Three Shots to the Soul

It's too clumsy. I just write out the property panel at every turn. There is no change at all in the middle and write it out. It's so clumsy. You could just write an entire chapter about the property panel. I'm speechless. I don't see the possibility of this book becoming popular. How popular can this book be if I just write out the property panel at every turn? And he will join the army later, which means that the next twenty chapters are at least about training in the military camp, not upgrading. As for why I say it is nearly twenty chapters, it is just because the author often writes attribute panels. It will take at least nearly twenty chapters. Moreover, it is difficult to write a book like this after joining the army. Soldiers must absolutely obey the leadership's arrangements. The protagonist's activities are limited only a little. Moreover, the author said that there is a great demand for soldiers, indicating that there are many wars. If there are few wars written later, the author will directly dig a hole for himself and cannot explain the reason why the demand for soldiers is great. But most of what is written later is about war, and the author is good at it. Dozens of chapters can be written on a small war. If it is introduced in this way, I don't need to talk about it. This is my personal opinion, for reference only By the way, if you want to refute, please write down the evidence and content, otherwise I will treat it as a troll and a troll

The first ten chapters are very good. I just hope that the rest of it won't be like the first book's mindless marriage of a daughter and the second book's vulgar pretense. Honestly, the author can write at his own pace. Don't deliberately lick women and pretend to be pretentious. That would be counterproductive.

How long has this been? It's only the 40th floor. I'll give you a reward of 1,000 first...

Although I only had six rounds of ammunition, I calculated my shots carefully. The first three shots were feints to cover, the fourth and fifth shots lured the enemy deeper, and the sixth shot struck east and west, so now ⊙∀⊙!

The plot of "Kill the Demon King" is okay, but later on, others want to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist still shows mercy, and the mother's heart is overflowing. The author, this is a sinkhole plot 😳

The writing is fine, but there are quite a few things that make me most unhappy. The first is the character of the protagonist. The "veteran" character is admirable, but in reality I most likely won't like it. It's stubborn and arrogant. The character created in this way is indeed distinct, but it will not attract the vast majority of readers. The second is the deliberate suppression of the protagonist's abilities. Let's take the beginning as an example. Krypton gold is exchanged for attribute points. It is not up to the author to decide how much money the protagonist has at the beginning. 10,000 And 1,000 have to be arranged at a low level. This does not mean that it must be Long Aotian at the beginning, but it is not that much different in the first place and you still feel disgusted. The same goes for after graduation training. The plot twist suppresses the protagonist's ability to practice a sub-career for one year. It's okay to write this way, whether you want to be closer to reality or to advance the plot, but I believe there is a better way of writing that won't offend readers so much.

I really haven't read it, and I don't have Goldfinger. I write about soldiers day after day. The author must be a soldier. He is really not suitable for writing fantasy. Just write in the military category, that's where you'll be most suitable.

To be honest, I felt very comfortable watching it at first, although it was a bit cruel. But the more I look back, the more I feel that the sniper's ability is the profession with the worst matching of neutral attributes among all professions. Since you said that the damage of a sniper is related to firearms and bullets, then what is the use of pursuing such good attributes as a sniper? So it is better to set some skills, such as armor penetration and so on. Only in this way can the characteristics of the sniper profession be highlighted.

I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 222... I could still keep reading the previous part, but when I was maliciously investigated + three rounds of missiles + machine gun fire, I even shook my hands and kicked my legs when I opened the scope and aimed the gun? Is the author Watt? Are you using me as a reader? Are you sure what you are writing is the reaction of soldiers in the field when faced with a deadly threat? ? ? Do you think labor and management are hot?

The main reason is that there is no passion. I got the awesome talent earlier, and the readers are waiting for the protagonist to rely on this awesome talent to pretend to be B. . . But what did the author write? . . .