A Pear-Blossom Rain in the City of Time

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Dear author, I would like to apply for daily benefits for your work. Can it be done?

I read a lot of novels today, and I'm speaking in general terms 1: The title of the book is not good, it's really not good, at first glance I thought it was the same as other Mary Sue novels 2: The writing style is okay, but too much rambling content is not good. I know that the male and female protagonists have stories before, but as far as I can see, the past stories don't seem to be clearly written [It's general, it should be I didn't write it, right?] In this case, either write it clearly, or avoid it. If you write too much, it will make the heroine weak, which is not in line with the title of the book. 3: Character creation, give me a suggestion, go watch Fei Chi Life, Zhang Fei's performance looks very clever. I don't know how you wrote this follow-up, but it is best to stand on the heroine's side. At the same time, the performance should be more lively, and it is difficult to stabilize the image if the temper is too grumpy. After all, it is useless for children to be irritable In addition, the image of the heroine is a bit soft. It is best to write smarter, and the intelligence is shown in the side. The main method lies in the behavior of the heroine. This is more in line with the title of the book, although the title is really poisonous The rating should be Seventy-five, it seems to be the highest score given today The details are okay, the character image is lacking, the male protagonist can't see much of the image, the contrast in performance feels more like a big boy pretending to be a CEO The plot needs further development, I hope the plot can drive emotions. If you don't write anger, the readers will become angry as the plot develops.

Jiangjiang is here, and the author is so excited that he sticks his little head out.

I heard that Lihua didn't get another ticket. Hahahahahahahahaha, I laughed so hard, I got free coins. Have a small reward, let's go, I hope you will continue to grab coupons tomorrow. I grabbed a little bit. Haha.

This is a very good novel. The writing is smooth and not sluggish. The author is a gentle person and very friendly to book friends. Why shouldn't I read such a novel? How can such an author not support this?

Because I don't like romance, but I'll give it a look. (For reference only) Rating: 4 stars Write more in the future, in the future... Well... Keep the writing style of the first three chapters, if you go further, you can become a god! Then, I suggest that the character's personality and deeds should be more closely matched... I really can't think of why a person with such a good temper would do such misdeeds Also! ! ! The most important thing! ! ! I recommend changing the cover! ! !

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