The Celestial Origin Immortal Records

It's one of the more satisfying novels I've read in recent years. I've been reading for almost ten years now, and I've read many cultivation novels. Apart from "The Path of the Cultivation Sect Leader" and this one, there are almost none that I think are good. I've also thought carefully about the differences between these two and other books, and below I'll offer some personal insights.

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I have a feeling that if you switch accounts and start a new book with the same plot as this one, but are halfway through the story, it will probably do better than yours.

I've roughly drawn a map. Please point out any errors in the map, fellow Daoists and the author, so we can improve it together! Updated 2022.9.21 I've roughly sketched it out based on the concept of an island, and I'll update it as I get more clues.

The best mortal cultivation story recently, but unfortunately it has too little attention. I don't know why the author couldn't get a contract. This is a rare example in the cultivation genre that details the life and division of labor within a sect, giving it a bit of a sect-based officialdom feel.

The author clearly doesn't understand Xianxia! Do you know why Wang Yu set up the Spirit Realm and the Mortal Realm? Because each world is roughly five levels high, which is perfect for the protagonist to show off! Well, look at you! You jump straight from Qi Refining to Mahayana, but the protagonist is completely useless in the early stages, offering absolutely no enjoyment!

As a long-time reader who has followed the series from the very beginning, I'd like to offer some opinions and suggestions. From a plot perspective, the story of New Harbor is well-written, although the battle against the mechs in the middle is somewhat nonsensical. The forced inclusion of the "God of Death" plot point later on is poorly designed. Then, I want to focus on the protagonist.

I've read over a thousand chapters. The novel's content is alright, but the comments are truly disgusting. Whenever the protagonist is weak or suffers a setback, a bunch of people come out to criticize, especially before it was released. People who like to read light novels with satisfying moments every three or ten chapters have plenty of them. Doesn't Qidian have enough of those?

I secretly typed all day at work, but the files on my USB drive were corrupted and couldn't be recovered, so... People were furious; this is the kind of thing I fear most. I don't want to update anymore today. I'll make it up next time.

The first half, up to the Golden Core stage, is quite compelling, especially the beginning in the secular martial arts world and then the sect, which is also very engaging. However, once it reaches the Nascent Soul stage, it starts endlessly repeating the internal strife from New Harbor, describing it back and forth without any real substance. The first half is excellent, but the second half, to put it nicely, feels like padding, or to put it bluntly, is just a lot of nonsense.