I Subdue the Mortal Realm with the Underworld

Let's make a complaint about the setting of the opposition between the underworld and the yang world. It makes sense for the yang world to suppress the underworld in order to live longer, but how can the underworld hate the yang world so much? Especially those passerby ghosts, who died in the upper world and then went to the underworld, gnashed their teeth when it came to the upper world suppressing the underworld, just like two countries bullying the other. The hatred of the people is because they grew up in that country and have a sense of identity. After death in the upper world, they came to the underworld so quickly? Do you think of yourself as a part of building the underworld so naturally? There is also the reshaping of reincarnation. I would like to ask if there was no reincarnation, would there be no children born in the human world? If there was no reincarnation, no children would be born in the human world. Why would the human world be so suppressed? Shouldn't the normal situation be cooperation of interests? Or maybe it's because there are conspiracies between the fairy world and other worlds, causing the Yin and Yang worlds to fight. I don't know how the author can reconcile this.

You have too little. I have saved so many monthly votes and am ready to vote. The reminder will not be given after 24 hours. Very angry. That's a little less. At least it can last 24 hours.

I finally finished reading it! It made me stay up late for two nights. I originally wanted to do it for nothing. Anyway, I read this for free, but the author wrote it really well, and I can see that he put a lot of thought into it. So after reading more than a hundred chapters, I gave up on prostitution (were I moved to tears (´;;`)), but I still want to read it before talking about it, hahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia I personally think that there is basically no water so far, and it is still within the acceptable range. It is just that every time I fight, a lot of my Yin soldiers will die, which is too miserable, especially those practitioners who are constantly refining their souls. It is not that I want a A tooth for a tooth, but those who have sinned too deeply should also be allowed to taste the taste of being punished. In addition to the hell of fire, ice, repeated soul splitting, mountains of knives, seas of suffering... And other punishments can be done again, so that their mother can feel the same, just a few simple Killing or imprisoning them is too cheap, and then a dream or a projection of the world allows other people who want to wander around the edge to see the scene of hell, completely defeated from the spiritual world, and even if they have the ability, they will no longer be able to resist. Secondly, since Luo Tian is the protagonist, what's wrong with giving him more golden fingers? It's not good to always rely on magic weapons. Can you give him some scenes of tearing apart the powerful with his hands, stepping on the human king, conquering the human emperor, pointing his sword to the sky, and eating evil ghosts alive? , If you don't want to tear it apart, then bring some skills unique to hell. If there is one bad thing, it is the chapter about returning to the land of reincarnation. If you don't read it carefully, it is really easy to get confused and feel confused and contradictory. , The same is true for the God-Walking Sect. I keep seeing the word "General Sect" in some chapters. Shouldn't there be only one so-called "Song Sect"? Why are there so many different places? I still don't know if the core Sect has ever appeared. You also said in the book that this sect is spread across all states, so why not divide it according to levels, just like the current regional divisions, county religion, city religion, state religion, and state religion. Of course, it would be clearer if the settings are not divided layer by layer, but each. Independence, let me just say this. The underworld of the Three Thousand Provinces has been suffering for a long time. Except for now, will the grievances and Yin spirits accumulated in the years since Luo Tian came (personally guess how many thousands of years) will form a strong resistance? How can the Yang Jian suppress these resistances? What will happen if their suppression methods are broken... This can lead to a lot of plots. How can Luo Tian use these karma to make weapons? Attack the enemy? If people from the Yang world enter the underworld at will, won't their mana be suppressed, and won't their Yang Qi be damaged? Luo Tian has beaten them like this, why don't they leave the body directly, hapi! The protagonist team maintains the order of Yin and Yang, which is a good thing for the world. In addition to merits and magical weapon rewards, the charm of the world can also be improved. Practitioners in the Yang world feel that the charm of the world has become better, which is not conducive to their practice. Is it a good thing? Will characters like the King of Humans wake up later and help the protagonist group maintain the order of yin and yang? If I remember correctly, Cui Yu is the only great sage who truly comes from among humans. People's consciousness is so low, how can that be possible? We can't arrange for a second or fifth person to be our protagonist's internal agent. The book of life and death is always robbed, and anyone can change it. I feel so shameless. Let's add a password to the book of life and death controlled by the protagonist group. You still need to verify the login when you arrive at a new location. The kind that fails to unlock twice and needs to be unlocked by the administrator. It is different for each one. It is useless for others to snatch it, unless the ghost himself is willing. This kind of responsibility mechanism is stricter. After reading the latest chapter, the ghost king is not a big deal. I understand that Luo Tian is actually a younger brother now. Every strong man in the world will laugh at him. It is really too much. I will tell you if I can go up.

