I Really Don't Want to Be a Heavenly Master

Some thoughts after reading: Forgive me for retreating when I saw the heroine. In fact, the background and protagonist's character design given by the author are really great, allowing me to see a strange world. The protagonist's knowledge and growth are the motivation for me to follow. In fact, I think it would be a great thing to write the protagonist as single for the time being or to ask the heroine not to interfere too much in the plot. It's not that I think it's bad for the heroine to appear too early, but novels with this theme rely more on the protagonist's own experiences and knowledge to attract readers (key issues). For example, in the beginning, I was really attracted, and I felt happy and moved almost the whole time. But the appearance of the heroine undoubtedly reduces the sense of mystery that the book has always created (emphasis added, I believe many readers almost quit in this part). For a novel related to ghosts, the focus is obviously on creating a sense of mystery and story line. The author's premature addition of the heroine's love story is really poisonous (the atmosphere just created is gone, and the subsequent exploration with the heroine completely loses the sense of mystery, and it is like taking a girl to download a copy). I don't focus on the writing style, I only focus on the grasp of the rhythm of the story. It is obviously a work that can dominate the list, but it became the second "Midnight Bookstore" but made such a big mistake at the beginning. I don't know what to say. I can guess that it was that paragraph that lost many readers. {"NickName":"Half Volume Fragment","UserId":171928333} I wrote this comment very seriously and I hope it will be helpful to everyone To summarize ————Readers like to read it The male protagonist writes the book alone, and doesn't like others to ruin the atmosphere and disrupt the rhythm of the story I just hope the author knows the reason why he is so bookish It doesn't matter what a short story is, after all, "Late Night Bookstore" has the most important things As the story develops, slowly reveal the background and that's it. Try not to write so much dog food about non-romance, as not many people like it.

I just saw someone in the book review section saying that this book has the legacy of Liao Zhai. But this book seems to be about ghosts and gods, but it is actually about people. I have the impression that the most recent online novel that is different from the mainstream struggle and growth is Lanke Qiyuan. That one writes about the ethereal flavor of an immortal, and this one writes about the human touch of the world. It's a good book, and it would be great to turn it into a TV series based on unit drama regardless of other factors. Seeing the sky, seeing the earth, seeing all living beings (anyway, it's the first feeling, if you feel it's inappropriate to blow it... It doesn't matter)

This is a book that is weighed down by the title and introduction. At first I thought it was about practicing cultivation in the city with a system, but as I read, the system actually doesn't play much of a role. The whole book is actually about various aspects of life, and the system and cultivation are more for the convenience of walking and observation. If there is a more similar book, it might be Sister Nan's Two Thousand Years. Finally, I can't help but want to ask the author, how much do you like ten skewers of pork rinds?

The latest chapter is really sad. This soul is not lost, but promised to the country.

After reading 70 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I laughed for a while and then smiled a little. You laughed like a chicken. It made my head hurt when I read it. I laughed in every chapter. I laughed... And it repeated. Also, it is best not to add too many emotional scenes in this kind of book, especially if you are not good at writing this type. It was so embarrassing to read. Overall, the creativity of the book and the storyline are quite good, but the writing is a bit poor. I hope the next book will improve.

The books themselves are actually quite similar in genre, but the author does a good job of using the daily life of a couple to connect the protagonists to each other. There is no sense of superiority anymore. With the pyrotechnics, the whole book will not be so cold, and it feels much better than those few novels of a similar style. Comparatively speaking, the character's character is acceptable, but the characterization of the protagonist is too dull. As for the world view, it is a low-demon plane after all, so there is not much difference. The author has extremely upright views and is a good person (^ω^).

Could you please stop the onomatopoeia from appearing all the time? The originally good atmosphere was made up by the onomatopoeia. It's okay to have one or two occasionally. It's too frequent.

