Tempering a Hundred Times to Burn the Immortals

The stupid protagonist immediately attracts the hatred of the idiotic male supporting character, who desperately tries to antagonize him. Later, the protagonist becomes powerful and slaps them in the face. Then, he encounters the idiotic female supporting character, Ma Ru, who constantly mocks, dislikes, and rejects him. The protagonist's reaction is frustration, embarrassment, and helplessness?!

A kind-hearted, saintly type that I don't like.

I read it online many years ago, and even now, I think it's quite good. Personally, I don't think it has any major flaws. There are a lot of malicious comments, but the author doesn't seem to care; they're too indifferent. In short, I really like this book. 🤫

Delete the comments. No wonder there are so few comments. Why not just block them?!

Ultimately, it's unknown why fire is superior to the other four lines.

Mysterious metals, wood, water, fire, and earth? Just reading the description is enough to make you cringe, isn't it? The word "mysterious" basically represents the unknown, but you're using it directly as a noun. Isn't that just telling the reader that you have no creativity?

The most important thing in writing a novel is understanding what your readers want. A saintly protagonist who's constantly subservient and reads novels just for fun. If you write like that, it's no wonder your work isn't successful.

I saw it, deleted it, and it's back! Ugh! Why can't I just do my homework? It's all messed up, and if you don't want me to do it, don't tell me.

Can't they be a little smarter?

Is it as good as "Hundred Refinements to Immortality"?