The System Wants to Borrow My Powers

I have tried very hard to see more than a hundred pictures, but it still poisoned me to the point of passing out. He went on an adventure with a woman. Earlier, because the protagonist brought delicious dry food, he said that the protagonist only did such unimportant things. Later, he went to great lengths to save the woman, and even took the initiative to let the woman practice in that treasured place with him. It didn't matter, after all, the woman came to this place with the protagonist. But when the other woman was in a coma, the male protagonist took her to escape with him to detoxify him. He also offered to share half of the treasures he found on the way with her. I don't understand how you can't be so holy this morning! Then while saying that it was less cost-effective to redeem it for the system than for the military, he turned around and redeemed 9,000 points.

Chapter 44 is a little bit poisonous. Only with strength can you dare to start, but you will not obey military orders and insist on being cannon fodder.

I don't want to read it when you chose the military for training in the library and the military. You clearly know that the system can improve your skills and increase your points. Why don't you go to the military to fight in the library instead of increasing your points? ? ? ? ? ? ? It's better not to add this option. This plot is too stupid.

This book has a bright spot: the protagonist has a younger brother instead of a younger sister

The protagonist is treating his classmates as fools. The squad leader is certified by the school and has benefits. The protagonist's deputy squad leader only has obligations but no benefits, and is a fool. It turned out that the deputy squad leader really acted like a fool and helped the protagonist without any benefits. How can the protagonist be so good if he only wants benefits and does not work?

When I see a clone, I am afraid that the author will write about the clone, because many fantasy fairy tales write about clones, especially the kind of clone technique that is not only used for combat. The clone has a separate plot, and it will collapse after writing, and the number of words will slow down the plot and various problems will arise.

The subject matter of the entire book is acceptable and relatively novel, but why is the score so low? Let me make three points, purely personal feelings, please don't criticize 1. The character of the protagonist is simply extremely poisonous. Fang Ping, who is a world-famous martial artist, also traveled through the world of peace, and in the early stage, he only knew about cults, but he is so cruel that he kills bad guys for the sake of wealth. He is never soft-hearted, and he repays his kindness to his master and those who are kind to him, but it seems very smooth and does not feel artificial at all, and does not make readers feel embarrassed and pretentious. However, I always think that there is something wrong with the protagonist of this book. He is hypocritical, artificial, and pretentious, which really makes readers feel helpless. The words, especially the part about the master, made me embarrassed. There are masters in Koburi all over the world, but that is respect that is really paid for with life, and the protagonist respects it because he has seen it with his own eyes. The protagonist of this book is because he heard others say this and saw this person. I respect the amiable master, but it is really false. The key is to show respect at all times. There are also soldiers. I also know that soldiers need to be respected to protect their families and the country, but if the writing is not good, it should be brief. Don't always be warm-hearted and grateful. It is very hypocritical. 2. Settings such as realm and martial arts: To be honest, I find it very confusing. Author, can you please introduce the system of this world in detail? It's really uncomfortable to see. 3. Protagonist upgrade and system settings: The protagonist upgrade is too slow. It doesn't feel exciting at all. Not to mention how fast it is, but it only takes three or four months to go from entry to completion. What a snail. Also, it is best to have a more detailed upgrade system for system contribution, otherwise it will be too messy.

So how do you pursue rationality when writing a book? Put yourself into the protagonist and suddenly get a plug-in that can absorb the spirit and material from the outside world to enhance yourself. What would you do? Borrowing books everywhere? Browse the library? Eat buffet? Student loans? In theory, there should be many companies in the world like this that open various low-end martial arts or introductory martial arts to the public for free in order to attract people, so go ahead and take advantage of them. Seriously, if you can grow your golden fingers just by chatting with the principal, eating, and drinking tea, if you can't get 100,000 points in three days, your brain development will be considered delayed.

What you did is disrespectful

I don't understand why the author can write the protagonist to be reborn and immediately integrate into the original family, and he is still the same as his biological child. It is very painful to watch. You might as well write a time-traveled soul and be swallowed up by the original owner. That would be more normal.