Watch Closely, This Is How a Mage Does It!

It stands to reason that I am a person who has lived my whole life again. I have seen another world, but my thinking is still shackles. I am trapped in this world system and go against the flow, struggling with a bunch of people who have learned relevant knowledge for more than ten years. Is there no idea of ​​​​doing some tricks and finding a new way?

When writing a single female protagonist, don't write so many plots where the heroine is ambiguous with the male protagonist. I really like it. I wrote a bunch of beautiful female characters surrounding the male protagonist and flirting with each other from time to time. In the end, it ended up being a single female protagonist. I was upset.

Looking at it, it feels like a replica of Nine Star Poisonous Milk

It seems to be pretty smooth, but there are too many little pitfalls, such as space invasion for many years. The proportion of awakenings in the college entrance examination every year is not low. It must be a state of blending between extraordinary people and ordinary people. However, in the novel, ordinary people have little understanding of extraordinary people. They are like people from two worlds. For example, they yell when they eat more. The author also always likes to use some bad jokes. For example, the boss is surprised when he eats too much. Special violation. When souls are parasitic and soul-departing, special care must be taken not to let others know about it. The protagonist uses it frequently, even if it can be solved by other methods. It's like everyone except the protagonist is a fool. As long as the protagonist doesn't tell, no one will know. If the protagonist has a new ability, he must show it before the official competition. There is no fear of information leakage. The enemy must be like a fool and use the previous analysis of the protagonist to deal with it. This happens again and again. Anyway, except for the protagonist's collective wisdom.

I just wrote that Purify is an area-of-effect skill, but after two chapters it becomes a single-target skill. Also, even if I want to write a comedy genre, readers don't want to see a stupid protagonist.

The writing is smooth, the writing style suits me very well, and it is very comfortable to read. For me, it is definitely a novel above the level of food and grass. The character description is quite full, but the shortcoming is that the author hopes to focus on the insufficient description of the environment, and there is not a good sense of immersion. For example, I cannot imagine the appearance of Tokai Fortress City when I close my eyes, including the appearance of Tobu University and the enthusiasm of the competition. I cannot imagine it well after reading the author's words. However, even if the author does not make subsequent improvements, he can maintain the current level, which is quite nice.

What we're saying is that we really can't continue writing full-time fan fiction.

Can Shen Nong tell me how it was written?

The biggest poisonous point in the early days of this book is that in order to make the existence of the rich second-generation waste fat man grow small, mecha is forcibly set as an independent profession, but at the same time there is no threshold for use.

I like Nian Nian so much 😆 Al's picture of running by himself