I Became a Grand Mage Through Farming

No, author, it's too cliché to always have a genius girl next to the protagonist. If it were a genius boy, I would look up to you, author, as an ordinary girl.

. . . . . It feels a bit weird. Now that I think about it, I was noticed by a big force as soon as I started farming. The protagonist's background didn't look bad, but it turned out to be just like paper. . . . . . .

Author, why is your dialogue hitting the mark or not?

The conflict is written too bluntly. The protagonist revealed his identity and background at the auction. Russell was even more direct when people asked him about everything. However, he was targeted for some reason. The background of the teacher behind him seemed to be different. Moreover, the author repeatedly emphasized that he was a junior mage and deliberately did not certify as an intermediate mage, but Russell clearly told others. From these two points, it can be seen that the author deliberately created conflicts for the sake of the plot. The writing was too blunt. After all, it was the Thieves Guild. The intelligence capabilities were too poor. The results of the news delivered to the door were completely unknown. It can be seen from the magic communication network how convenient it is to communicate and find information. However, it is a bit outrageous that the Thieves Guild knows nothing and repeatedly sends people to cause trouble. It's understandable if you say you want to find an underground organization or an anti-terrorist group, but it's unreasonable to have to find an organization on the surface. . .

The protagonist pays too high wages to those supermarket employees. It's okay for the protagonist to pay high wages to employees because of his previous life. But it's too high, only a dozen gold coins a day, and there are rewards at every turn! What's more, the employees themselves are not worth that much at all. I understand the author's high salary, but it can't be too outrageous.

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After reading a few chapters, I suggest adding a setting, which is the insurance setting of seeds. Generally, magic seeds flowing into the market are covered with special insurance. After one generation of planting, they will degenerate into original seeds. Otherwise, it would be difficult to explain why the protagonist did not buy magic seeds from the beginning. After all, it is impossible no matter how little money he has. You can't buy one, and it's best to set the magic seeds you buy to be very expensive, such as accounting for 50% of the income, or seed patents, etc. A perfect country must have these, otherwise no one will research it, and they will just wait for others to research it (referring to new varieties), and they will go to whoring directly.

The protagonist says, "Without magic power, a magician is worse than an ordinary person." Is this funny? Even if Qiao Feng loses his internal strength, he is still stronger than ordinary people.

So cool, you have redefined the concept of pasture. Pasture is like leeks, cut again and again.

I thought that this kind of Tiancheng Great Magician could be upgraded through farming, but the result is ordinary farming. You sell the harvest for money, then buy magic resources, and then use these resources to upgrade. If there is a bottleneck or something, wouldn't you be blind? Isn't this kind of farming any different from working in other fields? What's the appeal of serious farming?