Watch Closely, This Is How a Mage Does It!

If you're writing a story with only one female lead, don't include so many romantic subplots involving other female characters who have ambiguous relationships with the male lead. Seriously, I'm fed up with writing a bunch of beautiful female characters revolving around the male lead and constantly flirting with him, only to find out it's just a single female lead. It's so annoying to watch.

Logically speaking, having lived a second life and experienced another world, why is your thinking still constrained, trapped in the current of this world system, struggling against a group of people who have studied related knowledge for more than ten years? Don't you have any ideas for unconventional methods or alternative paths?

It looks like a clone of the Nine-Star Poisonous Milk.

It reads smoothly, but there are too many minor flaws, such as the long-standing issue of spatial invasion. The annual college entrance exam awakening rate is not low, suggesting a state of interaction between superhumans and ordinary people. However, in the novel, ordinary people know almost nothing about superhumans, as if they are from two different worlds.

I just wrote that Purification was an area-of-effect skill, but two chapters later it became a single-target skill. Also, even if I'm going to write a comedic story, readers don't want to see a stupid protagonist.

The writing is smooth and the style suits me perfectly; it's a very comfortable read and definitely a novel that's above average for me. The characters are well-developed, but a weakness, and one that I'd like the author to focus on, is the inadequate environmental descriptions.

We're saying if all else fails, we'll just keep writing fanfiction about Full-Time Master.

Can anyone share their thoughts on how well it's written?

The biggest flaw in the early part of this book was that, in order to give the rich, good-for-nothing, fat childhood friend a reason to exist, the book forcibly set mecha as an independent profession, but at the same time, there were no barriers to using it.

I love Nian Nian so much! 😆 AI ran the map by itself.