Swallowed Star: The Supreme One's Path of Inquiry

This book is actually quite good, but I still can't hold it up anymore, so I have to withdraw it. The heroine I wrote in the beginning has a disgusting character, and then the author said that she should tone it down, and then I thought about reading it again. But every few chapters, the woman will appear once to disgust people. It's not that you can't have a heroine, but even if you are a flower vase, you have to write it in a lovable way.

I hope the author will not be lazy and let the protagonist go to the world of Blood Luo, let alone crush Luo Feng without thinking! The first Blood Luo World is a mission in the Secret Realm of Taichu. I personally think that it was specially selected by the Virtual Company in order to train Luo Feng, the man who took away the golden-horned beast. It is impossible for the Virtual Company to arrange a mission for Xia Zhi, a person who walks in time and space, to go to the Blood Luo World to train like this. The task of raising beasts and gods, The attitude of the virtual company towards the core members who are born in genius warfare is very obvious. Before Immortality, they tried their best to cultivate and protect them. Of course, this kind of cultivation and protection is to give you the opportunity. Whether you can get it depends on your own chance and choice rather than giving it directly! In fact, normally speaking, the golden-horned giant beast should not be given up to Luo Feng. After all, giving birth to a clone is more valuable and more in line with human nature for Xia Zhi. The existence of Xia Zhi itself must have changed Luo Feng's trajectory. It is lazy to let Luo Feng follow the trajectory of the original! For example, it would be more reasonable for Luo Feng to obtain the Nine Tribulations Secret Code in advance and other opportunities that he did not get in the original work. It is normal to rely on the Nine Tribulations Secret Code and opportunities to become second only to Bo Lan or even kill Bo Lan. Luo Feng himself is a very talented person! At least compared to Xia Zhi, Luo Feng's will and understanding are stronger than those of Xia Zhi. Luo Feng's choice of gains and losses is the most important factor for him to reach the end. If he relies on his clone ability to be greedy and pursue all the time and space, he may not be able to achieve immortality and his life span will be exhausted. You don't have to crush Luo Feng to get the feeling of satisfaction. To be honest, normally Xia Zhi There is no other chance to catch up with Luo Feng and Bo Lan who has gone the wrong way. It is only reasonable to work a hundred times harder than Bo Lan, a pervert, and Luo Feng, a guapi. Bolan's choice of the time and space monument clearly proves that it is more powerful to develop at the upper level, but it is more difficult to comprehend. The speed of traveling through time and space to comprehend the laws is naturally not as fast as that of the lower level, let alone Luo Feng's clone! I personally think that Bolan's path of time and space is not necessarily wrong. With his level of genius, if he gets some opportunities, it may not be impossible! What he did wrong was that when he saw Luo Feng and the others surpassing him, he wavered and changed his path. This was destined to make him impossible to become a super strong person! One star period's space perception exceeds that of most World Lords. In the World Lord stage, it takes more time to gain some opportunities and may not become immortal as early as Luo Feng, but it is normal to become a Venerable earlier than Luo Feng! Xia Zhi's supreme inheritance can at best offset the difference in the speed of the lower ones' law awareness. The two clones of Demon Killer and Golden Horn are very incomprehensible. At least in the early stage of Xia Zhi, it is impossible for Luo Feng's enlightenment to develop as fast. It would be too big to rely on the Snow Eagle clone to crush the opponent. After all, the bloodline of the Snow Eagle world clone is the blood of the Time Demon God, which can offset the Golden Horn! Time eats up the worthless, because a virtual company has ten thousand times the time limit! The only chance to keep up with or even surpass Luo Feng is the skill system and opportunities of the Snow Eagle World, and relying on the protagonist's wisdom to integrate the resources of the two worlds into practice qualifications is much more interesting and more reasonable than simply opening the Taishang Heritage. If the Taishang Heritage is too powerful, Xia Zhi will not be able to suppress it unless the reverse golden finger is opened. It is more suitable as a stepping stone to the path of time and space before immortality and as a speed awareness aid! For example, will the existence of Xia Zhi make the mountain guest change the choice of inheritor? Should he directly change his mind and choose Xia Zhi or prepare other resources for him to provide double insurance? For the reincarnation of the powerful God King, just missing something can make the Lord of the Universe choke to death! For example, is it possible to use chance treasures to guide Xia Zhi to obtain the inheritance of a powerful school? And if the protagonist is such a genius, will the Lord of Chaos City accept Luo Feng as his disciple? Will it increase or decrease the difficulty of the test? At least you have to give a reasonable explanation for why Xia Zhi can keep up with or even surpass Luo Feng, whose backer cheated him, and he himself cheated, right? You can't just brag about the supreme inheritance and the snow eagle clone and crush it without any brains, right? The author is carefully thinking about the power system and development route before writing. There are too few good ones written by Devouring fans, and it is a pity that the writing collapsed.

