Lord of Creation

No matter how perfect the character design is in the front, it is so disappointing when it collapses in the back. The protagonist traveled back to the main world, and happened to be peed on by a demon girl. I don't need to say how close it was to get peed on, right? The protagonist and this demon girl's sect are enemies and kill more than a hundred members of the protagonist's family. In revenge, they only let this demon girl go, just because she is a woman? What kind of mentality can the author have to write such a plot? From this incident, we can see that the protagonist treats women differently and kills men decisively. Hehe. The protagonist is so confident in letting the enemy go, but has the protagonist ever thought about the safety of the people around him? Too arrogant, ugh. Supplement 1: The protagonist has no secrets at all. He told his women, friends and disciples in his camp all the worlds he had traveled across the earth. The first two to three hundred chapters were okay, but later on the protagonist turned into a silly and sweet person. Having experienced countless lives and deaths, there is no point in training for the protagonist. Although his strength has increased, his brain has become stupid. How many strong men have died because of the betrayal of their wives and friends? Additional 2: The protagonist is a bad guy in all worlds. He constantly helps the protagonists in other worlds to grow. He doesn't give up opportunities when he has them. There are beautiful women who don't want them, but he picks up some opportunities/actresses that the protagonists in that world don't want. He takes what others don't want. It's so sad that he is obviously the protagonist but he lives like a supporting character who helps others. None of the women that the protagonist picks up when he travels to another world belongs to the heroine. They are all supporting characters or even passers-by. Alas. This book should be renamed: Collecting rags from all over the world, a great benefactor from all over the world! More appropriate. Supplement 3: The protagonist wandered between life and death dozens of times, and almost died several times due to carelessness. Can this be called a protagonist? The protagonist is a novice in training from beginning to end, and he is basically asking others for advice, or he is avatar giving guidance to the protagonist. On the other hand, the main character is a fool throughout. The clones are stronger than him and know more about cultivation than the protagonist. So the protagonist also deserves to be called the protagonist? Simply. Additional 4: The woman related to the protagonist in this book is going to be arrested, and then the protagonist goes to rescue her to force the plot. On the other hand, his women are basically a drag on the protagonist, and they are deceived several times and then the protagonist rescues them. They are all fools. So disgusting. Additional 5: The protagonist's cultivation has been exhausted three or four times and he has rebuilt it three or four times. Several of the protagonist's women died (and were resurrected later), which was simply abusing the protagonist. It's so disturbing to watch, eh. The protagonist goes through life and death dozens of times throughout the book, which makes me so sad that my mentality explodes, which is simply torturing the reader. This book is not a pleasant read, and it made me feel very uncomfortable. The poison has been tested, and I hope readers will get the juice from their tails.

The writing style is so poisonous that your whole body will tremble, your mind will jump, your face will change wildly, and you will be shocked and jumpy more than ten times in one chapter. What about epilepsy?

This book looked good at the beginning, and it was decisive enough to kill in the world of wind and cloud, but then it changed when it came to the so-called main world. At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist's family had some power, and then his grandfather was in the late stage of acquired life, and his father was an innate powerhouse. In the end, when the protagonist surpassed the innate After entering the realm of a grandmaster, his style of painting suddenly changed. Xiantian was everywhere. Dozens or hundreds of grandmasters and grandmasters gathered in a small town who wanted to kill the protagonist. The protagonist joined the imperial court and was favored. He even deduced the Five Emperors Boxing Technique given by the imperial court into the world's top martial arts that can open 240 acupoints. This Under such circumstances, the imperial court actually ignored the fact that a group of sectarian masters were chasing the protagonist, and even said that those sectarian masters did not take action and the court could not take action. This is like a researcher in reality improving a certain scientific research result issued by the country into the world's top high-tech in a very short period of time. As a result, when a group of foreigners came to arrest and assassinate the researcher, the country watched helplessly because they had not yet taken action, and did not equip the researcher with any defense force. Such an attitude of not caring about top talents, I really can't imagine why this dynasty has not perished yet?

The rhythm of this book has not changed for hundreds of chapters. The human race in the main world is suppressed, the protagonist resists, the protagonist is invincible, the protagonist travels through time, the protagonist absorbs the essence of a world, and rises to less than half a level (speaking of martial arts, is there such a pitfall? It is better to cultivate other skills to become invincible and save the human race earlier). The protagonist returns, and the enemy is still two levels stronger than the protagonist. The protagonist explodes, and the protagonist absorbs another wave of resources. However, there are still stronger ones harming the human race (the human race in this world is really miserable, this author has definitely seen After Ascension). Then comes another cycle. The main reason is that the author's writing style is really average. It can be seen that he wants to write something heroic and has a sense of invincibility and domineering. But I feel uncomfortable and always feel aggrieved. The protagonist can only be strong in the world he has traveled through, but at the beginning of the world he has traveled through, he always feels tired and panicked. Although I can kill the enemy powerfully every time, it just doesn't feel as satisfying and it repeats many times.

