I Built a City in Another World

Why do you always blush and ejaculate?

Little princess

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is young and the protagonist is very silly. Hey, I want to read this type of book, but I always have a dilemma about subject matter and writing. Come on, the author is making great progress in his writing!

Will you add elements such as soldiers or the army in the future? Now these enlightenments are all made by the wife. You can't leave everything to your wife, right?

In fact, this book is not too bad to read, but there are problems with the treatment of the indigenous people, which makes it easy to watch. Author, you have to understand that the protagonist is a savior, not a philanthropist. The purpose of saving the indigenous people is for labor (even these labor forces are not necessary). So, don't turn these low-value indigenous people into nurturing uncles.

It's a very imaginative book, and the writing is pretty good. I haven't found any flaws at the 50th chapter. I just hope that the author can not disappoint in the setting and storyline, then this book will be a hit! 11 Votes support every day, author, come on 🤝🤝

I really like this kind of novels. The aborigines can use them. Also, the rate of eunuchs in this kind of novels is very high. Come on.

It's completely a self-pleasure article. It's normal that no one will read it.

The subject matter is good, but the main protagonist seems a bit honest and lacks the awareness to be the master

Brother, I think you haven't finished fighting zombies in the early stage. Will it be very messy if a bunch of evolved people suddenly come in? Moreover, with the presence of evolvers, it will become a technological system against a cultivation system. To be honest, several authors have written this way before, but all of them were rejected without exception, because most readers cannot accept it. In particular, many readers who are die-hard fans of Red Alert will feel that the system of Red Alert has been tarnished. I think you'd better weigh it carefully... After all, it's hard to say which of the two systems is stronger and which is weaker, and how to balance each other is also difficult. I hope you can control it 😥😥