The Celestial Origin Immortal Records

It can be said that it is one of the most satisfactory novels I have read in recent years I have been reading for almost ten years and have read many novels about cultivating immortals. Except for "The Road to the Master of the Cultivation Sect" and this one, there are almost none that I thought were good. I have also carefully thought about the differences between other books and these two. Here are some personal opinions. If you don't like them, don't criticize them. In essence, novels about cultivating immortals are not about cultivating immortals. After all, those who write books and those who read are also human beings. Where do the immortals come from? Even if it is a book written by an immortal, how can an ordinary person understand it if he has not become an immortal? Many people say that cultivating immortals is naturally different from ordinary people, but art comes from life. If it is separated from life, can this book go far? In my opinion, cultivating immortals originated from Taoism and has a long history. It can be said to be a fantasy with a strong East Asian flavor. Japan has a different continent as an imaginary world, and the West has swords and magic as an imaginary world. These are closely related to civilization and history, and cultivating immortals can be said to be an imaginary world exclusive to China. Since it is an imaginary world, how the world is structured is very important. It is best to complete most of the world view of a novel before the book is written, otherwise it will be very messy later. It is mainly divided into nature and humanities. In terms of nature, the most important thing is naturally the map, which serves as the activity location of the characters in the novel, as well as products, biological species, etc.; And in terms of humanities, everything from the distribution range of various forces, various contradictions, world trends, world history, to the market prices of various materials, people's lives, etc., All require effort to structure, and it does not need to be perfect, at least it can be logically self-consistent. The world structure is completed, and the next step is the characters. It can be said that I have read a lot of novels, but there are few normal protagonists, or they are not like human beings, or they are like a lunatic, or they are like a puppet on strings, which is difficult to understand. What the characters are like is closely related to the world view of the novel and their personal experiences. After understanding the world view and their personal experiences, the readers introduce the protagonist. The choices and behaviors they may make may be different, but they understand the protagonist's behavior and do not feel that the protagonist has become mentally ill or demented. If the character can withstand speculation, then the character has been successfully portrayed. A good character is one that can make readers feel that they are flesh and blood, and the actions and choices they make are made by themselves, not by the author. The experiences of various characters change the characters, and then make the characters behave accordingly. These constitute the plot of the novel. When the world view and characters of the novel basically take the stage, the novel is no longer written by the author, but by the characters themselves. In terms of world structure, world trends, changes, etc., I think this book is slightly better than "The Road to the Master". If it can have a beginning and an end, I personally think it will be one of the best novels written in recent years.

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I feel like you changed your account and started a new book. It has the same plot as this one, but the progress is half faster. I guess the results will be better than yours.

I roughly drew a map. If there are any mistakes in the map, please point out fellow Taoists and the author so that we can improve it together! Updated 2022.9.21 I roughly drew the concept of the island and will continue to update when there are more clues

The best mortal stream in recent times. Unfortunately, it has received too little attention. I don't know why the author failed to sign the contract. This is a rare detailed description of the life and division of work within the sect in Xiuzhen style, and it has a bit of a sect officialdom feel.

One look at the author and I don't understand Xianxia! Do you know why Wangyu set up the spiritual world and the mortal world? Because there is a world around level 5, which is just right for the protagonist to show off! You are so good. From Qi training to Mahayana all at once, the protagonist in the early stage has no effect at all, and there is no sense of enjoyment at all! People forget to talk about the monks' war in the mortal world. The protagonist Jindan can play many important roles. Only in this way can readers see the importance of the protagonist. The protagonist Nascent Soul can decide the outcome of a monks' war. In your book, even if the main character becomes Yuanying, what will it do? Even if the protagonist becomes a god, is he still an ant in front of the Mahayana? This is the difference between a master and a fool. The master has really thought carefully about the structure of the entire book. Just like in today's movies, there is a scientific basis for how many minutes it takes to reach a climax and how many minutes it takes to reach a low point!

I am an old reader who has been reading this book since the very beginning, so I have some comments and suggestions. From a plot point of view, the Xingang story is well written, but the battle against the machine armor in the middle is a bit nonsensical. The design of the God of Death's forcible pits later on is not good enough. Then I want to focus on the protagonist. In a work, the protagonist is not everything, but it is definitely the soul and backbone. The protagonist Tang Ning is full of life from the beginning, has a righteous heart, is brave and resourceful, and is affectionate and righteous. In the middle period, it is mediocre and trivial, greasy and crooked. Until the rat behind is short-sighted and selfish. I don't know what the author went through to make Tangning so unlikable. Maybe we will be like this in reality, but when the protagonist of a novel about cultivating immortals becomes like this, you can imagine everyone's disappointment. Being willing to see what the purpose of cultivating immortality is is not because of the repression in reality and the hope of seeing a different life. So if Tang Ning writes like that later, it will definitely not be popular. What I said here is a bit harsh, but I still have high expectations for the author. I hope the next one will be wonderful and the book will sell well.

After reading more than a thousand chapters, the content of the novel is okay, but the comments are really disgusting to me. When the protagonist is weak and deflated, a lot of people come out to criticize it. Especially when it is not on the shelves, I like to read three chapters, a small amount of fun, and ten chapters, a large amount of fun. Isn't there a starting point? Why do I have to disgust people? There are even some people who keep shouting abandonment from the beginning to more than a thousand chapters, and they keep reading, which is outrageous.

I secretly coded words for a whole day at work. The USB disk file was damaged and could not be restored, so... Everyone is going crazy, they are most afraid of this kind of thing. I don't want to update anymore today. I'll make it up next time.

Recommended by Xuan Chen Dao Tu Group. I read part of it and I like this style of writing. However, it does require a lot of persistence from the author. After all, it is not a cool article. I hope I don't want to be like Xuan Chen.