The Unorthodox Jianghu

In my eyes, the name of this book automatically changed to "The Trajectory of the Righteous Paths in the World of Jianghu"

You Wu Ming is the main character, I guess. I particularly hate the countless coincidences where the villain and the supporting character just can't die, and when they are about to kill him, something suddenly happens. I was furious when I saw it. I was finally intercepted, and there was an accident again. It's so depressing to watch.

People are stupid, what does it mean to eat Haagen-Dazs, wear princess dresses, and be taken care of by others at this age? Generally speaking, in this era and background, when the protagonist laments the life of modern people, shouldn't he praise them for studying in clear classrooms at this time? Why are you so social here?

Can you kill a villain properly? Why, there are too few characters? At least go away and kill the villains every time. Do you think you are Gul'dan? Blz is indeed a character who is constantly killing people. How come you can't kill people through various coincidences?

I have a question. The people in the Kendama Dream are real, right? Then if you put a bunch of girls in it, and they can't beat you, and then you practice a picking skill, can you soar into the sky? Find a better cauldron to take with you, and you will be a virgin Yuanyin every time.

The writing is good, but the worldview of the people in it is far different from that of modern people. Even the protagonist's world view has become that of an ancient person, and his brain circuit is very awkward. He has just worshiped the boss and pledged his blood to protect him. If he really values ​​​​that much, he offered a gold finger to meet his junior sister but immediately refused; he saved the Xiaoxiang faction for profit and suddenly became friends of life and death... There are too many, and the protagonist is a bit fragmented. If writing about time-travelers has lost the vision of transcending the times, it would be better to write about indigenous people.

The writing of this book is excellent and the author is very progressive, but the problem is that the overall tone is too depressing. I don't know what the author is thinking. Basically, the protagonist is not given any time to level up. The main plot is just like a machine gun. Although the protagonist is a weak chicken, he has been getting stronger, but he can't keep up with the speed of map upgrades. I don't know what other people think, but anyway, I abandoned the book when it broke out. The update broke out during Overlord's Tracks. It was Cyber ​​who killed everyone in Gotham City, hacked to death a group of gangsters, and sent the Joker to hell. During Shadow Tracks, a hundred chapters broke out. It was Merlin who declared war on the gods in a rage, and his SHIELD department swept away the demons. Now hundreds of updates are breaking out here. The protagonist withered after killing some soldiers, was defeated by a magic sword master, lost the golden finger kendama, and was captured by a puppet controller... You can't keep suppressing it, why don't you show me some praise? The whole volume is suppressed, but the protagonist becomes more powerful after one or two chapters, and then another master comes out to suppress the protagonist? I find this disturbing.

The climax of this book is always frustrating. It was as if a man and a woman were having fun, and the woman suddenly said, "Have you eaten?" The man replied that he was eating noodles. It would be too disappointing to add a routine when writing a climax or setting up the climax. The author himself likes to build up the story for a long time and spoil the story in advance. Adding a routine to the climax will wear away the passion. And can you please not spoil the story in advance? There is no twist at all.

Generally speaking, this is a transformational book by Lulu. The Internet is very divided. The book is a good book. I feel that regardless of the plot, tightness and logic of the plot, it can be regarded as an excellent work in this era of online writing. But I feel that it lacks the flavor of martial arts in it, the flavor of martial arts. This is not an excellent martial arts novel. You can put him in a worldview like Western Fantasy and Dou Po, but it will still be like this. How to say martial arts? Martial arts is a flavorful rush. It's hard to say clearly. The knife is a knife with flavor, the sword is a sword with flavor, fast is fast with flavor, and slow is slow with flavor. The war is like thunder and drums, and the calm breeze is blowing on the face. It is to drink a pot of wine and give it to someone. Personally, I feel that the novel with the most Jianghu flavor is the first and middle period of Cuttlefish's The Lord of the World, when Xiao Meng walks to the end of the world with his sword. After reading it for many years, I still remember it freshly. One book and one sword smoothed the business, and he lived up to his reputation for fifty years!

Liu Zhuoran couldn't bear to see Shen Lan sleeping. Shen Lan was desperate to keep her virginity at first, and then desperate to avenge Ji You. Why was she suddenly willing to sacrifice her life for her enemy?