Cherishing Xing

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Let me explain some of the issues: ①The description of the scene in the writing style is my fantasy and love for the beautiful ancient scenes, not the number of words. Please don't treat the writing style that I advocate and study as nonsense. Thank you; ②The overlap between the last paragraph and the first paragraph of the next chapter is my habit of having a background summary. After deducting the paragraph, it will still be no less than 2,000 words. The charge for 2,000 words and 2,100 words will be the same after being put on the shelf, so it will not take advantage of readers. ; ③The plot is a slow growth type. I like to fight monsters first to level up and then duel with big characters to have a sense of accomplishment. It's not that I only know how to write weak chickens; ④The characters' words and deeds are exaggerated because this is a comedy. I did it on purpose. It's not that I can't write traditional ancient dramas. I originally wrote traditional ancient dramas and I just wanted to change the genre. Furthermore, what can a modern person who has just traveled to ancient times say something like Wen Zou Zou? If you treat this kind of humorous comedy as a serious drama, you are on the wrong set and it has nothing to do with me; ⑤ I have spent half a year refining the so-called golden three chapters. I have revised the plot twice, three times, eight times, nine times, and ten times. If you think it is ordinary, dull and unremarkable, it is because there is a problem with my ability. I tried my best. I am sorry that I am only at this level. Thank you. Thank you for your understanding and tolerance🌹

Although the article has been checked two or three times before being published, sometimes there are some typos that I didn't notice. You are welcome to correct the typos in the article and mark them in the article. I will revise them in time when I see them. Thank you all 🌹 (ps: After the revision, for the convenience of subsequent readers, I will delete the paragraph comment~Thank you again for correcting the mistakes, I love you~)

This article is a sweet article for girls. The writing style is light and funny. The author is 20 years old, ignorant, simple and silly. I don't know whether it is big or small, but she is still a girl. You should know that the heroine is fourteen years old, and she will not be a high-IQ and high-age writer. I am fourteen years old and in the second grade of junior high school, and I am still a middle school girl. This article is not a drama, it is a comedy, so I don't like to enter with caution.

A few sentences at the beginning of the novel create a bustling and lively world, and the descriptions of the environment in the middle or interspersed with the text are also quite interesting. Lanterns, boats, tulle, and heaters - a series of representative images with outstanding and unified characteristics highlight the contemporary nature of the scene. In addition, the simple and elegant writing style also fits with the historical and geographical dimensions of the novel, laying the foundation for the reader's sense of immersion. Adhering to the dual principles of there must be an eye-catching event at the beginning and that you must cross the water if you fall into the water, when Chu Jiaoxing traveled through time, the original nun who was not like a nun had just been fished out of the river by the powerful and unfathomable alluring Prince Qi. He took the opportunity to point out his identity before the time travel and the origin of the unexpected incident, and at the same time controlled the reader's reading rhythm with a compact plot. In the three golden chapters, in addition to the introduction of the setting, the author skillfully uses the accidental incident of a singer to throw herself into the arms of a wrongdoer. He describes straight to the point the character of the male protagonist who seems to be unruly but actually has a mental mysophobia. He also conducts research on each other from the perspective of the male and female protagonists. The combination of concrete descriptions and a trio of lively male supporting characters who are essential to making the novel laughable gave the novel's character portraits an initial sense of reality and appeal. At the same time, it also buried the suspicion that "the male protagonist is so handsome but the female protagonist actually shaved her hair to escape from marriage", which made the novel more sticky, and the overall performance is good. The original owner was born in the Chu family, an imperial businessman who was in decline. Due to his mother's early death, his stepmother's flattery, his sisters' frame-up, and his birth with different eyes, he was regarded as a stupid evil star from the sky. After Chu Jiaoxing traveled through time, he planned to deal with his scumbag father and vicious stepmother, and set a flag - to make the male protagonist Beigong Qianqiu turn around and marry her on time. From the perspective of the plot direction, it is a model that has a wider audience and is more commonly used. However, under the same general trend, to attract readers depends on whether the rhythm and details are well grasped, whether it is exciting enough, and whether the emotional drama is sweet enough. Currently, it seems that the plots are intertwined, the rhythm is compact and solid, and the heroine's quarrel is acceptable. The interaction between Beigong Qianqiu and Chu Jiaoxing also portrays the sweet feeling of pseudo-marriage first, love later, which heralds the arrival of the law of true fragrance. After so much praise, in fact, this book also has room for improvement. For example, the plot of the house fight can be polished to be more natural, and the plot of the heroine using her talents to defeat others can have more layers and reversals, so as to maximize the emotional value of the plot. Furthermore, the author can be bolder and the writing style can be lighter to achieve a dazzling effect. Overall, the book is very interesting, good luck to the author~🙌🏻

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She traveled through thousands of years and came here with the family heirloom pearl. She woke up from a dream on the deck of the boat and was shocked at the sight. He has a distinguished status, carries a peerless Mingzhu, and sits leisurely in the small pavilion of the painted boat, with an astonishing appearance. ​She has a pair of extremely shocking peach blossom eyes, but the color of her pupils is extremely rare: the left eye is hazelnut color, and the right eye is amber, crystal clear, like a finely carved jade gem. ​As the eldest son of King Qi, he has a beautiful appearance that captivates the country and the whole country, and his voice is elegant and noble. However, such a person actually has two eyes of different colors: amber pupil on the left and hazelnut pupil on the right, exactly symmetrical with her. When they first met, she consciously released her "poisonous gas" in her sleep, but it left a deep impression in front of him; and he told her, I am your fiancé, and deliberately flirted with her. When she let down her guard against him, became dependent on him, and regarded him as her salvation, he firmly said that he would break off the engagement. The two broke up on bad terms, but they were not simple at the same time. She had hidden conflicts at home, and he had disputes with strange circumstances. She is Chu Jiaoxing, and he is Beigong Qianqiu. They have a pair of Xuanming orbs and two pairs of peerless eyes. Let's see how the situation develops. Qianqiu's doting on apricot is all in "Being apricot".

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