This time I was bragging. I was as awesome as I was, and then I pressed my state to death, and then I kept chasing. It was too strong, it was really too strong, how could it be possible? The first genius in tens of millions of epochs, my fucking ears exploded.

I believe everyone who has read Snow Eagle Lord knows that Snow Eagle Lord is a future world that swallows the stars. The original book tells that Dongbo Snow Eagle met Luo Feng's son Luo Hai when he was the Void God. Luo Hai was also the Void God at that time, and now when Luo Feng is at the planetary star level, the protagonist relies on Yuan's A piece of World God Token traveled to Lord Snow Eagle, and it was the same generation as Dongbo Snow Eagle. They were in the same world, which meant that they would use the same timeline. In other words, when Luo Feng had not yet risen, the creator of Tianyu Universe was most likely not born yet. So Dong Bo Snow Eagle? Writing this kind of flow that travels through different areas in the same world has its own bugs. How can you fix the bugs if you use a dollar to increase the bugs? You might as well write a system document. The final right of interpretation belongs to the system. At least the bug system flow of the timeline is easier to explain than the enhanced version of the Yuanhe Jie Xin Ling's Jie Shen Ling, right? After withdrawing, I couldn't see a bit.

The Silver Alliance was originally planning to reward the new book. It's a pity that Suifeng cut it... But it's normal. After all, Suifeng's new book preparation time is very short, and it can be seen that he wants to succeed too much. Recently I read an old book again, and this one should be for free. Later, I looked at the starting point that I just came to and added my subscription. In this case, the Silver Alliance will give it to Laoshu. This is Sui Feng's first masterpiece, and I hope to keep up the good work in the future! A silver alliance is disrespectful! Don't keep me waiting too long for the new book.

There are too many bugs and the author is a fake fan

In fact, Tomato fan fiction is the most difficult to write, in my opinion the main reasons are these. First, the protagonist of Tomato has a very upright outlook on life. He has feelings for his family, country, and nation (race). He is also very measured towards his friends, brothers, lovers, and family. He is a good person from the perspective of ordinary people. He is kind to his friends but not selfless, he is strict but caring to his children, he is filial to his parents, he is consistent with his lover, he performs some slightly unprincipled but common acts of help to the brotherhood, he always takes care of his family and loves everyone at the same time, but he loves everyone not only for others but also for himself. This is basically an impeccable protagonist template. The protagonist is unambiguous about right and wrong, has personal characteristics and charm, and is reasonably selfish. If you write a fanfic about this kind of protagonist and overpower him, it will make the audience of Tomato novels that are attracted to it unhappy. Therefore, how to balance the fanfic protagonist and the protagonist of the original novel is a big problem. Second, the golden fingers given to the protagonist by Tomato are extremely critical and outstanding. What's more important is that these golden fingers are gradually assembled and are useful at every stage. Different small adventures are matched with different stages to maximize the use of the golden fingers. And the golden finger given by Tomato to the protagonist is usually matched with the protagonist's personal qualities to maximize the benefits. For example, in the chapter of Swallowing Stars and Transforming into a Dragon, Luo Feng got the golden finger. One of the bugs was that it was matched with his family concept. Third, Tomato's writing is plain, but the plot is intertwined, and there is a lot of room for imagination. The scenes are grand. Although he is not good at writing about specific battles, he is very good at writing about personal growth and changes in racial families. This will make it very painful for those who write fan fiction. If they don't follow the original work, they will use Tomato's spare space to write. The writing will not be brilliant. If you follow the plot, you will not be able to get rid of the protagonist's light. Just like the second half of the book we are currently looking at, if we continue to write plots such as extraterrestrial battlefields, cosmic secret realms, and cosmic seas, most of our imaginations will not be as good as Tomato, and it is easy for the writing to be unexciting. This is also the reason why there are many eunuchs in the Devouring fandom that I mentioned under other Devouring fandoms.

This book has been on the bookshelf for a long time. The bad points in the front made me give up. I really haven't read the book recently. After resisting the front, I found that the later chapters are getting better and better. Although there are still many bugs, it is still enough for me to read.

