Three Shots to the Soul

This is so poorly written. It just shows the attribute panel all the time, even when there's no change at all. It's so weak, you might as well just write the attribute panel in an entire chapter. Speechless. I have absolutely no chance of this book becoming popular. How can this book become popular if it just shows the attribute panel all the time?

The first ten chapters are quite good. I just hope the rest won't be like the first book, which was mindless and focused on adding women, or the second book, which was just a cheesy attempt at using clichés. Honestly, authors should just write at their own pace and not deliberately fawn over women or act pretentious, as that would backfire.

It's been so long, and we're only on the 40th floor. I'll give you a 1000 reward first...

Although I only have six bullets, I'm very careful with every shot. The first three shots are feints for cover, the fourth and fifth are used to lure the enemy in, and the sixth is used to launch a diversion. So now ⊙∀⊙!

The plot was alright up to the point where the Demon King was killed, but later on, everyone else was determined to kill the protagonist, yet he kept showing mercy, his saintly heart overflowing. Author, this is a terrible plot hole! 😳

The writing style is fine, but there are quite a few things that bother me. The first is the protagonist's personality. The "veteran" trait is admirable, but in reality, I probably wouldn't like it—stubborn and prone to overthinking. While this kind of character is certainly well-developed, it won't appeal to most readers.

This is unreadable. There's no cheat-like advantage, just endless descriptions of soldiers. Is this author a soldier? They're really not suited for fantasy. They should just write military-themed stories; that's where they can truly shine.

Honestly, I enjoyed watching it at first, even though it was a bit angsty. But the more I watched, the more I felt that the sniper's abilities had the worst match between their attributes and their abilities. Since you said that a sniper's damage is related to the weapon and bullets, what's the point of a sniper pursuing such good attributes? Therefore, it would be better to include some skills, such as armor penetration, to better highlight the characteristics of the sniper class.

I couldn't take it anymore after chapter 222... I could manage to read the earlier parts, but being maliciously scouted, hit by a triple missile barrage, and then subjected to machine gun fire, and then, while aiming for the head, the author's hand trembled and he accidentally shot the leg instead? Is the author out of their mind? Are you making fun of your readers? Is this really how soldiers react to a deadly threat in the field? It's infuriating!

The main problem is the lack of passion. The protagonist acquires an amazing talent, and readers are expecting him to use it to show off... But what does the author actually write?