There’s Something Wrong with the Spirit Town

This book, the beginning is really... I don't know how to put it, it's not a traditional poisonous point, it's very strange and bad. If I hadn't been surprised by the setting, I might have lost a fan. If you are an experienced Pokémon player, you will be particularly impressed by reading this book. The use of various props and the plot of the game are really well interwoven. In my mind, the score of this part of the game will be twice as high as the score of the real plot. Especially the elf setting. When all the fan fiction around the world is full of popular elves, this book really makes the ordinary elves that players tend to ignore show considerable charm... Perhaps because of too deep research on the game, this book is not classified in the fan category, but in the game system category. This is very good, and avoids many Virgin Cloud players saying that the protagonist usually does not cultivate feelings and bonds with the elves. The plot really sticks to the casual style, needless to say, and the updates are very powerful. It is said that it is only three updates, but in fact it seems that there have been three updates in the past two months... Can the social beast still be so lively after get off work? Finally, let me talk about what I am worried about. I am worried that it will collapse in the later stage and I will not be able to take back all the foreshadowings, especially the part where the protagonist also gains the power of spiritual practice and meditates seven or eight hours a day. I just want to write the game well, maintain the style of the daily plot, and give a good ending that is not cruel.

The setting of this book is really good. The plot unfolds in both reality and the game, but there are really too many poisonous points. In the early stage, the protagonist turned on the aura of intelligence reduction, and the surrounding characters instantly turned into brainless NPCs. Everything the protagonist did was reasonable, and only the protagonist was the smartest. He sold the information about his golden finger several times for a little money... It's awesome

It's a pity book. The main character has a sense of justice, but the author later ruined it. He let the original evil organization go and became friends with a group of criminals. The way of clearing his name is also terrible. It's worse than terrible.

Can this book that has been written for three years be recommended by the editor? The starting point is that there is no hard work.

The lovely Thunder Emperor, Fangyuan Ersi and Silly Bird

At the Dragon Hunter Reunion meeting, book friends put forward a lot of opinions. I read it several times myself and found it really frustrating to write. I ate books during my lunch break today and revised it like crazy. I have made adjustments in the next one or two chapters, so it should be smoother. Thank you book friends for your suggestions. The reading experience I gave you before may not have been very good. Please forgive me. In the future... Well, I may still have some bad points in my writing. I hope I can communicate with you more.

Hu Hu, humanoid version

Author, you don't have to do it if you don't know how to do it. The first nine disciples slaughtered ordinary hunters, but the next defensive monster was cleared?

After reading Chapter 400, except for Mantis and Sister Mi Chun, I have never heard of any other elves 😥. The damage of such rubbish elves is so high. Damn it, I'm not happy that Yu Sanjia didn't see any of them.

After watching it, I only had one feeling: it was bland. To be honest, I just finished watching it and I couldn't remember the name of the protagonist.