I Have a Catalog of Ghosts and Gods

The author has fully ordered the last book, and has quite high expectations for the author. However, after reading twenty or thirty chapters, the more I read, the more awkward it became. I will post it here, hoping it will be of some help to the author. 1. It is always uncomfortable to see things rising first and then suppressing. For example: I traveled happily and was about to reach the pinnacle of my life, but was threatened by a demon girl; I finally deceived the demon girl and wanted to escape, but was given a tracking mark; I took an immortal weapon to fight monsters, but there was a big monster behind the monster, and a bunch of my own people wanted to kill the protagonist; the protagonist relied on the immortal weapon to protect a whole city of people, but he was exposed. The most disgusting feeling is the feeling of being slapped just after you feel good. 2. It's a bit of a suture monster, and I haven't absorbed the essence yet. The core joy of a book like Monster Slayer is that someone sends monsters to the protagonist to farm, which is high-yield, risk-free, and a lot of fun. However, in this book, the protagonist has to find monsters to farm on his own, and even if he farmed the monsters, he will be sought for revenge. It just doesn't look good. There is also a plot of copying books later, but it is not a Confucian or Taoist style, copying books to create drama. 3. It feels good but the grasp is not very good. For example, when the protagonist was seeking revenge from Rainbow Spirit and his mother, the explosion used Taiyi Wuyanluo to protect people in half the continent. If you have this ability, you can use this magic weapon to turn into a hand and slap her to death. You have to play like this 4. One more thing, the mode is The plot is not quite right. After the protagonist got the golden finger, he did not quickly upgrade and become stronger. The author wrote a bunch of irrelevant plots to wear down the readers' patience. Seeing that the author said in this chapter that the writing performance has become worse, it may be due to this reason That's about it, one person's opinion. I hope it will be helpful to the author. Cheers!

To be honest, after reading the book for more than ten years, the protagonist of this book is more perverted than a cheater, and his clone has reached its peak without even realizing it. This damn bastard son and protagonist is God!

After reading Chapter 28, it's hard to wait for the update. I will delete this book and update it to Chapter 128. Then a big brother will remind me.

There is a sense of acting flow, very beautiful

It's getting boring. The protagonist's strength has not improved for a long time, so it is completely God's will that he can fool so many people. No trump card jumping around. The main line is unclear. Author, have you ever discovered that your book has no main plot? It's like a hammer and a stick when I write it. The protagonist has no goals or pursuits. The best way for you now is to quickly find a main line. For example, in a revolution, the protagonist must be the leader or the driving force behind the scenes, and you cannot give up just because you want to. This book is all in the same format as One Thousand and One Conan. They are all branch tasks.

I finished reading it in one go, and I have to say that it was too procrastinating. If you want to prove the existence of Fangcun Mountain, it is easiest to ask God. But I don't know why the author deliberately limited this point. I really can't figure it out. Then he gave it a fantasy, but it is of no use. I played two tricks on "Li Bai" and "Fahai". The scene was far inferior to the first level, but the result was less than the third level. Li Bai even only had the fifth level. It was really too deliberately suppressed. The protagonist has so many magical powers that he only appears once or a few times, and the rest are completely useless. What is the use of a catalog of ghosts and gods? A disguised upgrade to the monster-killing system. I only saw Guan Yu among the so-called ghosts and gods. Zhong Kui also had to complete a mission? There are only 2 of the so-called 5 options, and there are 500 chapters. You are so procrastinating in writing, do you want to turn on all the so-called 5 functions when you reach 1500 chapters? Chapter 1500 Golden Finger has only been initially developed? It is recommended to speed up the progress of the plot, otherwise it will be really unbearable and the progress of the plot is too slow.

Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, he actually turned into a pig

In fact, reading this book is still a bit awkward, because we live in a society ruled by law We can't understand why the protagonist is afraid I saw a monster giving porridge, and the government said to kill everyone. However, the protagonist didn't eat, and made no mistakes, so he was taken back as a slave, and he had to thank others for giving him a chance to live. All this is the protagonist, struggling to survive Later, the protagonist saves people and exposes the fairy weapon. I don't understand why? You can't even control your own life, and you still want to save others. If you are poor, you will be alone, and if you are successful, you will help the world. Now your life is not your own, what qualifications do you have We will definitely escape from this society. Even if we meet many touching people later, we don't want to live in this society. If we treat bad people in this society, we will not treat other people as human beings

