Mercenaries and Adventurers

What is the main point of this book? It feels like neither a character nor a story. The whole article is filled with tons of details. You may say it's sloppy, but it's very solid in every aspect. You might say it's not slick, but it feels like the writing is not refined. It just feels like it's splashed out. Everywhere is uniform, but the focus and backbone can't be found. However, the author is still very talented. He can write what he wants to write, and he also likes what he writes. This is better than many people. I wonder if the author will continue writing after he finishes writing this book? I feel that the author has the qualifications to become a great master, but is slightly lacking in experience. It would be a pity if he didn't write.

When Jeddu ended today's adventure and returned to Foxtail Chamber of Commerce, he couldn't wait to tell the manager James La about what happened today. "... After the city hall officials who led the soldiers to the scene followed me to the drainage channel, they inspected the scene where we hunted the monster spider, and carefully looked at the hidden monster nest, and concluded that the problem was serious." "According to Mr. Fulun, this monster is called the "Iron-toothed Spider" and is a species of growth. A gregarious monster that breeds quickly. Once it is in a place with no opponents and plenty of food, it can grow into a group of terrifying killers like adult domestic dogs in just half a year! " " Master Fulun also said that this kind of guy who usually only lives in caves in the hot areas in the south of the kingdom actually appeared in Kendall County in the north of the kingdom. It is said that someone did not send it here! No one believes it!" "What's more, Kendall City's drainage channels are flushed twice in the morning and evening. How can a monster build a nest that can withstand the flushing of sewage from the entire city?" "I guess it won't take long until those demon spiders grow up and attack the residents of the city! "If we wait until then, it will definitely cause panic among the residents of Kendall City." Master Fulun also said that the body and eggs of the devil spider could be used as medicinal materials. After an inventory, the city hall bought them together, so in the end the three of us got a reward of 3 gold coins each! " Steward James La, who was listening and taking notes, frowned for a long time. He analyzed the matter carefully. "The appearance of monsters will indeed bring life danger to the residents of Kendall City. The corpse and eggs of this demon spider are definitely valuable as magic materials. In total, the reward of nine gold coins for this credit is not too much. It can only be said to be just right. " "The noble gentlemen are still as stingy as ever. " Jamura shook his head helplessly, and immediately turned his gaze to the young man with an excited face, and asked with a smile: "Jedu, how do you plan to use this money next? It is completely sufficient to repay your debt to the Chamber of Commerce, but you can rest assured that I do not mean to rush you. " Listening to the words of the steward Jamura, Jedoo shook his head slightly and said with a little apology: "Sorry, Lord Jamura, I have no way to repay the debt of the Chamber of Commerce for the time being. I want to be like Lord Joe Kil, looking for a suitable master to teach me and improve my skills. " "I don't want to spend my time hunting slime monsters in sewage drains in the future. I want to improve my strength to get more ways to make money, so this debt may have to be delayed for a while. " Listening to Jiedu's explanation, Jamura nodded in agreement. The Foxtail Chamber of Commerce is not to the extent that it can't continue to operate without the debt, so he naturally respects Jiedu's choice. But Jamura is a little confused in his heart. At the beginning, Joe Kil only spent a small number of copper coins to let the city gate guards come to help with training. How to get to Jiedu? Do you need such a huge amount of money to survive here? Faced with Jamula's doubts, Jedu did not hide anything and explained seriously: "After Mr. Fulun from the government office paid us the reward, he turned around and reprimanded the city guards for their carelessness in patrolling. He asked them to send more people to be vigilant in the future and patrol the sewage channels like they did in the city. They increased the number of patrols every day to ensure the stability of the city. " "So I think, if you want to use a few copper coins to hire several city gate guards to take turns to train your skills like Qiao Keer, you can basically give up hope. My idea is that while I have money, I can ask other masters to teach me some combat skills. " Jamra thought about the combat masters in Kende City who could be hired by people with Jeddu's status for money. The powerful warriors in the city seemed to be serving under the nobles or in the business guilds. It would definitely not be easy to recruit such people with the loyalty of their master. He thought carefully, and finally thought of the powerful old warrior who appeared in the sword forging competition last year. Thinking of this, he immediately reminded: "The old warrior who appeared in the weapon forging competition in the city last year, I wonder if you still remember it, Jiedu?" " "Are you talking about the veteran who went on stage to test the machete at the same time as Joe Gill? " "Yes, if you really want to learn skills, I suggest that learning from him would be a good choice. The other candidates I know are not as good as him. As for the information about the old soldier, I would like to help you find out. " "And I suggest that you discuss with the other two teammates and jointly spend money to handle the apprenticeship matter. This way, after learning the combat skills, you can still have some money to buy new