Swallowed Star: Eternal Undying

Frankly speaking, those who try to seize Luo Feng's opportunities rarely gain favor. First, Luo Feng's moral compass is quite upright, so very few readers dislike him. Second, after you steal it, are you sure you can handle the World Beast War? Luo Feng's resources are all in one link, one at a time.

The plot is too clichéd. Devouring the Stars needs to break away from Luo Feng's storyline. Don't follow Luo Feng's progression path; you can have him fight the beast tide with the military. For the fortuitous encounters, you don't need to be at the Immortal level; Universe or Realm Lord level is enough for the early game. You can even create your own; it doesn't need to be too powerful.

Develop your own style; clichés won't make you popular!

Why do you keep saying you should compensate Luo Feng? Either create your own system or opportunity, or stop being a hypocrite. If you're not going to offer these things, what are you doing here in Devouring the Stars? Just passing by, or cheering for Luo Feng?

Most importantly, persevere and persevere again!

I don't understand how the Golden Horned Lord could survive after his soul was destroyed. That's absurd. No matter how many incarnations he has, he only has one soul. Did the author skip around in the original novel? How could he make such a mistake?

The strongest being in the universe has no clones; once the Evil Flower True Lord dies, he is truly dead.

The protagonist's character is poorly developed. On one hand, he boasts about surpassing Luo Feng and achieving immortality, while on the other hand, he's obsessed with following Luo Feng's path and stealing his opportunities. He has the mentality of a weakling, and the author even portrays him as a righteous character.

To be honest, he took it, but then he had to act like he had it all. It's disgusting. In a world of individualistic power, he acted like a loser.

Stealing Luo Feng's opportunity is extremely toxic. I hope the author can be more imaginative and avoid this kind of plot hole. I'd rather the character awaken a cheat ability that's plausible than fall into this trap.