I saw that with more than 200 chapters, it was unstoppable. The main plot was like a ghost beating a wall. Others had already revealed the tone of more than 200 chapters, but this book was still like a ball of wool with only one thread left. The development of Golden Finger has not yet been figured out; the protagonist's training system has not been clearly written. The basic skills training is to read books and then increase the level of cultivation for some reason; I was so happy when I first read this book in the morning, but now I am so disappointed. There was a wonderful start to the game, and I almost applauded the scene where Taiyi Wuyanluo of Wu County was flooded and came to the rescue, but then, there was nothing more. The subsequent plot was all foreshadowing without a climax. Every time it looked like it was about to foreshadow a new exciting point or a new climax, it would branch out randomly, and when the branch line ended, the expected exciting point would be pushed to the end. Even the creation of the protagonist is messy, and the character changes according to the plot the author wants to write. It was still like it when it was more than a hundred chapters, and now it is seven hundred chapters. Maybe it will become more exciting later. I have endured more than a hundred chapters, and I can't bear it anymore.

What do you think everyone is here for? They are all here for your picture album of gods and ghosts, hoping to see the protagonist asking the gods to show off. However, few of the introductions are realized, so Guan Yu focuses on the description, and Zhong Kui briefly mentions it later. The great sage himself cannot be protected, and the good idea later turns into a traditional cultivation article. . . The female character I wrote about who has such a good relationship turned out to be a one-hearted person, right? Bah!

I don't understand one thing, what is the protagonist's strength? It is said that he is not strong, but he can drink and drink everywhere. Call him strong, but the whole world treats him as a fool. No matter how strong the enemy is, they can defeat him by the protagonist, which is a bit confusing.

I've read almost 900 chapters and it's so damn uncomfortable and frustrating. It's a secret, but I can't understand it every time. It's your motherfucker's fault that you can't make the protagonist smarter. Someone was killed in his own territory. The protagonist's second-level cultivation level cannot be used to investigate and investigate. Xianxia feels like writing martial arts. It's useless.

It's better to avoid raising corpses less often. From every angle, raising corpses is far from the image of a decent immortal cultivator.

The author is great, I found a few pictures, I don't know if they are suitable 😁, I hope I can replace them with 🙂.

This book Eunuch is not surprising at all. Books that do not pay attention to market demand and readers' complaints will not go far. It would be better to say that the author who persists to 3 million words is considered powerful. I don't know how many backstage subscriptions there are. Watching the plot is like jumping on the street, and I can't imagine the possibility of it becoming popular. The protagonist cheats, keeps suppressing the protagonist, and writes a group portrait after finishing suppressing the protagonist. Writing fantasy group portraits is better than self-contained plug-in protagonists. After writing millions of words, the protagonist is still a beast. This book did bring me happiness, but it was only after reading it several times and reading it in one sitting. The pace of the novel is really not suitable for catching up on online articles. You can imagine the process of subscriptions falling off a cliff. This book is a representative of the author's self-entertainment. Literati are arrogant. Even the authors of online articles kept writing the stories they wanted to write, ignoring the external market demand. In the end, they wrote three million words and ended up in vain.

Why is the hero still working as a bad official now? When I take this position, I am burdened with karma, which binds my body, and I am at a loss. If you have a treasure in your possession, you shouldn't resign. Is it better to go around killing demons and strengthen yourself?

Does the protagonist really care about the people? The protagonist keeps saying that the ruler does not care about the life and death of the people, he does. However, judging from the text, this society is generally peaceful and most people can survive. Once the world is in war, the number of people who die will be a hundred times that of the refugees. If the refugees should not die, should these ordinary people die?

I've read chapter 40 now. I don't understand. Don't you need this golden finger? If you don't hurry up and become stronger, will you wait to die? How did he become a pretentious person in the literary world... And suddenly went to judge a case...

I saw in Chapter 296 that the demon girl was reborn and broke the demon-suppressing stone, releasing the demons from the Sword Prison. I just want to know if this witch is dead in the end? If she hadn't died, this book would have collapsed, and the main character's character is bullshit.

I don't understand. This isn't about urban romance. An old monster who has been practicing for thousands of years can't let go of the love between a man and a woman. This ex-girlfriend is really a failure.