equipment. " Listening to Jamula's arrangements, Jeddu nodded without thinking, and had even thought about how to persuade them. He said seriously and sincerely: "Thank you, Sir Jamula. " "It's okay, if it weren't for you, I wouldn't have known about the iron-toothed poisonous spider appearing in Kendall City, and I'm looking forward to the adventure stories you will share with me next. " Jamra chuckled and shook his head, but after thinking about this matter in depth, his eyes gradually became serious. This matter is definitely not as simple as imagined. Monsters living in remote areas appeared in Kendall City He even built a nest in the drainage pipe? He shook his head and reminded: "Jedu, the matter of the monster in the drainage pipe is probably a conspiracy of the county governor. How can ordinary people go to all the trouble to get the monster here? " "I even suspect that the ambush by the bandit gang I encountered before and the numerous security incidents that have occurred in the county recently were all deliberately caused by the count, just to create panic and cause riots. When the guards in the county are tired of coping, they will... And again... Just like Qiao Keer said, "take advantage of the situation." " "Now I really hope that the baron from the expedition will immediately return to the county and restore the previous peace to the territory. In the entire Kingdom of St. Halls, there are few lords as wise and kind as Baron Kendall. They wantonly trample on the lives of the people in their territory, and are greedy enough to take away all the property, wives and daughters of every farmer! Almost all the lords outside are like this! " Jamra's tone gradually became solemn, but then he thought about it. If there were no bandits everywhere, would the young boy Jiedu in front of him still be a merchant driver? He couldn't help but recall Jiedu's recent changes. After the traveling convoy was ambushed by bandits, the Foxtail Chamber of Commerce only lost some pensions. For Jeddu, the money and the means of transport were like losing the companions he had been with day and night. In fact, Jamra was not particularly able to understand this feeling at first, but when he saw that Jeddu was willing to spend all his savings and even borrow money from the chamber of commerce, he wanted to hire a church pastor to settle his companions! Br>Because of this behavior, Jamra wanted to find Jeddu again and guide the young man out of this predicament. However, he did not expect that the driver, who originally thought he would be decadent because of this, would appear in front of him with a new look as if he had found a new goal in life. At that time, the sadness in the eyes of the driver Jeddu appeared. It is difficult to cover up. "Lord Jamra, I want to tell you about Lord Keir, the matter of radishes and potatoes. I can understand what you did at that time. After all, how can a donkey be more important than a human life? I understand. If I can be as powerful as Lord Keir... Maybe this kind of thing can be avoided, right? " The boy no longer has the lazy look of the past, his handsome face has become stiff, and his eyes are burning with the fire of revenge! "I want to know more about Lord Kil, and I want to become as powerful as him, so I should be able to do more things..." Jadu's attitude at that time surprised Jamradu. He did not expect that the lazy driver in the past would make such a change, and even saw the shadow of Kil in this young man. >There are still many differences from Joe Kiel at that time. Jedoo is eager to become an adventurer and improve his strength not only to repay the debts of the Chamber of Commerce, but more importantly to find the fierce bandits and avenge Potato Carrot. Even with Joe Kiel's experience, it will not be easy for Jedoo to become a strong adventurer. # The next day, the three adventurers in the Kendall City drainage channel chose to meet at the Table Corner Tavern. A large amount of gold coins were involved, so Jeddu avoided the crowded hall and instead led the two of them into a guest room. He ordered a table of meat dishes and a small bucket of beer and slowly enjoyed it. Three days ago, through the introduction of the bartender Todd, the three of them started to get together. In the past three days, in addition to their respective identity information, everyone has been hunting ooze monsters in the smelly sewage channels according to Jiedu's instructions. If Jiedu had not made preparations to resist the stench before the action, he had hunted many ooze monsters. Erka's impetuous team has long been disbanded. Today, Jeddu will take this opportunity to celebrate his reward and explain clearly the ins and outs of his series of arrangements, so as not to leave any doubts about him. >Jedu was talking while eating. He didn't talk about the reason for his career change, but started with how he learned to hunt ooze monsters from Joe Keil... After all, since last year, the warrior Joe Keil who was favored by the God of Agriculture started his own life in Baron Kendall. After the story of making a lot of money from his adventure activities spread, many people were inspired. Many interested people wanted to replicate Joe Kil's success, so they took a short walk out of the city to try their luck in the drainage channel in the south of the city or in the swamps farther away. This is the place where Joe Kiln hunted slime monsters. Unfortunately, the half-knowledge of Joe Kiln's adventure stories they heard at the wine table didn't help them. These reckless people only saw that Joe Kiln got rich but couldn't see the various efforts he put in. Power! Without making any preparations and not understanding the terrain of the swamp, they rushed in with machetes, sticks, and daggers in hand. The result was that these people were taught obediently by the puddles of the swamp, and the bees, mosquitoes, spiders, and snakes waited