Transmigrating Before Swallowed Star

There should be less of this kind of supporting role that lowers your wits, it seems very annoying. And the main female star is this female star. I just exploded on the spot. It's all these years. What kind of virtues do female stars have? Isn't it disgusting?

Randomly changing the settings won't last long, because it's just for the purpose of devouring it. As a result, except for the name, all the basic settings have been completely changed.

There is no book to read, what it's like to try drugs three times and be persuaded to give up! To be honest, readers who read fan fiction basically search for fan fiction online because they love the original works very much. That is to say, some basic settings of the original work are the basis for these readers to follow the humanities. The first poisonous point in this article: bloodline! Not to mention the setting and how to match the plot for the future, once this setting appears, it will inevitably dissuade a wave of people. They read fan fiction just to continue the feeling of the original work, or to make up for some unfinished wishes in the original work, so if they change the basic settings, they will unreasonably abandon the book! Because they love the original work emotionally. If the author feels good about himself and tries to reason with them about how good the new setting is, how exciting it is, how exciting it is, they won't listen and will abandon the book directly. This is also how I felt after five chapters of trying Poison for the first time. Let me talk about the second poisonous point of this article: the heroine. When I saw the star appear on the stage, vaguely running towards the heroine's seat, I tried the poison again and failed for the second time, so I abandoned the book and left. In fan fiction itself, the most outstanding ones are basically the female protagonists, and in the original novels, the female protagonists are basically the ones that the male protagonists will succeed in the end. Therefore, in the fan fiction, try not to strengthen the female protagonist, but downplay it, otherwise it will feel like stealing the show. In addition, the newly added characters often affect the reader's feelings due to a weak sense of substitution, which in turn affects the performance of the work. This can easily make the author lose the desire to write, and finally click the knife, so it is recommended that the author pay attention to his subsequent creations. Finally, let's talk about the poisonous point of being knocked down during the third poison test: the plot setting. After going round and round, I clicked on the recommendation for the third time and tried this book. Before the subscription was released, I really couldn't hold it in anymore and was about to withdraw again. And this time I had a lot to say that I couldn't help but say, at least to make myself comfortable, right? I have been reading online novels for many years, so I just subscribe as much as I want. I have also read a lot of fanfics, and most of them are unavoidable. Because writing fanfics is not only because you really like the original novels, but also for grades? Many of them were good at the beginning, but as soon as they were subscribed, the results were not good, the author's mentality collapsed, and he left shortly after. So I feel like the biggest problem is that it's too casual. That's not to say that it's not good to do as you please, but in order to earn commissions from subscriptions, how much do you really pay? Is there an outline? How many words? Have you thought about the ending? Many fan fiction writers are basically unable to answer these questions, and this article feels the same way. So with such an attitude and dedication, what do you want to get back? What can be exchanged for it? Wake up, except when you were in school, who said that if you pay, you will get the rewards you expect? What's more, ask yourself, how much have you paid?        ，，，？ Isn't it good to write well? Isn't it delicious for us to watch? Wouldn't everyone be happy if I subscribed or even fully subscribed to it? Slipping away...

See Chapter 7, let's talk about it. Overall, the writing is quite good, and it is a relatively new subject matter among Devouring fandoms. But after all, we are writing fan fiction, so it is best not to change some basic settings randomly. After all, the earth is really small, and it has been 50,000 years since the Fallen Ink Star crashed. Some basic settings are actually in the universe. Now that you have made changes to enter the cosmic era, have you also changed the ones in the universe? We can write our own plot. After all, it's so far in advance, so we can write freely. But just like the bloodline of earthlings, it is just a race created by a mountain guest. The bloodline is very low-level. It seems that there is no awakening (I vaguely remember) and martial power. You can refer to the gains in previous lives, but don't change some of the artistic conception of Swallowed... Generally speaking, some basic settings are a bit flawed. There are still few chapters. I hope the author will follow and read more of Swallowed. It is also helpful for later preparation and overall setting.

Collected it, haven't read it yet, I'm keeping it, hoping it won't be a eunuch.

This Progress Earth chapter can write a million words! ! !

I don't know why Mo Xiaowu wrote this. It's so disgusting. It's barking like a wild dog.

It's a waste of books, but I can't stand it anymore. The description of the fighting is okay, but it's uncomfortable to watch when you're bored and paddling. Especially the grudges between ghosts and gods that haunt and abuse the Lord. Besides, there are so many written on the earth, what should we do in the future?

I just put on a layer of skin and borrowed the map and level. How have the other settings been changed?

Well written, keep up the good work! Only when you write your own meaning and don't stick to the original work can you have a future. It is better to read the original work than to read the original work. The last few Devouring novels are somewhat interesting. The world is so big, I want to see it! Hurry up and finish the Earth chapter! In addition, it is recommended to write less emotional scenes, as Devouring is really not suitable for romance. Furthermore, Devouring the World is a genius. If you are not talented enough, you will not be able to go far. With Pig's Foot's current talent, it feels like he is still close to being a peerless genius. How can he compete with other beings? How to prove the source of chaos? The pig's feet are cheating! It doesn't matter if it's like the Golden Horned Behemoth, it feels a bit low, and I basically won't write it in the later stages.