creatures. Compared with the first novel, "Invasion of the World", the author has obviously learned a lot of lessons in this one. In this novel, the relationship between the two heroines and the hero is more natural. They support and complement each other rather than creating apparent contradictions. The display of this relationship makes the story more realistic. 3. In the plot, Yan Jingxing heard an unexpected sound on his way back to his hometown and pursued and met a creature he thought was a mermaid. However, the encounter ended suddenly, leaving him with many questions and hinting at the extraordinary nature of campus life. Then, on campus, he met the person he met on the way back to his hometown again that day. It turned out that she was his classmate! It's called Ji Chunzao. After hearing about her classmates' comments about Ji Chunzao, Yan Jingxing deliberately approached her to try to find out the truth. After contact and observation, the male protagonist remembered his childhood fantasy and decided to follow the girl to find the answer. In the end, he discovered a creature different from Ji Chunzao, which triggered more doubts and story development.
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We're separated again, right? Brother, you've completely forgotten the promise of the one next door, right? I can only say that it's not a huge loss after spending so much money to understand an author. Is this book ready to be cut?
I don't support the eunuch, but I owe it to the eunuch.
In fact, it is good to cut it quickly. If it starts to collapse, stop it in time. After Qiu Yimeng appeared on the scene, it changed from exploration + horror + love to fighting. If it continues to be written, it will become a pure urban supernatural novel. I really have no interest in reading it. The best thing the author writes is the sense of youth + thriller elements. There is not even a substitute for it on the market. The first half of the story, from the invasion of the human world to the secret base, was written with top quality. The rhythm of this book is broken. If I write it again, it won't be interesting at all. It's better to learn a lesson and write it again. The rhythm of Invasion of the World is quite good, the two main lines of emotion and world view are advancing steadily, the three-person adventure unit drama is also fascinating, and Zhu's mother keeps reminding readers that "there is a big one behind." The world view of the secret base was spread too quickly, and the three people's fighting power was too strong, causing the sense of horror to disappear after the mental hospital; Xie and Ji's emotional lines were not as nuanced as in the previous book; the two female protagonists are the best at writing delicate emotions while constantly having dramatic conflicts. . I feel that Qiuya is a bit redundant I still want to say that I owe it to the eunuch. The author of the eunuch does hurt the readers' feelings, but the author's writing is really good 🙂. I have never read such a sense of youth and fantasy from anyone else. If you have this writing style and ideas and plan to continue writing, I hope you pay more attention to the rhythm and what are the greatest strengths of the book.
When do you plan to finish writing "Women in Difficulty", or can you continue writing "Hou"?
Is this learning from the bottom of the sea? Then I will delete the book
Abilities and metaphors
The king is Xie Yuzhi, a metaphor for power. Sacrifice is Ji Chun Zao, a metaphor for faith. The warrior is Yan Jingxing, a metaphor for violence. These three forces all need to check and balance each other for a long time. Once one party completely overwhelms the other two, it means the collapse of the balance and a bad end.
Your writing style is second to none. Such a good talent but the skeleton of the story is not good. It is a pity. It would be great if the plot was more exciting, the story was more grand, the supporting characters were more outstanding, and the connotation was richer.
Radio girl and young boy! The trio's super-powered youth adventure!
The male protagonist Yan Jingxing, a junior high school student, transfers to the countryside. On the way, he meets a girl who calls herself a green-haired water monster. The girl Ji Chunzao has always believed in the existence of aliens. The male protagonist also saw alien creatures. Xie Yuzhi, the monitor who wanted to help Chunzao, was also accidentally involved. Reason for recommendation: 1. A sense of youth, interesting world view and plot Do you believe in UFOs and aliens? The male protagonist and two girls accidentally witnessed an alien creature and were involved in a wonderful youth adventure. From witnessing the alien creature to discovering a UFO, the latest chapter has been an alien adventure, and the trio successfully obtained alien superpowers. This kind of youth fantasy adventure is so cool! The beginning is exciting enough, and people are looking forward to the adventure that will follow. 2. Super powers and aliens plus a big spoonful of youthful love, a unique hybrid style The author Clockwork Orange Dream once bluntly said that his two favorite cultural products are horror and horror. This book also has this unique hybrid style, and the combination is very good. The trio work together under the threat of alien creatures, bursting out the spark of emotion, which is very flavorful. The previous book "Invasion of the World" has a similar style, but some book friends have commented that if you like horror, it feels that it is not scary enough, and if you like youth love, it feels that horror takes up too much space. It depends on personal preference. 