I have read more than two hundred chapters, and personally I like this style very much. To be honest, I still read the more than two hundred chapters on pirated copies. I found that the more I looked at it, the more I liked it, so I ordered it all. To be honest, I think this is a book that was misled by the title. I have been reading online articles for seven or eight years, and I can barely be considered an old bookworm. My taste in reading is getting more and more interesting. Either the setting is pleasing, or the writing is comfortable. My dear, this book has both. How should I put it? It looks a bit like a chapter novel, with small plots connected one by one. I like this feeling very much. When I saw the system article, I thought it was the kind of person who points one finger to the sky and the other to the earth, and I am the only one who dominates the world. Or maybe I opened it because I didn't want to use my brain in the recent book shortage, but I found a treasure. The book is filled with various tastes of life. It is not a sermon, just a story. Borrowing a book friend's words, "It's called the road to immortality, but it's actually the world of mortals." I also mixed some sweet dog food into each story to soothe my mood. I won't discuss much about the plot to avoid spoilers. I also hope that the author will work hard. Civilian readers can't give any rewards, they can only support with monthly subscriptions and recommended votes. 🙂🙂

Keep it a single heroine! ! ! ! !

😳After reading this book, I strongly recommend it 👍 This book is especially suitable for people with dry eyes. Because the greening in the world of this book is extremely poor, with daily sandstorms turning into bricks and hail, and occasionally dogs and wolves raining down, the environment is extremely harsh. Please be prepared before reading! Be careful when entering the pit. I won't say anymore. I'm going to buy tissues again. The sandstorm is so big that I'm bursting into tears...😭

This book is one of the best novels I have ever read, currently at chapter 330. The title and introduction of the book are actually very general, including the beginning, except for the postgraduate entrance examination-style introduction to Celestial Masters, which is a bit novel. It makes people mistakenly think that this is a pretentious novel, and that it is just like those novels about pretending to be a slap in the face and fighting the villain. But! ! ! ! It's like I have become a different author since my travels. Each short story is very good and really touching. I am a boy, but my eyes have become blurred many times because of this! Including the story about the death of the little boy's grandfather, the story about the bus driver and the ambulance driver, and even the short story about burying an umbrella by the West Lake, and of course the long story I read recently about favoring boys over girls. There is no real villain in the entire book so far. The only villain is the evil in people's hearts, while decency is good. There is almost no pretentiousness. Some parts of the author's writing are very general and the sentences are repeated, but the characters in these short stories are really good and worth recommending! ! ! You will be very touched after reading it. This is the first time I write a long book review, and it is for a book that has been completed for a long time. It is really unnecessary, but after seeing the comments in the book review area, I feel it is necessary to express my thoughts. (I read it on QQ, but I heard that Qidian has many readers, so I came here to write a book review) All in all, the title of this book is average, the introduction is average, the framework is average, and even the writing style such as the environment and the relationship between the male and female protagonists are also average. But it is still a good book, because there are many very healing and good little stories in it. If you stick to chapter 330, I believe you will have a good feeling.

Yes, it's not like the articles on cultivating immortality in the name of Taoism. The writing style is also good, and the most important thing is that there are no routines. At present, it seems to be worth the investment, and I look forward to it being put on the shelves. I hope the author can come up with some new ideas about the ending of the book so that it won't collapse in the middle and later stages. This is likely to be a work of immortality! (Hurry up and update soon, don't be too short and feeble)

To be honest, before reading this book, I thought it was just an ordinary fantasy work, no different from the popular ones, repeating the same old routines. But after reading 30 chapters, I found that every few chapters are like a story. Although the beginning is not as fascinating as other novels, upon closer inspection, I found that this is the foreshadowing written by the author. In the short stories that follow every few chapters, it gives me a feeling of a chapter-by-chapter experience. It feels similar to Pawnshop No. 8 And Soul Ferry, but it has more of a story about me being in the sea of ​​suffering and seeing the human world. Some of the stories here are sweet with sourness, and some are bitter with joy. Each story is like holding a seal knife in your hand, carved in your heart. Just like that fourth uncle, he would do anything to see his daughter again. Just like that child, in order to keep his grandfather, he remained silent. Just like that monk who traveled all over the world and experienced several springs and autumns, he didn't know that he was in a sea of ​​suffering and a person in a boat. Every time I see these, my first reaction is that my throat seems to be blocked with a piece of steamed bun, my second reaction is a bitter taste in my mouth, and my third reaction is, is there any paper left? After thinking about it, I want to continue reading, because what I am reading is not a book, but everyone's life. This is a little insight from a 12-year-old bookworm.