for the lurking sticks! The liquid monsters surrounded them and sprayed them with acid, causing these daredevils who only had a pot lid to pay a heavy price. They just cursed at the south of the kingdom where Qiao Keer was heading and then left in embarrassment. As for Qiao Keer, he went to drain the sewage. Hunting in the passage was ignored by everyone. Thanks to the embarrassing experience of these people, I first searched for all kinds of information and prepared the equipment and armor to fight the slime monsters. My conditions were better than when Joe Kiel first debuted, but not much better. It was just that the equipment was his own. Unlike Joe Kiel, the only weapon was a dagger given by Todd. But even if he did this, he would not succeed at the first time. Instead, I repeatedly changed my equipment. At first, I tried to imitate Joe Kiel and used the same equipment and tools to go on adventures in the swamp. However, I was still surrounded by slime monsters in the swamp and was very embarrassed. There was no other choice but to escape from the swamp. "In the end, it was Mr. Jamura, the steward of the Foxtail Chamber of Commerce, who finally determined it through repeated consideration of Mr. Joe Kil's oral memories. He had concealed part of the process of hunting the slime monster. " "Just relying on a garbage box helmet and a pot lid shield can't resist the attacks of swarms of ooze monsters. I have tried it and even put some clothes on it. " At this point, Jedoo couldn't help but shake his head. He immediately looked at Gorka and Rickett, and smiled: "Fortunately, we have detailed written records, and we finally found the trick from the tools used by Joe Kiel. " "Guess, what did I find? Golka took a sip of beer and shook his head disapprovingly of Jeddu, who was trying to show his offence. "It must be the kind of tree branch curtain you wear in the drainage channel. It can be used as a bridge when you spread it in the swamp. When you wear it, it is like a pair of armor." "I really didn't expect this kind of equipment to have such a big effect. Thank you for letting us wear that thing, otherwise I would have been stabbed by the big spider just because of the pot lid! It is indeed the right decision to let you be the captain." As the conversation gradually opened, the sound of beer malt gradually enveloped the room, and it felt like the atmosphere was gradually in place. Jie Ducai chose to continue. "I don't know if you have noticed that the security environment in the county is not particularly good recently. Many of the men in our county have been trained as militiamen. Wouldn't those who are thoughtful become guards to make a living?" "I thought that if there were more people, it would be difficult for guys like us who don't have much experience to get the job easily." "What happened yesterday was that we were lucky enough to hunt down the little magical beasts that had not grown up. If we had met the adult magical spiders at that time, we would not have known what the result would be in just these two seconds." "..." Golka and Rickett looked at each other. Seeing that the atmosphere had been foreshadowed, Jeddu simply explained directly. "So we can't just value the profit from killing the ooze monster in front of us. If you want me to be the captain, then I will naturally have to find a way for everyone, right?" Although Gorka has an impatient and impulsive personality, it does not mean that the other party is stupid. He heard that Jeddu had an idea and asked him more questions. "Captain Jiedu, what do you think?" "My suggestion is to find those seniors who really have the ability to teach us martial arts. After we improve our strength, use the remaining money to replace weapons and armor, and when we are fully prepared, we will definitely receive higher-paying tasks." Jiedu spread his hands and added with a smile: "Otherwise, what should we do next?" "The drainage channel was blocked by guards. We can't go. It's too troublesome to make money by killing ooze monsters in the swamp, and I've already killed them. We need to go out of the city to find more profitable tasks. That's what Joe Kil did. He consulted the four guards at the city gate, learned the guards' martial arts, and went out of the city." The little alcohol in the inferior beer couldn't get enough of Gorka. Listening to Jeddu's comprehensive analysis, his original idea of ​​going to the red house was gradually given up. "By exercising and learning higher skills, we can improve our own strength. From the perspective of an adventurer, can we earn more money?" Golka understood that there was nothing wrong with what captain Jeddu said, and he spent money to hire people to teach combat skills, or to change weapons and armor. Accepting more difficult missions will make you more money, right? He thought carefully in silence, and finally asked urgently: "I think it's okay, let's ask the guards at the city gate to train us." Listening to Gorka's suggestion, Jeddu shook his head and said: "In this situation, the city guards will definitely not have time to teach us if they strengthen their duties. However, through the channels of Jamula's manager, I know that there is a retired veteran The warrior skills are very high." "I think we can give it a try. If he offers a high price, we can pool the money to ask him to teach us. We have to think about it in the future, right?" "..." As for Rickett, he did not express any opinions, but silently ate the huge lunch he ordered, occasionally showing an honest smile. He has always listened to Gorka and will not object as long as Gorka agrees. If you need to raise money for tutoring, then the amount will definitely not be low. While Gorka was heartbroken, he couldn't help but think about his future. Finally, he gritted his teeth and said: "It's up to you. Let's raise money to find that veteran and invite him to teach us fighting skills!"