No, I decided not to vote for you, you *********, you broke the chapter, you were short, your breath was choked, you dropped rice grains when you ate, you couldn't pull it out, 💢

The writing in the early stage was okay, and the subject matter was still fresh, but the writing in the later part was too distorted. He unified the underworld easily, and there was not even a ceremony for the lord of the underworld. It made me think that nothing happened. If you write like this, there will be nothing to write about soon.

I really can't stand it anymore!

The Yin and Yang worlds are written as two countries, the Yin world is a small country and the Yang world is a big country. Anyone can enter the underworld, just like next door, and even lead troops to attack it. It has no impact on the Yang people to go to the underworld, just like if they want to go to other countries. There is no cost in changing the book of life and death in the world. There is no divine punishment, and there is no catastrophe for cultivators. Just use the book of life and death to change the book of life and death. Once the underworld is destroyed, there will be no need to worry about the underworld. There is no reward for seducing the Yin soldiers, it is a waste of effort.

The fighting scenes are too unsatisfactory. To sum it up, you shoot one and I shoot one. There is nothing like what a fight in a high-level martial arts world should look like. In a high-level martial arts setting, the fighting is all about imagination. For example, for Cui Yu, you can completely reimagine his fighting style and let him sit in the government office. As soon as the alarm fell, a strong yin energy spread from Cui Yu to the entire Luocheng direction. As far as the eye can see, a tall government office rises from the ground, with stone bricks extending like waves all around. In the four corners of the lobby, four tall ghost offices stand resolutely. Under Cui Yu's power Next, everyone in Yangjian felt palpitation, and Cui Yu whispered "Shengtang", and saw the four ghosts slowly opening their eyes, holding the long sticks in their hands, hammering the ground. The heavy hammering sound was transmitted to the hearts of everyone in Yangjian with the mighty sound, and the uneasy emotions kept hitting their hearts, like sliding into a pan of oil, constantly rolling and boiling. Cui Yu glanced at everyone, and then threw down the decree in his hand. As soon as the decree fell to the ground, everyone in the world felt a sense of powerlessness, and a powerful force dragged the souls of everyone towards the endless darkness. Writing like this is no better than asking Cui Yu to fight with the gavel. Of course, I am not saying how good my writing is. I just want to remind the author that you should exaggerate when writing this kind of novel.

The system flirted with girls in the Yang world for three days and three nights, then died, and then changed from Yang to Yin, so it became the Yin Division order system. Fit with pig's feet: perfect

I saw Chapter 15 The subject matter is good, the idea is ok but I never expected it. You look upright in the front, but the supporting character in the back does all kinds of evil, but you let him go because you need someone? If you need someone, wouldn't it be nice to write someone who is upright and awe-inspiring but who is not strong enough and can only shrink back? The front person looked upright, but the back person just let the trash go as he was told, and then the weakling threw it directly into the Styx. Is your protagonist's righteousness the kind of righteousness that bullies the weak and fears the strong? And the main character appears in this film with really outstanding people, and there is not even a single ok boss. You are an old ghost for many years. Not to mention being cunning and cunning, you must have a city, right? The following is a very good thing. It says that there is a small character who has no backing or strength and has not asked you to kill him. Can you believe this? He doesn't do anything when he doesn't have anything. He gives you good things and expects you to come. But there is no place for his good things to be used? Summary: The theme is ok, the idea is ok, the details are rubbish, and the characterization is rubbish The above is just a summary up to Chapter 15, I don't know what will happen next.

I feel like this hell is not a fake, right? Without any deterrence, people can be killed at will in the world of the world. What is the use of the underworld? If you become a bad guy, you should at least have the authority given by heaven and earth. How can you let Yang Jian kill you at will?

