Mystery Revival: Seizing the Haunted Painting

Hey everyone, when I was trying to get home, a muddy road inexplicably appeared beside me, blocking all other paths. There was also a sedan chair being carried behind me. On my original road, there was a cloud of ash that looked like burnt textbooks or paintings floating in the air. To my left, across the muddy road, there's a temple, and in front of it is something completely black that looks like a person but is definitely not. So, how am I supposed to get home? I'm in a real hurry!

Look at me, look at me! What do you think of this ghost bride? (Cautiously)

Whoever wants to read it can read it, I'm not reading it anymore. The plot is so messed up I don't even know what you're writing. Some people say your writing is bad, so what are you going to do to your subscribers? You inexplicably treat foreign kings like trash and easily wipe out Dahai City.

Coco calls the protagonist "Dad," and although it's unclear if she's his biological child, she's definitely the ghost bride's. As the plot progresses, there's a high probability she's also the protagonist's child, born from a ghost marriage between the protagonist and the ghost bride. Although it's called a ghost bride, it's most likely a component of a ritualistic ghost wedding.

The female author's writing is indeed good, but it lacks grandeur and scope. The plot feels forced, contrived for the sake of plot. She gets outmaneuvered by Zhang Xianguang several times, despite being far superior and fully aware of his plans.

The part about traveling back to ancient times is complete nonsense; it goes on for fifty or sixty chapters and I have no idea what it's all about.

It was good at the beginning, but not so good later on. I spent ages raising it, and when I came back, it was over? Are you kidding me?

Please leave comments and give me your feedback. Tell me what you think is good to add; I'll definitely add it if you suggest it!

I admire your work! I've also written a novel, *The Mysterious Revival of the Sunken World*, and I hope it will be successful.

In my opinion, the power system in the 12th chapter of the "Engagement" volume is somewhat inconsistent. The protagonist's role is awkward; he's supposed to easily defeat all modern ghost tamers, yet he becomes weak and sickly when facing Elder Qin, which is unrealistic. Elder Qin is a level below the Seven Elders!