3. The green-haired water monster and the little mother, delicate brushwork and wonderful character descriptions Ji Chunzao, a girl who calls herself the green-haired water monster, has always believed in "water monsters", "aliens" and "UFOs" since she was a child. After her parents disappeared mysteriously when she was seven years old, she has been looking for alien creatures, but no one else believed her. The male protagonist insisted on making friends with her and searching together. Xie Yuzhi, the squad leader who has always wanted to help Ji Chunzao, somehow has a mature and mature sense of tolerance like an adult. As a realist, she does not believe in the existence of aliens. She has always wanted to persuade Ji Chunzao to give up his fantasy, but accidentally witnessed alien creatures. After that, his attitude changed drastically and he actively participated in the exploration of alien creatures. She wanted to obtain the supernatural power to change everything. She did not know what happened in her past. The male protagonist Yan Jingxing is also a decisive young man with a sense of youth and participates in this adventure with the mentality of helping his friends. I can only say that the author of A Clockwork Orange Dream is too powerful. I would like to call him the best person in the country today. He is very good at shaping characters. Such delicate characters are difficult to describe in ordinary novels. 4. A sincere work after the failure of "Invasion of the World", it will be better to make a comeback The author's previous book "Invasion of the World" has a similar style, the same horror-filled youth love novel, and the same trio of one man and two women. This book is handled better. It can be seen that the author has learned the lessons of the previous book. The trio in the last book were passive throughout the book, forced to be involved in superpowers and horrific incidents, ran away from home, were plotted against, and were filled with a sense of powerlessness and drifting with the crowd. In this book, the trio takes the initiative to explore and take risks, with strong subjective initiative, and such youthful adventures give people a better impression. The plot of the heroine in the previous book was too silly, and the hero had no fighting ability and a bad personality. It just felt like a painful youth novel. At present, this book has reduced some of the NC operations of the previous book. The male protagonist in this book, as a warrior, has become a combat force and dares to take risks. It is much more comfortable to read. Plot prediction: 1. A more exciting alien exploration plot, with novel alien creatures, where did the aliens go in the end? 2. Will there be people or organizations on earth who also discover extraterrestrial creatures? There may be possible obstruction and attacks from insiders. 3. The background stories of the male and female protagonists themselves set up a lot of foreshadowing, such as the disappearance of Ji Chunzao's parents, Xie Yuzhi's reasons for pursuing superpowers, and the male protagonist's parents living abroad. Each of them is not simple, and there may be a plot behind it. Tags: love, two heroines, youth, superpowers, aliens, junior high school students (campus love story) Recommended for: light novel lovers, otakus who like the smell of literary youth and nerdy smells, chuunibyou who still have youthful fantasies in their hearts, and senior radio series. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial"}{"TopicId":"885512955633664000","TopicName":"Broken Copper"}
Another threesome, thumbs up! The writing style of A Clockwork Orange is unparalleled among the books I have read, and the characters it creates are vivid on the page. In my eyes, the previous book Invasion of the World is a magical book. It invades the human world, invades the human world, invades not only the human world, but also penetrates deeply into my heart. It's a pity that I secretly downloaded and read the last book in my dormitory at school, so I couldn't support the author. New books must be fully ordered to support 😁😁😁
A top-notch niche article. If I were 10 years younger, I would love it to the core. It's a pity that I am old and this article is too youthful.
Suddenly I found it was over, here's a comment I made last year
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I feel like the problem still lies in controlling the rhythm of the plot progress. The awkwardness of youthful love feels great, and the battle scenes are also well written. It's just that the battle suddenly changed from close-to-hand combat between people to EVA fighting apostles. It felt like the pace was still too fast. Even excluding Qiu Qimeng, she went to fight the BOSS after defeating the soldiers at the door.
I've finished reading it. It's just so-so.
I feel like I just want to finish it quickly. I guess I am stuck in a vicious cycle of writing slowly and getting bad grades, and not wanting to write anymore if my grades are bad. The first part is actually okay. I feel that A Clockwork Orange's mysterious fantasy about youth love is not bad at all, and the passionate supernatural battle is just a bit less interesting.
I like the atmosphere of the author's works, but this one can only be said to be a pity. I quite like the setting of the alien combat power.
My mind is confused. Sure enough, you should write about love😢
The author's descriptions of boys and girls are young and beautiful, giving people a sense of comfort in enjoying the cool air on a hot summer afternoon.
After reading The Bold Party, I was reminded of the beginning of this book.
The style of this novel is very bright, with the flavor of the summer seaside. Compared to Miss Xie, I prefer the curly-haired girl, the eccentric and coquettish little expert. Regarding the male and female protagonists later, I hope it will be Yan and Ji Xian together, and then Xie will attack them both at the same time.