The protagonist feels like an idiot. Every time he kills someone, he feels like no one is jumping out to kill him. He has to wait for someone to save him every time. With a worrying IQ and rubbish cultivation, this protagonist has no real use and is only used to clear out stray fish. Every time I am ambushed, I fall into a trap. I feel like I am invincible when I kill a few soldiers. Every time I kill someone, I don't expect Zayu's backer to take revenge. I am always shocked when I kill someone. I am really impressed by my IQ! ! ! !

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I am here to tell the author that as long as you dare to update, I will dare to subscribe. I will subscribe as much as you want. I hope you will update more. Come on.

This kind of underworld-themed novels are rare now. I feel good about it now, but I am still a little worried. I feel that the configuration of the underworld in the middle and late stages will be pushed flatly, and it may not have enough stamina. Furthermore, the protagonist has few skills, and the author does not have to stick to traditional Chinese mythology. It would be quite interesting to give the protagonist an Anubis scale and a Chinese name. This is much better than making up your own skills. The last thing is, as long as you dare to update more, I dare to order all of them.

Luotian

The overall strength of the Yang world is dozens of times that of the Yin world. But the Yang world is so powerful that it can directly rule the underworld. In order to increase the longevity of the Yang world, it actually has to give gifts to the underworld. The difference is different. The underworld is so oppressed that it can only be a grandson in front of the Yang world. If the underworld breaks the jar, it will ignore all the Yin spirits and let hundreds of billions of Yin spirits wreak havoc in the Yang world. Then the Yang world will be in chaos, all ordinary people will die, and the weak ones will be beaten to death by a group of people. , There are only a large group of strong men left. They slaughter all the ordinary people in the Yang world. The Yin spirits can still turn over it. The book of life and death is completely destroyed. They are not allowed to increase their Yang life. Everyone plays together. In the end, they can always beat those strong men to death, and they can't kill so many Yin spirits. The final ending is happy and happy.

Xiaobai Shuangwen, after reading the first dozen chapters, the writing style is a bit lacking. As for the plot, it's probably "I, Niu Pi, am changing Yang Shou" "Disturbing order!!! Watch the whip!!" "Sir, have mercy!!!!" "I, Niu Pi, help people change Yang Shou" "Bending the law for personal gain!! Watch the whip!!" "Sir, spare my life!!!" A routine repeats itself in this way. . . . Of course, I don't know if this will be the case later. In my personal opinion, if you read it without thinking, there is nothing particularly poisonous about this kind of novice novel, but I don't have much desire to read it.

I've read more than 30 chapters, but it's just repetitive business trips to catch ghosts, which is monotonous! The whip soul comes out or the soul is scattered, every chapter is the same, and the strength level is also blurred. It feels like I'm always in the water

You can tell from the first three chapters that your writing skills are not good, and you have a taste of QQ reading, so you can understand everything.

Alas, I think a book friend is right when he says that the character falls apart in Chapter 14. The key is to contradict yourself and slap yourself in the face. Two or three chapters ago, the protagonist spoke so righteously and unkindly, but suddenly he can be tactful, and suddenly he can act according to the degree of usefulness.

It's boring. When you become an official, your job is the same as that of a soul master. You still have to recruit people to upgrade yourself, while your subordinates should recruit people to gain experience. In addition, I got an artifact at the beginning and became invincible with it. Is there any point in upgrading? Even if he becomes the controller of the underworld, he is still not a polished commander. He has no power and no subordinates to help him. Does he want to catch ghosts all over the world? Watching the protagonist defeat the whole world alone The wage earner has been upgraded and has become a harder and busier wage earner, which is contrary to common sense. Keeping saying that order must be followed, he himself is above the order. He can hit his subordinates at will, but he must find a crime for beating his superiors.

Congratulations to Meng Nu for successfully ascending to the female lead, and a generous gift of 100,000 yuan

For another hundred thousand, I want Luo Tian to be with Meng Nu. Waiting for a million dollars for the wedding day

To write a novel about the underworld, you just write it without knowing anything about the background, order, and rules of the underworld.

I'm a misogynist and don't like books with female protagonists.

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