The story of this book is good, I like it very much, the protagonist is good, I like it very much, the writing is also good, I feel comfortable reading it. I just wrote too much. If I can shorten it to 1 million words, this book will definitely be signed. If I can shorten it to 2 million words, this book will become a god. 1. First of all, four sentences are enough for the singing part. I can sing along with it. If it is too long, I can't read it, let alone sing along. 2. It's okay to write the villain if it's bad and longer, but it's not easy to write the villain if it's shorter. The good parts of the villain should be simplified. I saw that the villain's wife and children were written about the bag hole, which made me feel uncomfortable. 3. Write less bad things about your boss or partner. If you write about the church and God, they are very philistine in the eyes of the protagonist, but you will benefit from working for them. Reality is already philistine enough. If you are going to write a novel, make it more beautiful. 4. Good-selling novels generally have a chapter of 2,000 words. Your 4000 word chapter. This is a hard sell.

After looking at it, I suddenly remembered how I had given up the trap. The gods control the human world, which makes me feel too dark. It would be okay if the ones in the East are not the ancestors, but they are also bound. The problem is that the Western gods are too difficult to believe.

It's so cold in the middle of winter, and book friends don't go out anymore. The author should update a few more chapters to stay alive...

That is to say, I don't think the protagonist will develop in the direction of a magic swordsman in the future. If he is a pure warrior, why not learn magic? Are there any considerations? And the knight, what I want to talk about is the protagonist's fighting style. Will he fight immediately like a knight? Will you do mounts again in the future?

Why no guns? Doesn't it mean that magical civilization is highly advanced? At least there should be fire guns! And why don't you just post a long comment? It's so painful to read paragraph by paragraph! You didn't even see the comment I just posted below.

What I am talking about is, is there a country with a central unified system similar to an empire? In that case, mass-producing weapons shouldn't be a problem, right? And didn't you say that magic in this world is highly advanced? There should be a magic gun, right? Or is it similar to World of Warcraft?

It's actually on the shelves. It's a sign of perseverance to persist for so long, from never signing a contract to signing and finally being put on the shelves.

The kingdom's capital city, dwarves, and elves said they wanted to go out for a walk, but after three and a half years and more than 4 million words, they have only left Novice Town. Can't you rush to write 20 million words?

