Reborn, So Why Do I Have a Childhood Friend Now?

What a lousy book! You actually start charging for it after it's put on the shelf. An author with a bad attitude like you doesn't care if you don't read the book, just throw it out of the bookshelf, never to be seen again!

WOC found out that my favorite painter is my ex-girlfriend. . . Before, I watched a lot of painting tutorials because of my anxiety. When I searched Beep, I clicked on several videos in succession, but found them useless. Then I scrolled back and clicked on a video with a better-looking cover. I found that this teacher taught very well, and it was very rewarding after listening to it. Later, when I encountered a bottleneck period, I would watch this teacher's videos. I felt more and more that her lectures were really good, easy to understand and easy to understand, and her voice was very gentle. I felt sorry for her. Why didn't so many people watch such a good video? Once I drew a big picture and it felt weird no matter how I looked at it, so I thought of sending her a private message to ask her for advice. I originally thought that these teachers should have a lot to do, but she replied to me after a few hours. She was really nice and patient, and she drew the red line for me to see. When I thanked her, I asked if he would hold classes. She said it was not necessary, but I could contact her if I had any questions in the future. As long as she saw it, she would reply. I know she is very busy, so I always come to her when I encounter particularly difficult problems. Until last night, when she was painting live, her mother told him to go to bed early. The name she read was my ex-girlfriend's name. She was completely shocked. I couldn't believe it at the time, until I found out that her IP address was in the same area as my ex-girlfriend's location, and her tone and voice matched my ex-girlfriend's. . . I didn't expect this kind of horse-catching thing to happen at all. At this time, I still had some doubts, so I had to ask her for confirmation. But! She actually admitted it directly and recognized me. She said that I really "haven't changed at all" and accused me of not recognizing her voice. However, the last time I talked to her was a year ago. To be honest, her face was blurry to me. But I still remember that I liked her very much and she also liked me very much. I asked her what she was doing recently, and she said she was watching "Why I Got an Extra Green Plum After Rebirth". I asked her what it was, and she said: "How come I got an extra green plum after my rebirth" is a science fiction novel with two heroines written by the famous writer Pan Yida. Here, you will meet a wire monster that is not available for viewing for a fee, a mountain goblin whose five elements are bamboo shoots, and whose gender is an armed helicopter. The mysterious man

In this book, I don't talk about other settings, just the emotional line, the characters of these two girls (from appearance and figure to personality), the progress of the relationship between the characters, the male protagonist's attraction to them, and this feeling of jealousy. You are completely plagiarizing my diary and imitating my daily life. I advise the author to take care of himself and not to put my personal experience into your book.

After reading the first volume, I felt average Reading Shui Yue felt like he was showing off his skills Reading Bai Mo, I felt he was a genius (a perfect combination of delicate writing + strong emotions) but still too inexperienced After reading Ferris Wheel and Norway, I fucked🤔🤔🤔 I couldn't understand, but I was shocked🤯🤯🤯. God, God, God is so damn awesome, I don't know, I thought Brother Bird was here. This guy is really a genius. He doesn't feel like a romance novel writer from Earth😨😨😨. It feels like he writes with ease, leisurely and in one go. He is truly a born romance novel writer. I have never seen anyone as talented as him. I worship him, he doesn't feel like he is writing a romance novel, but he plays like a god.

I've seen the latest chapter, and I can only say it's a bit complicated. It's like a roller coaster ride. I liked it at first, but when I looked deeper, it turned out to be good or bad. Then the shortcomings exploded, and the plot of the male and female protagonists developed steadily. Overall, it's still worth watching. Let's look at the advantages and disadvantages below. Disadvantages: 1. Su Li's appearance rate was too high. Although it was improved later, I still want to mention it as the most unhappy point before. The most difficult plot should be that before going to the hero's house to play in the night, the hero called Su Li specifically to ask. If they are old enough, whatever they want to do is up to you and me. , If they are not underage, with the characters of the male protagonist and Ci Ye, plus the multiple guarantees of Ke Jing at home and Uncle Li, the driver outside, their interactions at home will be limited to friends. As a result, the male protagonist made a phone call, and the nature of the feeling changed. There was no wantonness and freedom of youth, but instead it was like playing house under the supervision of parents. The game is quite speechless. After surviving the plot of Su Li on the shelves, it gets much better later on. It only appears once after dozens of chapters and explains the cause of Ciye's mother's illness. The perception is much better; 2. The male protagonist's mind wandering problem. I didn't expect this to be a problem. He was distracted five or six times, some for half an hour, which affected the perception too much, although the reason was explained later. , But the protagonist itself is just a dull person, and coupled with this outrageous distraction, the male protagonist's image is almost dull. By the way, although the male protagonist is a dull person, I still hope that he can take the initiative and be more responsible when it comes to the emotional issues of the three people behind. If the protagonist is too cowardly and requires the woman to take action to open a harem, then the character's image is basically hopeless. In addition to the above problems, other shortcomings can only be said to be neither big nor small, such as the too old campus plot, where the whole school watched them fall in love. It is a bit awkward to watch now, and I can only browse it quickly... There are also sometimes too much force, such as the over-enthusiasm of the merchants, and the sudden shouting of the male protagonist's father (in a certain plot). It can only be said that these things are destroying the authenticity of the world view. Why do you want to read love stories? My understanding is to pursue unreality in reality. The school is real, the teachers are real, and the classmates are real. Time travel is unreal, and the perfect heroine is also unreal, but the more real the elements related to reality, the more perfect the unreal heroine. For example, everyone has experienced going to school, school, teachers, classmates, these are all in reality, and a perfect campus girl It is basically impossible for the protagonist to exist in reality. The more realistic you describe school, teachers, and classmates, the more resonant you can be, and the unreal female protagonist in it will be more perfect and more likable (suddenly inspired, a little superficial opinion) Advantages: The biggest advantage is the shaping of the female protagonist, Ke Jing will not say it, she and the male protagonist make jokes and fights, basically a channel soul companion After the couple, Ciye also started to work hard. The career line of the male protagonist is quite satisfactory, but the biggest highlight is that Ciye invested in a cat cafe in order to have more contact with the male protagonist. It not only shows that she has a good vision, but also shows that she can take brave steps for love. With some details, Ciye now gives me a good impression. In addition, the writing style of this book is also quite interesting, and some interesting jokes can make people smile. I can basically fill in any pitfalls, such as the mind-wandering problem above. Although I listed it as a shortcoming, I think it's good that the author can take the initiative to explain it. The following are some of my worries. Although the dual female protagonists and the dull male protagonist will make the pre-love plot longer, after all, I am here to read a romance novel. I still hope to see a sweet love. I hope the author can control the proportion of the plot of pulling and love. Although there seems to be more to say, I forgot to edit the copy for too long 😥😥. This part can only be said here. I will talk about it later when I think of it. Summary, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, worth a look

Although I really want to read your book, when I was a child, the fortune teller said that my five elements are bamboo shoots, which conflict with pandas. If you don't change my name, I won't read it.

Why do authors still need royalties when writing books? It's very hard for me to read books. Can the royalties be transferred to my account?

The panda is actually quite good-natured. I put a rubber band on him last time, and I lied to him that it was super thin, and he wasn't angry either.

Su Ciye

In the context of modern society, there is a crime called bigamy. If both heroines accepted it, it would feel disgusting.