The protagonist drinking urine is really disgusting...

The shortcomings of many novels: when the protagonist is in the innate realm, the grandmaster is basically a rare big shot, but after the protagonist reaches the grandmaster, the streets are full of grandmasters, and anyone who comes out is a grandmaster, not to mention rationality, and there is no logic.

I have read hundreds of chapters of this book. To be honest, the author of this book has good writing skills! There are also some plots that everyone likes about time travel. But to be honest, there is a tone between the lines that makes me very uncomfortable! According to what the author wrote, it may be the word "training"! The protagonist is not very obvious at the beginning, but in the later stages it becomes more and more like this tone! The protagonist thinks that everything is right, or that in order to intervene in the plot, he only needs to feel happy, but he also stands on the commanding heights of what is good for others. This may be the author's subconscious mind, wanting to do this, but he also finds a reason to convince others and himself! The word "training" can be said to be found in many plot worlds, such as Fengyun, Qin Shimingyue, Immortal Sword, etc. Others may be reflected between the lines! The chapter name directly refers to training so-and-so! I don't know if it's because the protagonist has become more and more powerful as he becomes more powerful, or if the author has become more powerful! To sum it up in one sentence, show off forcefully! When you think you are strong, you evaluate others from the moral high ground and change their destiny! Everyone has their own path, not the path assigned to them by the protagonist! But I have to say that the author made quite a few mistakes! In the bright moon world of the Qin Dynasty, you tell a group of rebels from the six countries about the separation of powers? 😰Haha, I just smiled! Later, he said that he was going to train Qin Shihuang. Remember, it was training! And let Duan Murong be your maid? Hey, I feel tired! There are also all kinds of tricks in Fairy Sword, and the changes are really messy! Isn't it good for the world to maintain the status quo? I want to ask a group of mortals to resist the gods. I am also drunk. Where is there no class and no rule in this world? Just because you feel unhappy about being ruled, you will rebel. How many people will die in the world? Since ancient times, gods have not been able to come down, even if they have minions, isn't it the same on earth? Even some of the turmoil was resolved! To be honest, when I saw Fairy Sword, I was really drunk when the protagonist told Li Xiaoyao to destroy Shushan. The status of Shushan in the world was not given by the gods, but was obtained by catching monsters and maintaining the stability of the world for thousands of years. You destroyed it directly. Seriously. Under normal circumstances, people in the world will hate you, but because you are the protagonist, you may be different, and your words can change other people's worldview and tell others that the gods are bad guys, Shushan is their minions, and you have been deceived for hundreds of thousands of years! If someone you didn't even know told you, would you believe it? It is good to be able to change and innovate, but to be honest, the change is not very good. The author is too self-centered. Also, the protagonist is really speechless when he seems to die for the people and the people! Especially since I have written this kind of plot several times!

A good book is a good book, a small reward, I just hope the author will update it more!

Nuwha proves the way of humanity with the entire human race, walking at the end of human beings, the ancestor of humanity, the cosmic world of all heavens and worlds, many worlds can have no immortals, no gods, no monsters, no demons, but can not be without people. As long as there are humans in all the worlds and there is no extinction, Nvshu will always be the end of humanity, the ancestor of humanity, and the emperor of the human race. There are many, among them the emperors of the human race. There are also many ancestors. The only ancestor of humanity is Nvwo. A person who has achieved enlightenment in the human race may be equal to Nvwo in cultivation, but it can never be surpassed. For example, as a human, you can use stars to achieve enlightenment. The ancestor of all stars, the sun, is the ancestor of Qie Yang. As the ancestor of humanity, Nvwo will definitely gain a lot after you achieve enlightenment. Author, do you think it is a reasonable plot to arrange for Nvwha to be pulled down from the altar? The author writes that there are countless universes and endless worlds in the world, so in your book, the Nvwo Saint is not just a saint from the ancient universe, but the ancestor of all people, the ancestor of humanity, that is, the ancestor of one path. The protagonist can cultivate ten thousand paths. As the ancestor of humanity, it is not difficult to cover all ten thousand paths with humanity! The protagonist has grown up as a mortal and now knows all about the heavens and the world, including qi training, god training, physical training, supernatural powers, soul, magic weapons, and countless ways of cultivation. The protagonist knows how to practice thousands of ways and practice many bodies. Wouldn't those Da Luo Hunyuan beings not know?

The most awesome one is the Great Sun Sage. . He is indeed a shameless person, and he deserves my respect.