Cultivating Immortality in the Wilderness, with My Traits Refreshing Every Day!

The author suddenly published a book, and I have two suggestions. It depends on the author whether he listens to it: first, when writing the plot, the characters must not feel inconsistent, that is, the behavior, personality and atmosphere do not match; second, you must consider whether the plot is a poisonous point. As for what is a poisonous point, it is the point that makes most readers unhappy. After all, you are not a master, and there are not many staunch fans to support you. Now you only need to write the plot smoothly. Several of your previous books were more or less collapsed because of this. It's not that the protagonist's losses are poisonous. For example, Ji Ning suffered losses several times, but most readers don't think it's poisonous, because Ji Ning actually didn't lose anything. He only lost a little face. Secondly, he gained something from the incident, which was greater than the losses he suffered, such as vigilance, enlightenment, state of mind, and epiphany. I will give you two typical examples from the books you have written before. I hope you can listen to them. First, the heroine is Jiulian. You should carefully consider and analyze the advantages and disadvantages before writing. There are no advantages. The only one that can barely be calculated is that she is a character in the original work. Everyone is familiar with it. To give an extreme example, this example is not appropriate, just take a look. A child fell into the water, and one person had the ability to save him, but failed. Although whether to save the child is a personal choice and understandable, others can understand that there may be some difficulties after all, but it does not mean that others accept it. The second is that the protagonist seizes a clone with a high genetic multiple. Others are jealous and want to take it away, and the Lord of Chaos City also steps in to put pressure. I know that the author wants to suppress a small climax first, but this is a serious inconsistency with your character design. It goes against the orderly and neutral camp that the Lord of Chaos has a big picture in the reader's perception. It is seriously inconsistent with the tomato flavor of Devouring the Starry Sky. It makes the high-level human race too petty. If the protagonist gets a pinnacle treasure or a most powerful treasure, which is about the same, what the hell is a clone with a slightly higher gene multiplier, the Chaos City Lord needs to be punished. The advantage is that the writing is easy, the plot development is reasonable, and it can also lead to a small climax. The disadvantage is as mentioned above. Author, you may have some considerations. For example, in theory, the fate of the Chaos City Lord is reasonable. I roughly know how you think about it, but you need to know that readers also think about it. In theory, it is okay for the Chaos City Lord not to die. And you have to understand that you write it for readers to see, and you make money from readers. The author must have his own thinking. He cannot just listen to what the readers say and just change it without any ideas. However, he cannot be stubborn and refuse to listen at all and think that what he writes is totally fine. Again, the author is not a great author, you don't have so many die-hard fans, and the plot is unlikely to be perfect. If you can't listen to any of the readers' suggestions, then you won't make any progress. Of course, you can't listen to everything. You have to have your own considerations and don't be stubborn.

As expected of being famous for writing fan fiction, this book includes things like Swallowing the Starry Sky (the exam for a quasi-martial artist is based on the left ear of a monster) Eternal Life (a small realm with inner strength, divine power, etc.), The Wilderness Chronicles (not to mention this, the entire world view is almost the same)

Eunuch Bendu, you are invincible

As soon as it was released, it became eunuch and it was difficult to stretch.

It's really disgusting that this guy has a eunuch in every book. I think he'll change his name in the next one and he'll be a eunuch again.

So here 🧐🧐🧐 So what did this middle-aged man in purple robe inhale when he took a breath of cold air?

Take a seat🪖

I was confused at the beginning. If it weren't for the transparent senior who turned the pig's trotters into shit water, he wouldn't have raped the pig's trotters long ago.

Tag: basketball 😰

I just saw this new book recommended in the author's other books, but when I came over to see it, it just came out and it ended before it even started 😭