I know why the author has poor grades and can't sign a contract, because you are writing a story rather than a novel. For example, this sword-forging competition has twenty-one chapters, and some things are written in too much detail. After all, you are writing a novel, not a story. Even if the stories are honest, they are rarely so detailed, which leads to unsatisfactory results. For this sword-forging competition, the daily plot can be simplified to three to five pictures instead of twenty-one. I don't know how other people feel, but to me this is a running account. . . I don't know if the author understands what I mean.

This author is much better than other authors. Other authors would have run away long ago if they wrote like this.

The writing of this book is not good. What attracts me is that the author details the growth of a young man in a fantasy world (both in terms of strength and mind). There is a simple view of good and evil at the beginning, including helping farmers fight goblins, and fighting robbers later. But in the third volume, the flavor changes drastically. Following Knight Crow, he burns, kills and plunders in the name of knights. If it is said that killing surrendered people in the Chamber of Commerce is life. However, when I was escaping from the eagle monster and dealing with the village later, and later after receiving the refugee mission, I only focused on completing the mission and destroying the lives of various towns and villages. When I went to the Dwarf Valley to forcefully invade and fight, what I saw was a bandit who did not regard the lower class as human beings, just to complete the mission, and likes to use the mission as a name and legitimacy to comfort himself and the readers. Of course, you can tell the way. The protagonist has also accomplished some "just" things, such as rescuing refugees and killing bandits. For example, the Dwarf Valley may have liberated the squeezed human farmers. (I stopped reading the third volume after entering the Dwarf Valley. There may be similar whitewashing later, but in my opinion, it is indiscriminate to force into a land that already has original residents in order to allow refugees to have land. The protagonist does not consider the original inhabitants during this period. With the destruction of the residents, there is only the excitement of completing the task. No matter how I try to make up for it later, I think the protagonist is disgusting), but the protagonist's attitude towards the people below and his obedience to the so-called unreasonable conditions of his superiors, such as forcibly killing surrendered people and disregarding his own strength to complete the task, completely illustrate the so-called cowardly style of flattering the superior and bullying the subordinate. What is the personality charm of this protagonist? Of course, the author can say that the people below are not all kind-hearted. The medieval Western European peasants who are generally used as the basis for farmers in fantasy worlds are inherently ignorant and rude. For example, it can be said that in this Western fantasy world that only pays attention to strength, it is rare for the Baron and Crow Knight to help the protagonist grow. How can he disobey? After all, he must grow. However, such a world has always been like this, but in such a world, some people can write a mercenary character who has personality and is not disgusting (open your mission log), but some authors can only write a mercenary character who is disgusting, flatters superiors and subordinates, and is blindly arrogant when dealing with things (the expansion before fighting Spider Warcraft in the second volume, the expansion when fighting werewolves) and temporary disregard for the bottom class. Why is this? What I want to see is the growth of a protagonist with a bottom line, charisma and shining points, rather than a gradually alienated protagonist who can only talk nonsense and run around here and there, recognizing a bunch of scum as his respected elders, so I will give you a reward of 500 points to say goodbye. By the way, the last thing I want to say is that the fighting you wrote is terrible, and the various characters can't stand up when talking. Even if you try to supplement it with various life details, they don't look like people at all. Overall, the story seems too boring. Although today's fantasy books There has also begun to be a trend of micromanaging everything, but if you look at your mission log, I have a mission log and Goblin relies heavily on these books. Yours is a real book. The characters have no shining points, the plot is boring, and the force settings are ups and downs (I don't understand what you wrote. The book is also 21 years old, why do you still use the ridiculous knight class and the so-called life force? There are so many good books in DND to learn from? How do you get into the knighthood? In this kind of slow-paced book, the accumulation of force can be slow or small, but the settings and standards for force growth must be clear, otherwise readers will be impatient to get through what you said at the beginning, which is why you have never been able to sign the contract). Although it can be seen that you wrote this book with great care, and your plot is not unintelligent, it is really not because other book reviews said that you are not a novice and therefore your grades are so bad that you cannot sign a contract, but because the settings, plots, and characters you wrote are not interesting enough (although you have shown many of your settings and characters in the post) The background story, but the knight's life force gave me the same sense of déjà vu as seeing fighting spirit. It's really hard to comment. I thought this was written by a junior high school student who had never been exposed to excellent western fantasy works? It feels like the protagonist of Chapter 1 and the protagonist of Chapter 1000 will be surprised by each other when they meet. I hope you will continue to work hard, and I hope you can write better books in the future.

