Swallowed Star: Eternal Undying

To be honest, those who devoured Luo Feng's opportunity were not very flattering. First, Luo Feng's three views are relatively correct. Basically few readers will dislike him. Second, after you grab it, you are sure that you can handle the world beast war. Luo Feng's machine source is all one link, one link. For example, without the inheritance of Babata, Luo Feng would not be able to survive the Golden Horned Giant Beast. Without the Golden Horn, Luo Feng might not be able to enter his field even if he is a genius.

The plot is too cliche. Devouring wants to break out of Luo Feng's plot. Don't write about Luo Feng's promotion route. You can use the military to fight against the beast tide. You don't need to be immortal if you encounter adventures. The universe and world lord are enough for the early stage. You can make up your own, and you don't have to be too strong. The basic secrets of the universe will do. After all, Swallowing Starry Sky is about the understanding of the laws. Secrets are the way to understand the laws. As long as there is a way.

Write your own style, you won't be popular if you are cliche!

Why do you always say "compensate Luo Feng", why don't you create a system or opportunity yourself, or don't be a showman and build an archway, if you don't use these, why are you traveling to swallow the stars? Are you making soy sauce? Why call Luo Feng 6666?

The most important thing is to persist and persist!

I don't understand that the Lord of the Golden Horn can still live after his soul has been destroyed. This is outrageous. No matter how many clones there are, there is only one soul. The author must have read the original work. This can all be wrong.

The strongest person in the universe has no clones. Evil Flower Allah is dead when he dies.

The character of the protagonist is not well set. While clamoring to surpass Luo Feng and become immortal, he also wants to follow Luo Feng's route and seize his opportunities. He has a weak mentality. The key point is that the author also set the protagonist to be a decent person. I really don't understand how the protagonist can seize Luo Feng's opportunities and then give him alms, while still befriending him with a face. If the protagonist is set to be an adult who will not be punished by heaven and earth for his own sake, I will feel better.

How can I put it this way? It's really disgusting to take it as soon as you take it, and you still have to act and stand up. In a world of personal power, you still look like a loser.

Stealing Luo Feng's opportunity is extremely poisonous. I hope the author can be more imaginative and not be like this. He would rather wake up the golden finger. Be reasonable and don't step into such a poisonous pit.