Xuanqing Guard

I feel that the author's writing style is still a bit less "old-fashioned". For example, the protagonist's nickname is "Evil Star". If you change it to "Evil Star", it will come out immediately. There are also those "internal newspapers and periodicals". In ancient times, when writing memorials, notices, and papers, "xxx test", "xxx book", or "minister reported on xxxxxxx things" were commonly used, rather than the modern party newspaper style of "xxx report". emmm, how should I put it, I feel that the expression method can still be polished. The current writing style is more inclined to fantasy and modern writing style, rather than ancient officialdom and fairy tales. It's not that you can't use the word "report" in your fictional historical title, but embellishing it to an antique style will obviously make people feel that the painting style is more realistic and pleasing to the eye. This book may be just a step away from being a masterpiece.

Your entire book is about solving crimes, what does it have to do with cultivating immortality? The Qi family can still see the factors of cultivating immortals in the front, but several other cases have nothing to do with cultivating immortals! I thought it would be available after it is released on the shelves, but it won't happen. I hope Jingxi Queen will have a story about cultivating immortals. If you just solve crimes and stuff like that, I might as well go to the legal channel.

After reading the update, everyone is talking about the advantages, so I won't go into them. I will talk about the shortcomings in my personal opinion. First "Xuanqing Division" has immortality, investigation, court, and war. Judging from the chapters that have been updated so far, the main focus is on investigating the case, and the rest are supplementary. Of course there is no problem with this, the problem lies in the investigation. The Xuanqing Division's case investigation is neither as detailed and brain-burning as reasoning, nor is it as restricted by laws and regulations as criminal investigation. It investigates cases simply and crudely, arrests when there is suspicion, and uses torture to extract confessions, which greatly reduced my enjoyment of following the protagonist to solve the case. Second, the form of the court is quite chaotic, and it is no exaggeration to describe it as a pill. Wen Yi Faction, Wu Yi Faction, Xuan Qing Si Faction, a prince's faction, Xiu Clan's faction, sect's faction, evil cultivator's faction, the emperor is alone and can add a Golden Sword faction, it can be said that there is a chaotic dance of demons, and this is just internal worries. The performance of these factions can be regarded as Machiavellian, but there is no sophisticated and careful planning at all, which makes people uninspiring. Third, the protagonist has been practicing to the second level, and there is no fighting, so it does not make me feel much emotion in this aspect. At most, it is "oh", not "wow". Fourth, there are really too few opponents, whether they are righteous or villains, whether they are solving crimes or practicing cultivation, there are no opponents. It is not that the protagonist is so strong that he has no opponents, but that there is really no such character. After a lot of effort, a major case officer Xue Gui came out. He said he was like a god in solving cases, but the result was at this level. I was very disappointed. Fifth The foreshadowing is too deep. The evil cultivator dug a hole in the beginning. I don't know what the evil cultivator organization is yet. I just saw fake evil cultivators and barbarians jumping around there. Sixth The map is too small. Xuanqing Division is an institution directly under the emperor of the country. No matter what, it cannot control other countries, let alone a country and a barbarian royal court that is about to recover. In the future, no matter how many foreign forces there are, they will not be able to compete with the Xuanqing Division investigating the case, and there will still be a question mark on how the plot will develop. Let me leave an idea here, that is, in the end, Xuanqingsi left the court and was no longer the Xuanqingsi of a country, but a world policeman monitoring the world. The problem with this idea is that Xuanqingsi has a dirty butt, a bad reputation, and weak fists. Seventh Returning to the main line of investigating cases, there is no end to one case after another. Holmes, and Officer Han, too, should think carefully about the content of the future case and how it will end in the future. Of course, if the main line of the story is not in the investigation of the case in the future, just pretend I didn't say anything about it.

I like it. The cultivation level can be improved appropriately. Most of the protagonists in such otherworldly novels such as the Xuanjing Division, Jing Mosi Division, Jing Wu Division, etc. Are fighting monsters to upgrade their cultivation level, and then use their cultivation level to crush them. It is really rare to solve crimes, but your cultivation level cannot be lowered.

I have read Chapter 300 so far. My cultivation level is improving too slowly. Especially compared to the disciples of the sect, I am so weak that I have no ability to resist if I forcefully kill you.

The writing is good, don't read it as a cool novel, you can put some thought into it, I hope the author writes better, and I pray that the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. 🙂

What can I say? I have read more than 400 chapters. The writing is good and the story is good. I just feel that the protagonist does not make people feel involved. Why in a world where people have been watching for a long time has a time-traveler who is extremely obsessed with officials come? To put it lightly, being an official for so long can really bring benefits to the protagonist's own cultivation. It's a sect and a cultist. He almost stopped eating Pei Yuan Dan and so on. What is he trying to do? His working soul traveled through the feudal system and only wanted to be a stinky part-time worker. He was busy every day and ended up asking for exercises and techniques. He didn't get any magic weapons or treasures. He didn't get any chance to get to a secret realm. So what did he want to ask the protagonist?

After reading hundreds of chapters, I feel that the book is quite good, but the author failed to grasp the key points. The aspect of strength in the world of Xianxia is not reflected at all. The procrastinating plot gave me the feeling of reading a historical novel, without excitement or pleasure! A world where great power is attributed to oneself should not be so ordinary. There are killers, aristocratic families, sects, evil cultivators, how could no one dare to touch you? Doesn't even the emperor dare to scheme? The author could give some serious thought to this aspect

This book should not be read as a novel about cultivating immortals. You can read it as a novel about ancient Jin Yiwei solving crimes. The author added cultivating immortality into the book without setting the force value, which is a bit too much. Let me give you an example. The book always says that the protagonist cannot bear the heat in summer and has to fan himself. Come on, the protagonist is an immortal cultivator. Mortals can bear the heat of summer. You, an immortal who can soar in the clouds, are still afraid of the heat? This logic makes absolutely no sense!

This book is okay. It's possible in terms of money. . . Have some potential