Lord of the Fortune Dynasty

I first read the free chapters, and it's clear the book has a grand scope, starting with the mortal borderlands, then likely the central domain, and finally the immortal realm. However, this book has three major problems. First, it's too verbose.

I haven't read it yet. I'm reading reviews saying there's no female lead, and I don't know what that means. Novels about emperors aren't very interesting without women. Actually, I think it's better without a female lead, but the protagonist should have concubines in his harem. In my opinion, having no female lead means having no feelings for women, and it has nothing to do with whether there are women or not!

I haven't read it, just happened to pass by. I think you could totally borrow from Guan Qi's "Eternal Life" in the genre of "Dynasty Rising." To be honest, even if you wrote a book similar to his, people would still read it. But you could actually borrow his exciting elements, like the progression of a dynasty, national beasts, the imperial advisor, the Heavenly Scripture, and most…

If it were a time-travel story, it might be worth reading! However, it's just a domestic rebirth story.

The author must be an immortal book fan!

I love the "dynastic power struggle" genre the most, but unfortunately there aren't many of them on Qidian.

To be honest, the author's writing style is good, and the overall scope of the book is quite grand, but is it really effective to introduce later characters in the early stages? Are clones useful? Maybe, but the clones you wrote aren't novel. Go read Huang Ting Dao Zu; his clones, complete with multiple identities, are truly impressive.

When I read cultivation novels now, I absolutely dislike the concept of spiritual roots. Even if it were spiritual roots, the best thing is a balance of the five elements; when did it become the worst? Moreover, Taoist cultivation doesn't need spiritual roots at all. It feels like the concept of spiritual roots is like a genetic mutation that produces an extra organ for absorbing energy.

I only read a few chapters! I really can't stand it anymore! This copying of immortality doesn't feel right at all! Immortality is supposed to be about cunning and shrewdness, but yours is just self-righteousness! Author, if you really like immortality, you should write fanfiction! I haven't found a single fanfiction about immortality yet! What a shame!

The first dynasty novel I liked was "Eternal Life," which I thought was quite good at the time.