The author needs to be rigorous in his writing. It's really not okay to leave loopholes easily. Even if I try to figure it out later, it will still be uncomfortable to watch. Especially some low-level mistakes! The so-called fan works are some modifications made within the original framework! Anyone who can insist on reading this is considered a generous reader. Otherwise, the opportunity to snatch Luo Feng would be enough to wipe out half of them. Then adding the deeds that are almost exactly the same as the protagonist's, it is nothing more than changing Luo Feng into Summer Solstice. Some people will be wiped out again! With an original framework, add some of your own things, and write with care, everyone will support and be interested. Don't just copy the original text! Don't even write about the Venerable taking random actions on the battlefield! I know good advice is hard on the ears, so if you don't feel comfortable hearing it, don't reply. I won't talk any more! If you don't get along with each other, just ignore each other! Tomato's success today is due to his sufficient imagination and rigorous writing attitude. Fans are just copycats, the real writing still needs to be done by yourself! ! !

Since the author said that he would consider revising the article. I would like to make a few suggestions here for reference only. Of course I don't dare to say they are brilliant, but I hope it can give some inspiration to the author. After all, I have read it chapter by chapter, and even if I am distracted now, I definitely like the book as a whole. Before, I wrote a long review in this book review circle about why the timeline issue is a huge failure and the reasons why the plot collapsed and the performance dropped after the Snow Eagle part of God of the Void. I won't go into details here. Originally, I was looking forward to the author coming back, but I have been too busy these days to catch up on updates. Yesterday, when I clicked on the title "Want to Slave Me", I felt something was wrong, and I was really put off by it. It seems that the author himself did not think of a clever way to bring this plot back to life. In this case, I will venture to offer some thoughts and discuss the plot as an enthusiastic book lover. I think the timeline issue needs to be changed to be relatively reluctant and reasonable. Changing only Chapter 562 will definitely be a waste. The solution I can give is that it needs major changes since Tianyu Universe came out. At least all the parts about meeting Luo Hai, her daughter, and Hong should be deleted. These sections are super stretched, and leaving them would be a failure. Crossing the timeline and traveling to the world of Snow Eagle, I have to admit that it made my eyes shine from the perspective of fan innovation, but from the perspective of plot rationality, it is the biggest fundamental failure of the book and the source of all the problems today (the details are explained in the previous long review, if you are interested, you can read it). But this problem is also the foundation of the existence of this book, so it cannot and cannot be changed. I can only pinch my nose to round it up. To complete this section, we must first add settings to Lord Hunyuan, and add a super patch that allows Lord Hunyuan to be certified forever. After being certified, his power will penetrate all time and space in the past and future. Although this patch is obviously not established in the original work (otherwise Luo Feng in Snow Eagle would have known this "lord" when he first met Snow Eagle, but in fact the Lords and Hunyuan Life were not sure about Snow Eagle's future and could only cultivate it by casting a net), but without this patch, it would be impossible for the two souls of Xia Zhi to communicate across time and space with the two source worlds across billions of epochs. This patch is finished, and another patch needs to be made, that is, who is "Tai". I don't know what Tai's identity is in the author's outline, but if I were to set it up, he could also be a Hunyuan Lord, an old friend of the same camp as Yuan, but he should have fallen. Lord Hunyuan is the supreme being and the ultimate of everything, but he has only reached the end of his cultivation realm. If he is not true, he cannot be killed. After all, if I remember correctly, Xue Ying's original work mentioned two lords who were killed: the two kings of the natural Hunyuan life, the terrifying serpent and the Ten Thousand Touches Dragon Mother. Since the Hunyuan King who was born on the Hunyuan life side will die, there is obviously no reason why the Hunyuan Lords of the same level as him in the acquired cultivator camp cannot be killed. Tai was killed by a certain Hunyuan King, but left the Tower of Taiyu and the Bell of Zhouji as the inheritance of the lord. Because if Tai was still alive, the First Taiyu Tower would not have fallen to this point, and Pan et al., As the inheritor of the Taishang Sect, would not have died so miserably. Secondly, it would not be Yuan Lai's turn to form a good relationship with Xia Zhi. Then let's talk about the most critical point in the plot modification: Xia Zhi himself must not have become a lord when the second soul left Tianyu Universe. Otherwise, there is no need for the second spirit to continue practicing, and there is no point for readers to continue reading. After all, Lord Hunyuan has reached the end of his realm, and you have already