The writer's bottleneck has arrived. The last book also had the same number of words, but it was straight up eunuch. This book is becoming more and more uncomfortable. The main line is not clear, and there is a hammer here and a hammer here and there. When the clone Ye Gucheng was introduced recently, he thought he was going to work alone. He tried to play something different based on the Jiuzhou dungeon written by Lang Huan before, but in the end he was still loyal to Daji. The reason is even more funny. Emperor Xin is still the biggest figure in the world. Yin Yi, Huo Guang and Wang Mang are all here. He also has one or two princesses. It's really ridiculous, and it doesn't matter what other people's origins are. For the powerful people of Daji, the protagonist is a man of unknown origin and acts unscrupulously on the top of the mountain. With such a background in the plot, you tell me Huo Guang Wang Mang? Li Dongyang, who is said time and time again to have no deep feelings and no real relationship between master and disciple? It's true that Fang Cunshan's face was completely humiliated by the protagonist. From the first chapter until now, I have always said that he is from Fangcun Mountain, but in the latest chapter, he is not from Daji🐶. After writing and writing, I still don't understand the protagonist Shantou, and I still don't know who the backer Goldfinger is? The title of the book should not be called Illustrated Book of Ghosts and Gods, but Daji Sujingsi. As for Emperor Xin's mentally retarded operation from beginning to end, he is just referring to Emperor Jingtai and Wusheng in the book of Demon Slayer. To sum up, in the middle and later stages of the story, some of these characters, including the protagonist, were considered pretty, but they all turned out to be embarrassing.

This protagonist is too weak, his cultivation is too complex, and he has so many magic weapons that they are actually of no use. Guan Sheng's sword skills are not as good as magic weapons in the eyes of pig's feet. The Tao is not the Tao, the Buddha is not the Buddha, it is a mess. {"NickName":"Avocado 1","UserId":4319227}

I feel that the protagonist's style of dealing with things is not good. He is a monster and does not care about good or bad. He is here to repay his kindness, and you should also kill the priest who has been consecrated by the Emperor of Humanity. I feel that it is not good for you to give rewards just for killing monsters. It is better to give rewards for killing evil people.

You have grown up with this plug-in. It's too fucked for you to defeat the baron after eating two waves of minions.

After reading it, although it has flaws, it is overall a good book, and the author's thoughts and feelings are indeed imbued in it. Novel novels are originally meant to put an end to the rolling world of mortal life, wash away all kinds of helplessness, and rest on a pillow of absurd dreams. Each author has his own unique insights to construct the world he wants to describe. It is only due to the level of writing skills and the depth of knowledge that the novels can be divided into three grades, six grades and nine grades. Recalling the past, the writings of famous writers can satirize the past and present myths and allude to them; at the bottom, they can provide amusement with anecdotes in the boudoir; some gloomy and bizarre mountain village conversations can be borrowed from objects; or the rise and fall of majestic kingdoms can be drawn from history. However, today, everyone agrees, abandoning letting a hundred flowers bloom and thousands of competing factions, but insisting on only respecting Confucianism and uniting the road to unity. .

It looks good, I hope the author can control the pace. Every step the protagonist makes is a risky move. If someone really comes to test it, wouldn't the protagonist be free of charge? Be more steady, or is there really a character from Journey to the West coming to the rescue later?

The biggest problem with this book is probably that the outlines are inconsistent. After entering the world of Infernal Affairs, the plot is like two books compared to the previous one. 70% of the page is used to create a powerful ancient immortal, and then in order to upgrade the protagonist and promote the plot, the three realms of Buddhism and Taoism are also forcibly downgraded. The description of the heaven is also a description of office politics. It clearly does not describe the ancient world, but the core of the whole structure is still the ancient style. . I'm a little doubtful whether the last 30% of the content is contracted to the studio.

The combat power is a bit weak, no battle is clean and tidy, there is always a boss who is stronger than the protagonist, and there is always someone running away. Guan Yu is so awesome that he can't kill anyone with a single sword? The magic weapon is always blocked. I said there are only a few immortal weapons, but they are all immortal weapons, but they are always being cracked. There are so many clones, and the realm is not much different. They are always led by other people's news. They dig a hole in front and then throw it away. Then they continue to dig.

Has the author never seen a woman before? When he sees a woman, he suddenly understands the justice and does not take action. When he sees a man, he is ready to kill him without saying a word.

A good book, it was ruined, it rubbed me for many days and nights, you are like a eunuch, it ends at an anticlimax, and it becomes more and more refined.