This "Power for Love" is really awesome. I watched it for a while when I was 23 years old. At that time, it only had 14 monthly votes and 3 million words. One year has passed in the blink of an eye, and I didn't expect you to still keep writing. I remember you said at the time that you were interested in starting a sci-fi wasteland in the future Dude, I guess you're middle class or above in reality? If finances and time permit, let's write and have fun. After all, this is really not the traditional way of writing online articles. You want to write it as a diary! I'm afraid I didn't come from another world, so just edit the diary and send it back 😁 It is definitely impossible to write down your grades. If you look carefully, you will find that you are really trying your best to write every detail clearly. Do you really regard the protagonist Zhao Ji in the book as yourself in another world? Another one, even though your plot is ridiculously slow, even though your plot is as bland as water, and even though your results are unsightly, there are still 600 people leaving inscriptions of appreciation for you in the comment area Between the lines of the book, there is no desire for fragments of Ferrari, just plain and relaxed, like taking a nap on a recliner in the afternoon, and suddenly a copy of "The Story of the Horizon" flies into the palm of your hand. It is very comfortable. Of course, you can also really try to write a purely descriptive chapter. The imaginary scenery of another world is very interesting. I rarely see this kind of online article. This kind of extremely long online article is just really boring. Having said this, it is no longer necessary to keep it secret. I wish you happiness every day when you write.

The atmosphere of another world is created very well, and the author's care can be seen in the detailed description. But as most reviews have said, the pace is too slow. I like fantasy novels and adventurous journeys all over the world. One after another, powerful monsters are buried in the sand of history and turned into relics and treasures of songs. The customs and war conflicts of different countries and races. The confrontation between religious theocracy and royal power of generations. The calculations and schemes between nobles and grand dukes. The uprising organizations secretly resisting by the civilians. Elves, orcs, dwarves, dragons, gods, and countless fantasy creatures exist in this world. But the premise is that no matter what kind of legendary story, the protagonist must be strong. Being strong does not necessarily have to be blessed by the "system". Just like Guts in "Legend of Sword and Wind", he remains unyielding despite war and hardships. Can't ordinary people become the legends that bards sing in taverns? That's what I want to see, I want to see Zhao Ji become that powerful hero.

Pig's Foot never knew what to do. He followed so many knights and kept killing thieves and monsters. Werewolves forgot that they had a large piece of silver that they got from the ruins. In the end, they lost their fingers and their heart and got nothing. When they went to walk on the path of knights, they were found to have no heart and were forced to leave the ruins. The silver bullion was still near the ruins. After the war, Pig's Foot definitely had no chance to be transferred. When I wrote about the ruins, Pig's Foot was actually not short of money and all it needed was cash. You can mint pig's feet by yourself. You can spend two or a year to find a place to build a wooden house by yourself, find a mold, and learn how to heat it. If there is a mold, just melt the silver nugget and pour it in. You can make silver coins from other places and exchange them for gold coins at multiple merchants. If you have money, just buy armor and knight training methods. If you don't have one at the border, it will take a year. Go to the empire and find a way to buy it, or look for channels. There must be knights who are short of money and are willing to guide Pig's feet into the path of knighthood. You can spend money on any supplements. Once you become a knight, you can wander around. When the metal frame of the elven ruins is made into armor, Pig's feet can tell who else is there. When the strength of Pig's feet increases, you can join a noble to get a fief or learn magic from a magician. World of Warcraft requires at least the strength of a knight to have a good chance of winning, and only with the strength of a knight can you keep your trophies. Pig's feet have fought so many times and you really haven't gotten a hair. It's not worth it. If you go to cash in the relic silver, at least you won't lose your heart, your fingers, and almost your feet. You won't pay so much and get almost nothing. If you don't have money or you haven't found a way to make money, you need to engage in these high-risk things. In order to build a good relationship, you follow the path of a knight. Money can be used as a substitute for paying the price. Others don't trust you to throw money, and others are not willing to teach you to throw money. It doesn't even need to be that troublesome. If you have a good relationship with the Saturnalia, throw money or do work for them. They must have a knight's way, or simply and rudely give money to the God of Wealth. Now I feel like I have forgotten that there is a silver nugget buried near the ruins. The knight will definitely find it after the battle and bring people there. It is not buried very deep or far away. It will be funny when the silver nugget is found to destroy the pig's trotter mouth. No one can play such a bad card with King Bomb.

