A Beginner's Cultivation Manual, but the System Insists It's the Eight-Nine Arcane Art

It's like you can't write an article without writing about women! Abandon it decisively.

I suggest the author not to describe the fight of little Karami too NBly. Do you think a little Karami can have the will to tear everything apart and cut off rivers? Little Karami is like this. Those who are stronger than him should not destroy the planet. Can't it be described like this to highlight the main character's strength? It is easy for the combat power to collapse, making people unable to distinguish the gap between realms.

They are even more rubbish than the average person in reality, and they act like a fool even if they have a system. You said you were an aboriginal, and I could automatically figure it out, but you said you were a time traveler? In Chapter 4, he was defeated and his IQ was lower than that of level 3 Dou Qi.

I thought I was going to give him eight-nine mysterious skills to practice, but it turned out that he just changed his name, and he still practiced the same physical skills, just to make it funny.

The most annoying thing is when I see books about sect competitions, college rankings, etc., Which contain dozens of chapters at a time and are stinky and long. Che Zhuglun talked back and forth, and I felt sleepy while reading it. I couldn't finish it in a long time, and then the readers lost, and then the author started to mess up, and then it was unfinished. If there is such a thing, I just click the cross and don't look at it.

Chapter 50 is very problematic in writing. The author probably wanted to draw on the ancient imperial examination's Big Three Elements to express the difficulty of winning the Three Elements in a row. But the thing is, that's the liberal arts. The liberal arts are highly subjective, not to mention the entanglements of interests and regional considerations. Many times, failure to win three yuan in a row is not due to lack of ability, but because of the power/economic/regional interests behind it; and this book is about martial arts, and the comparison is all about hard power. There is no subjective statement at all, it is all objective facts. Can you imagine that a national martial arts champion would lose in the county or township examination? It's impossible. You can take the person with the highest military strength in the country, and you can put him in the county or township to take the test with less effort, and he will still be the strongest. Therefore, it should not be that there are no "big six yuan", but that they are basically all big six yuan. It should be the opposite of the imperial examination. This is a basic logical question. It's like saying a person has the highest IQ in the world. If you put him in a county or save effort, wouldn't his IQ be the highest? No logic.

I would like to ask the author, in a world where everyone is armed, where do the production resources come from, and how do ordinary people live? And how can wealthy people live in a world without ordinary people?

I discovered a fascinating point. The martial arts competition in this kind of novel is supposed to be held once a year, but every time the super geniuses from the major families always happen to be in the same class as the protagonist, as if their parents have made an appointment to have children in the same year.

The main character's family is destitute, and my mother spends two or three days without sleep weaving a straw mat in order to sell it for ten cents. The family went bankrupt and spent ten taels of silver for the protagonist to practice martial arts. He has not started for half a year, and the protagonist still needs to continue learning (the system has not yet awakened at this time) The protagonist's father is a late butler (the author added that he died very young) The protagonist is in his early twenties. How old was the protagonist when his father died, and why didn't he practice martial arts? At what age is the right age to start practicing martial arts? With the earning power shown by the protagonist's mother, and with her father's inheritance, the family's wealth will only become less and less, so why not wait until the age of twenty to learn martial arts. The father is a deacon. From what the author said, this organization also takes care of its own people. Why is the protagonist's mother reduced to making mats? Or is it that the protagonist's mother was prodigal and annoying, and only later came to regret it? The relationship between mother and son doesn't look like that.

At first I thought I was just getting started with the Eight-Nine Mysterious Skills (Gold Forging Technique), so I just took off, but as a result... It was all a mess