reached the ultimate level. Why do you still have to watch a second-spirited spirit re-cultivate in a meaningless way? This is unreasonable in terms of plot, and not creatively satisfying. Therefore, the second soul has to be given a meaning of cultivation - to cultivate a semi-Hunyuan life, become one with the original deity, and become the Lord of Hunyuan in one step. This at least makes sense plot-wise. So is it possible that the summer solstice is slower than the peak of Biluo, which is practiced in the Origin Continent? From a rational point of view, it is entirely possible. After all, according to Xue Yingli, Luo Feng's journey through reincarnation was the most extreme road to quick success—to prove the Tao completely through force. I remember it was said in Snow Eagle that it was incredibly fast for Luo Feng to go from arriving at the Source World of the Origin Continent to becoming Lord Hunyuan. To be honest, I think judging from the starry sky chapter of this book, Xia Zhi and Luo Feng's talents are basically on the same level. In terms of pure talent, both of them are actually far inferior to Dong Bo Snow Eagle. What Xia Zhi has more than Luo Feng is that he has practiced the Hunyuan level secret method from the beginning, as well as gained the insight and understanding of an additional source world. But there is no essential gap between these after Luo Feng obtained the Lie Yuan Technique or was inherited by Yuan Zanzhong in the Origin Continent. And I personally feel that Xia Zhi is following a more orthodox path of divine power breakthrough and law enlightenment, rather than being as extreme as Luo Feng. In this way, it is more reasonable for Luo Feng to achieve Lord Hunyuan faster than Xia Zhi. Only in this way can it reflect the extreme speed of cultivation that requires hard work to prove the Tao or death. Furthermore, after all, Xia Zhi has a soul that has not returned, and the true spirit is incomplete. It makes perfect sense to say that it has an impact on breaking through the world-class Hunyuan life and even the lords. And make up for the timeline issue. In this case, when the second spirit of the Summer Solstice traveled to the chaotic void, he should be a semi-chaotic source life in the real time line. If we want to patch the timeline, we can only pull Yuan over. Yuan Ying sensed that Tai's inheritance had been acquired, so he came over to make a connection with Xia Zhi to see what the inheritor of his old friend looked like, and by the way, he gave him a super opportunity to go to the Chaos Void. The chaotic void can be the source world created by Tai or even the hometown source world refined by Tai. In it, Tai retains something that is very beneficial to the inheritors. After Tai's death, Yuan has been managing this source world, so he threw away the inheritors of Tai. However, due to the influence of the Chaotic Divine Beast, the second soul of Xia Zhi fell into the turbulence of time and space during the fight and traveled to billions of epochs later. But for Lord Hunyuan who is entrenched on the timeline, there is no essential difference between billions of epochs later and now, and they are still within the reach of his power. The fact that Xia Zhi was thrown into the turbulent flow of time and traveled into the future by the battle between the two Hunyuans was unpredictable to the lord because it involved other Hunyuans. However, when the second soul of Xia Zhi fell into the turbulence of time and space and appeared in the future, the influence of the other Chaotic Sources had disappeared. Of course Yuan, who had seen it with his own eyes and had a causal connection with it, would immediately be able to observe the Summer Solstice Lord after infinite years in the future. After all, time was meaningless to the Lord. But for now, although the lord has a permanent certificate, the Summer Solstice lord has not completed the "one certificate" in the real timeline, so there is no "eternal certificate" achievement that will last through the past and the future. To the other Lords of Hunyuan, the Summer Solstice Lord after infinite years is just a false reality that is temporarily unattainable and can be changed. However, for Yuan, he must be happy to see the birth of a new Hunyuan Lord of the acquired cultivator camp. Especially as the inheritor of Tai, he can definitely join Yuan's camp and strengthen his own power. Under this situation, Yuan could not let the other Hunyuan lords, especially the lords of the hostile camp, come into contact with Xia Zhi, lest they use their great power to block the future of Xia Zhi lord. So he split the timeline of the chaotic void source world. The chaotic void source world was peeled off from the entire infinite source space. This helps Xia Zhi, who is at the semi-Hunyuan life level in the Origin Continent or elsewhere, to avoid the time paradox, and also creates an absolutely airtight and safe environment for Xia Zhi's second soul in the chaotic void. This is also the reason why Xia Zhi can communicate across the time of the source world and billions of epochs by using the imaginary clock of Zhouji. Because the moment the second soul reincarnated into the Tianyu Universe, Yuan had already established himself in the real present timeline and fished out the chaotic void source world where the second soul existed billions of epochs later. Therefore, at that time, there were not hundreds of billions of