A Chaotic Intrusion: Starting from Snow Eagle and Devouring the Myriad Worlds!

Chapter 8 made me laugh. In the previous chapter, I said that I wanted to join a relatively free organization, but in Chapter 8, I said "If you don't have freedom, you'd rather die, hahaha, what an outrageous plot."

Suddenly, I discovered that the author's cool point is: before the fun begins, he must try his best to suppress the protagonist, and then let the protagonist dance later. For example, in a life-and-death battle, a demi-god is suppressing you in front, and you are shocked and slapped in the face from behind. Follow the same routine as 618, first increase the price and then decrease the price. What I want to say is that the best experience should be a thunderous thunder, a blockbuster, inspiring and hearty.

Are you writing about frustration? Let's go, let's go

It is extremely poisonous, and it can defend against the control of the soul by the Temple of Time and Space without the protection of other powerful people. It is even the first case since the Temple of Time and Space was built. The Mother Ancestral Religion has no causal lines, but there are more than one. This is enough for the Master of Time and Space Island to personally search for souls.

It's not exciting, it's all frustrating. I can't figure out why it's like joining Shuiyuan Taoist Temple. The protagonist has a half-year appointment, why not a three-year appointment? The Golden Horned Beast is just a pile of corpse rice. Can you learn from Dongbo Snow Eagle? No matter what you say, I'll practice mine. If you want to contradict, just be direct. There is also a half-year appointment. Why, if you win, let Sikong Yang kneel down and apologize?

From now on, everyone should stop reading this man's novels. Two consecutive books on The Eunuch, what do you think of the readers? I used it as a cash machine and ran away with my money while writing. My character is no longer good. If you are reading a new book, don't read it. I spent money on reading and ended up buying a book on eunuchs.

It's very strange. It's understandable that you want to go on a different track from Snow Eagle, so go for it. You have to do something that's not there, you can't control your mind, and you're being targeted by weapon spirits in various ways, and you still want to escape. So what's the purpose of arranging the plot of entering the Temple of Time and Space? Are you trying to make up for the contradiction by just creasing the number of words? Can't understand

Brother, since you are writing a book, don't get sick and entertain yourself?

The protagonist has traveled to the present and is pretending to be cool in front of a weakling. Then you run away when you encounter a monster; you are looked down upon when you meet a big boss; your subordinates are almost wiped out, so you show your basic skills to save people, and then you ignore it, do not retaliate, and let your subordinates solve the problem on their own; when you meet someone who comes to recruit, you complain that they look down on you. . . The protagonist never takes action with all his strength and does not show his own advantages. People know the protagonist's age and don't know the protagonist's talent. Why should they think highly of the protagonist? Why should you give preferential treatment to the protagonist? Are you really going to forcefully create conflicts? And if you fight against someone, it will be a tie at most. What's the point of it? Realistic writing? Life is full of ups and downs. . . It's far from the real thing compared to Taishang Wendao, and I really can't arouse the interest in catching up.

In fact, there are no problems with the plot. It is quite smooth and has not lost its level compared to before But I don't know what Sui Feng thought about setting the character of the protagonist to be so unpleasant, perverse, indifferent, and too violent There are a few parts in the middle that made me really unhappy 1. The part where I contradicted Lord He Shan felt a bit too much. Lord He Shan was domineering but also well-intentioned. The way the original Snow Eagle dealt with it made people feel comfortable. This is the power of Tomato's writing, and the slap in the face was light. But it's very cool. Sui Feng wrote too hard, and I feel a little embarrassed if I give myself freedom or die. 2. Brother Chao Qing said some nice things to make the protagonist feel a sense of belonging. As a result, the protagonist's inner monologue is that he only cares about the exchange of interests. To be honest, the protagonists of Tomato novels basically have feelings for family and country. Most readers who like Tomato novels will not like this. Since it is a Tomato novel fan, the protagonist's character is actually better to be kind, and he is not a Tang San fan. There are all kinds of dark protagonists over there 3. Before the protagonist participated in the ring battle, he heard many Feitian-level passers-by ridiculing him, and he felt in his heart that these rice insect Feitian Transcendents were rubbish. Later, when the devil came, they were just consumables for civilians, and they were damn waste. This paragraph makes me feel that the protagonist is really bad, and he doesn't care about his deeds. Even if he is forced to go out to search for demons, he is still sacrificing for the mortal world. I don't understand why the protagonist in Suifeng's novel would mock these flying extraordinary people so much 4. Being kidnapped by the Temple of Time and Space, many people think it is a poisonous point. In fact, I think it is good. But there is a dog-licking team behind who always wants to team up with the protagonist. Why does the protagonist want to meet him since he has no such intention? What about teasing? People are still waiting for it later, and the protagonist has no idea of ​​​​leading Fei, so what is the purpose of giving so many scenes to the dog-licking team to lead to the subsequent plot? I haven't seen it yet, but my senses are very poor from what I've seen so far, and I can't understand anything except the protagonist's selfish character. In addition, in the ring battle, a bunch of flying extraordinary people place bets. The protagonist feels that they are all a bunch of rubbish with today and no tomorrow, and they seem very violent and bad So such a selfish character has no feelings of family and country belonging to the ethnic group. At the beginning, because of the body of the golden-horned giant beast, he even thinks that people are tender and delicious (when Luo Feng captured the body of the golden-horned giant beast, the calm and hidden murderous violence has a faint charm. What does the protagonist here look like?) And has an arrogant personality. Is a very violent protagonist very attractive? It would be fine if it were other novels, but the main character of Tomato is set with such a character. This is the first time I have seen it. The content is obviously very good, but I feel uncomfortable every time I see it.