The Dark Immortal Court

Do you know why so many people said in the previous book that it was a pity to throw away the food if it was tasteless? It was always written from the third perspective under the guise of the first perspective. The protagonist was like a bystander with no emotions, no special personality and preferences.

It's so boring, it seems like I'm cultivating immortality, but I don't seem to be there; I seem to be in the underworld, and I seem to be playing dirty tricks in the officialdom.

Do time travelers have to have a sister?

I wrote it in such a hurry that I wrote several lines, including a clay figurine blood guard, a female ghost and the fairyland, a gang, and a family. It was a bit confusing.

The protagonist in this book is very shrewd, but every time he encounters some difficult things, he relies on cheating to solve them. He seems shrewd but is actually imprudent. For example, when the barbarians siege the city, they could have left early and concealed their strength, but in the end, they had to fight with two Dao Danjings, completely exposing their own strength. I really can't stand it anymore!

The writing is good, but the development is too slow. It has 650,000 words, and it is still a little guy. He has not left the novice village. He has been living in the cracks and being manipulated. Anyone can bully the protagonist. Also, how can the protagonist rebel in a world with such great power at his disposal? According to the meaning in the book, this is a fairyland that spans multiple realms. This kind of strength, without the strength to crush everything, is simply a dream.

The sense of peacekeeping is too strong. When I came to Fairyland, I felt that I had read the first few hundred chapters in vain. The levels were too different and I had no sense of participation. Why is it that the author has set billions of worlds and infinite planes now? Can it really be written? He only thinks about setting up the airs and not filling in the story. They are all empty airs and no story.

The villains in Jian Rujiao's books are too weak, and conflicts and excitement are hard to come by. Xuan Qingwei should be at the top.

I read more than a hundred chapters. I feel like the author should advertise or find other authors to PY. Although I don't know what writing style you like, I feel that it should be more than this. In addition, I feel that the title of this book is average. If I had not read Xuan Qingwei, I would not even click on it.

I think this book has one of the biggest shortcomings. If you write the plot of the sword hall, write it well. One moment, there is a battle between cultivators in the sun and clouds, and the next moment, you and I are cheating in the plot of the sword hall. Really boring. Might as well write the plot of the knife shop.