Well, the weapons are similar to Dark Souls with a bit of a fantasy theme. There are many kinds of crafting materials, and the final weapons are also many kinds. I understand what you mean. In this world view, it is impossible to mass-produce universally configured weapons, at least in the country where the protagonist lives now. Because I have seen that the strong knights have not reached universal strength. Although it may be due to their remote status, it is easier to explain that it is a feudal system. It is impossible to mass-produce weapons without a central unified system. The knight gun I am talking about is a mass-produced weapon, mainly used for large-scale knight charges. Knight-level warriors, according to your statement, mostly use long-range weapons to throw spears, bows and crossbows, and fight in circles while riding horses and shooting, and then fight in close combat when the ammunition is insufficient. But what I want to say is that this kind of combat method similar to guerrillas cannot have too many people. It is similar to elite troops fighting against elite troops. It can only be used for small-group operations. If two armies confront each other, no matter what? There should be 10,000 people! In this case, how could a remote attack be possible? It's not modern trench warfare. At most, magic cannons or magic attacks are used at the beginning, and the rest is cold weapon combat, so Knight Impact is used in this kind of place. Although looking at the current plot, it is difficult to see a large-scale war. Moreover, the main purpose of the knight's charge is to clear troops. It is impossible for every knight to be a strong knight, right? Moreover, a knight's charge does not necessarily rely solely on the momentum brought by speed. It can also have some magical features. For example, if several knights gather together, they will use life energy to produce something similar to a group skill. The more people there are, the higher the attack power will be.

I have to be convinced by this author. After reading more than 100 W words, there is a lot of description of the environment and dialogue. The whole book is not interesting at all. There is no cheat code when traveling to another world. It is just a guide to life in another world. The author does not put it on the shelves. He just wrote more than 300 W words in a self-proclaimed way. I am also convinced! Some parts are quite interesting to watch. For example, when doing tasks, it feels like the author has written a book about the feeling of playing the game, so it looks tired, but I guess the author himself is happy, but the readers are not happy, and it makes my balls hurt to read it.

When I saw the beginning of the third volume, I was really drowsy and defeated. This book creates a rich western fantasy world. The description of Kendall City at the beginning made me immersed in it. The fighting feels more like Kingdom Come. But the book is too detailed and too slow. The author seems to write whatever comes to mind. It is obviously a self-exciting forging competition. What is the use of the runaway girl's commission in the story? After writing four or five chapters, the protagonist gets 2 silver coins. Afterwards, the buyer The cart also costs 3 silver coins... At the end of the second volume and the beginning of the third volume, the protagonist, the thieves, and the three parties of Warcraft really made me numb. I wrote almost twenty chapters, and I only have one feeling when I read this...

At least the author carefully conceived a real alien world. It's great. Come on.

For Western fantasy novels, it would be much better if the protagonist's name is changed to match the Western fantasy worldview.