Well-deserved, each story is touching and thought-provoking. The author is thoughtful. Thank you🈶📖Thank you🈶

It is recommended to change it to "I really don't want to spread dog food."

It's no exaggeration to say that this book may be a treasure. In the middle of the night, I played a few ranked games and I felt a fire in my heart. After reading this book, my fire subsided. I don't review many books, but this book is really worth reading. You can calm down and feel the world in the book. Time slowly passes and your heart slowly calms down. The delicate writing style makes people feel comfortable. The heroine's words don't feel artificial, it makes people feel that it should be like this.

I sincerely hope it will be available soon so that the author can explode

It's a very good novel, but I don't dare to read it. There are only more than 200 chapters. I'm afraid that it will be gone when I'm enjoying reading it, so I'll save it for a while and read it again later. But I still have to say that the novel is very good, so go for the author!

A rare good book, called The Road to Immortality, which is actually about walking in the world of mortals. The plot is a bit bland but it reveals human emotions everywhere. This is the first time I have subscribed to a novel in recent years.

1. After the nobles read, their souls were full and they had endless feasts. 2. Nobles can read it in winter, it is colder and more refreshing. 3. Pay attention to reading with the window closed. Books are strange. Wind often blows when reading, and sand can easily be blown into the room. 4. The story is authentic and realistic. 5. The story is very delicate and can be read appropriately if the pace of life is not too fast.

I have been reading online articles for ten and three years, and have more than a few hundred. However, this book is the only one that allows me to understand all aspects of life and all aspects of the world. Since the Chang'an chapter, I have cried frequently. I can't calm down every time, and I want to write but I run out of words. There was only one sigh and two lines of tears. The author is a great talent and highly admired. I am really lucky to have read this book. I just hope that the author will update more and become better and better. Fortunately, the words are endless but the meaning is endless! 🙏🙏🙏

I have been reading books for more than ten years, but there is basically nothing I want to read. I happened to see it. The writing is very good. I also thank the author for the good book and wish the author peace and happiness.

I updated six chapters today. The writing is really good. I gave you a monthly pass before and gave you a reward of 500 coins to show your support! Come on!

I just discovered this book last night. It's quite interesting. I ended up reading less than fifty chapters after reading it for two hours. Why? Because the chapter is better than the novel 😁

A good novel. I read it by chance. I strongly recommend that future books be given good titles. No one recommends them. It's really hard to find.

Each story makes people understand various aspects of life, whether sad or happy, and makes people think deeply. Great! ! !

Ask the author what your address is and I will send you some souvenirs🐶

I don't want a eunuch. It's hard to find a book that suits your taste.

I just started reading, and I have read more than 120 chapters. I was thinking about a question: If I convert the book into TXT mode, and then search for various Weiwei such as "Wei Wei's eyes are weak," "Wei Wei shook his head," "Wei Wei smiled" and so on, guess how many times we can search for them? 😅

Seeing that a good book has fewer and fewer chapters, it is becoming more and more deserted. . This book is fully qualified to be compared with those great gods and even has a better artistic conception. Hold on, Lao Tie, ensure stable quality, and don't be an eunuch I felt inspired when I saw the chapter on firefighters. Compared with those so-called masterpieces of cultivation, this is true cultivation. Without joining the world, there is no qualification to talk about transcending the world. This is the practice in my mind, self-cultivation. No matter how powerful the works of fantasy and immortality are, they are just the end of "skills". They cannot be called "true". At best, they are just an awesome warlock. There are no realms to distinguish them, but they are just nonsense to show the strength of the spells. Instead, they look more refreshing. The word "real person" refers to knowledge, knowledge, and wisdom, which can only be achieved by perfection.