years between the two Summer Solstice, but a real "parallel" time and space - when Xia Zhi's second spirit grew up in the Tianyu Universe, his true form was not Xia Zhi, the semi-chaotic source life form that originated from the mainland, but the human Xia Zhi in the original universe who was at a similar level to him. As for the half-Hunyuan being Xia Zhi, his second soul is not in the same real reality as him, and he may even be unaware of the existence of the chaotic void captured by the yuan. Since the chaotic void itself during the Devouring Starry Sky period is the source world managed by Yuan, I believe that Yuan, as the oldest lord, has the means to do this. Even the significant time flow rate difference between the Snow Eagle World and the Starry Sky World in the early part of the article can be used as evidence of this - it is precisely because the Chaotic Void Source World was fished out of the real timeline by Yuan that the time flow rate of the two source worlds is inconsistent. After all, the original work specifically mentioned that the time flow rates in the two source worlds of Chaos Void and Jiexin Continent are almost exactly the same. And considering that the ultimate realm of Chaos Void are super old otakus who have not wanted to go out for hundreds of millions of years, it is normal for them to be completely unaware of the changes in their source world. Even if they have the ability to realize it, Yuan Ye must have a way to prevent them from realizing it. Since Xia Zhi's true form entered reincarnation, Yuan's "novice protection period" for Xia Zhi began to gradually end. This is the first time point when the chaotic void source world begins to quickly return to the right track of real reality under the control of Yuan. Time inside the Chaos Void is passing normally, but the entire Chaos Void is rushing down the river of time in real reality. Until the second time node appears - the second soul of Xia Zhi emerges from Tianyu Universe. At this time, the chaotic void has completely re-integrated into the real reality, that is, the reality of Xia Zhi's deity has become a semi-Hunyuan life. This is also the reason why Xia Zhi can no longer sense me after my reincarnation, because during this period of time, the entire chaotic void is surfing in the river of real time, so naturally I can't sense it. As for why it still cannot be sensed after the timeline is synchronized, it is because Xia Zhi's original deity wants the second soul to use a completely different route (body + soul) to achieve the semi-Chaotic Source. When the two gods merge into one to complete themselves, they are trying to achieve the world-class and lord-level double jumps like the original Dongbo Snow Eagle, and quickly rush from the Semi-Chaotic Source to the Chaotic Source Lord without bottlenecks. As for Luo Feng's problem, this is another trouble. The simplest solution is that Lord Luo Feng is protecting Xia Zhi himself and keeping an eye on the Chaos Void with Yuan, without actually managing the source world. In this case, a lot of self-created content is required, for example, there is no Star Tower but Yuanshen Palace, and there are no Star City, Sword Emperor and other characters. A more complicated solution is to still let City Lord Luo manage the Chaos Void, but this requires double time nesting. When Yuan handed over the Chaos Void source world to Lord Luo Feng, the Chaos Void had already reached the real reality. At this time, Xia Zhi was already the top semi-chaotic source. Luo Feng must have taken over Chaos Void to fully support him in becoming a lord. However, Tianyu Universe has not yet reached the real reality at this time, and is still surfing in the long river of time. It was not until the eve of the summer solstice that Tianyu Universe reached the real reality. In this way, there will be fewer self-created plots in the later stage, and the pattern of Chaos Void can basically follow the original work. But no matter which way, the daughter of Luo Hai and Xia Zhi should not appear, and Hong should not stand in front of Xia Zhi. Instead, he can serve as a secret protector. But to be honest, there is no need for the second spirit of Xia Zhi to go to the Jiexin Continent. After all, there are two lords and a top semi-chaotic source who are paying close attention to them, and any necessary inheritance of skills can be properly and reasonably arranged. In this case, they should be a safe group in the Chaos Void. City Lord Luo should not meet the second soul of Xia Zhi before the second soul reaches the semi-chaotic source (or at least the ultimate state). When the second soul of the Summer Solstice has cultivated the semi-chaotic source that is the opposite of the original deity, the mystery is revealed, the two gods merge into one, the chaotic void is refined, and the legacy of Tai is taken away, then it is logical to become the lord. Letting Dong Bo Snow Eagle refine the Realm Heart Continent will not affect his achievement as a lord. In this way, everyone is happy and it is a successful conclusion. Moreover, the later plot can be long or short. If it is shorter, the ending can be written quickly. If it is longer, you can create an original plot during the time when Snow Eagle takes the World Heart Token and reincarnates to the World Heart Continent. I personally think this is a remedy for plot logic. It may not be good, but at least I hope it can inspire the author.