Preface Since Joe Keel left the caravan, the backyard of the Chamber of Commerce has become deserted. Instead of the diligent martial arts training of Joe Keel in the past, only the braying of horses, donkeys and a young driver lazily sunbathing were left. Whenever Mr. Jamra, the caravan steward, walks into this yard, he will be immersed in the memory of the energetic Kil who worked hard and vigorously and sweated, but in the end he only nodded to the driver and left with a sigh. The young driver knew that the steward did not like young drivers and guards like him in the Chamber of Commerce who were living without purpose. He looked down upon these people who had no ambitions and lived ordinary lives mediocrely and ignorantly day after day. "When did I start to be like this?" In fact, the little driver was not so lazy before. It was just that his companions around him always asked him to do uncomfortable things, which made him gradually close himself off and devote his energy to taking care of the donkeys. When he was not driving the donkeys, he carefully took care of the "radishes" and "potatoes" in the donkey pen, brushed their fur, and fed them fresh fodder. This was his entire life. After feeding the two donkeys, the little driver used a brush to carefully comb the hair of the two shiny donkeys. It was not until Aunt Dilu shouted from the front yard urging him to eat that the little driver stopped what he was doing and covered the donkeys with warm blankets to ensure that they were warm and comfortable before clapping his hands and leaving. Late at night, the little driver was awakened by the unhappy braying of the donkeys. Thanks to the nutritious food provided by the Chamber of Commerce, and with his good night vision, the little driver quickly discovered the source of the donkeys' screams after standing in front of the second-floor window. Three fat mice were scurrying around among the rough piles in the donkey pen, seemingly finding a comfortable place to stay in winter. "Damn it! How dare you let my "carrots" and "potatoes" not sleep well, I will make it impossible for you to sleep!" The little driver quickly walked back to the bed, reached out from under the pillow and took out a shiny slingshot. Returning to the window, he held the handle of the slingshot tightly with his left hand, bent his arms slightly and pushed out parallel, with the right side of his body facing backward, his waist straight and his abdomen in, his back slightly bent, and his feet standing in a T-step. With his right hand, he pinched the leather bag filled with stones and pulled it straight back until the thumb of his right hand was close to the tip of his right nose. He aimed briefly and relaxed his thumb and index finger. A stone the size of a finger flew out with a "swish" sound and was carried by the strong wind, hitting the head of the fat rat rolling excitedly in the thatch of the donkey pen downstairs. With a crisp sound, the rat's head was smashed by the hard rocks flying at high speed, and its liver and brain were shattered! After the little driver quickly did this three times, his eyes were sharp and his movements were smooth without any sluggishness. He was completely different from his usual lazy and sleepy state. After three soft noises, the donkeys stopped braying. The young driver also stuffed the slingshot under the pillow, got into the bed and continued to sleep. "Only... When...?" Unexplained murmurs came from the bed.

I really like this kind of subject matter. The author's writing style is not bad, but the writing style is procrastinating and long-winded. The plot of the supporting characters can be described by the author in a few paragraphs, but the author can write a whole chapter.

The further back I look, the better the author's writing becomes, and the progress is still very obvious.

After coming back, I spent three hours tinkering with Easy Map to create this abstract map. I was confused by the icons that needed to be added. The representative icons were all makeshift, and the boundary lines and roads had not yet been fully studied. And I don't know why the canvas given is so small. If I want to mark more places, there seems to be not enough space. Is there any book friends who know how to share it? I will study it tomorrow. Author: You can try it when you have time

I admire the author. He is still writing after several years. The author does not do it to make money, but treats novels as a hobby. Come on

I have been writing for six years but have not finished the story of one year 🤭

Then you need to make some weapons with more magical characteristics, which are different from the real world and test your imagination. The weapons with magical characteristics I refer to are not bows and arrows or crossbows, but magic weapons that are similar to guns but different from guns. From shape to inner, they are completely original and test your imagination and creativity. So I recommend you to use guns. It is actually a more convenient behavior. After all, most people cannot imagine things that do not exist in reality at all. You will be more or less affected by some things in the real world.

I have a question. I think the protagonist has always used a rifle that can be wielded directly. Will he use that kind of knight gun in the future? Or is it the style of today's big guns? Because I feel that the kind of knight's gun in the Middle Ages is only suitable for sprinting. In fact, their knight's competition also involves two knights charging each other to see which side is the first to knock it off the horse with the gun. I feel that this kind of knight's gun is a specialized charge and not suitable for wielding. But if I use the current style of the gun, I feel that when I fight immediately in the future, I will be a little weak when charging with the enemy with the knight gun. How should the author deal with this? Sorry, it's a bit too wordy, but I'm really curious, please understand.

The monsters in the author's books are all very unique and delicious.