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Why do they say the writing is beautiful? ? I think the book can only be said to be okay, but the biggest problem is that your book is too watery. The previous books were okay. I have subscribed to some and feel that they are getting more and more watery. Is this good? ? Are the chapters that cost money worse than those that cost nothing? ? Generally speaking, the branch plots you write either explain the background of the world or something like that, or pave the way for the main plot or other branch plots. But what do you write about these chapters and backgrounds that you want to highlight, and what does the main plot have to do with it? If it matters, could you write less? You need to write a lot of chapters to set the stage? Or it will be introduced very later, so what is the use of having a close-up at the front? Is it okay if there are no eggs at all? Many of them jumped when I watched it. Can you pay attention? ?

The plot of this book and the character of the protagonist are really very comfortable, but the author's writing is so good. Almost half of each chapter is written, introducing various skills, selecting spells, etc. The author is either introducing things in this world, or on the way to introducing the physical affairs of this world.

There are too many descriptions of the setting and it's easy to jump out. It was fine before it was put on the shelves. You can skip it so as not to affect the flow. If there were so many descriptions of the setting after it was released, it would be easy for people to abandon the book.

I feel like the name of this book is not good. I saw it several times but didn't click on it. This time I suddenly clicked on it and I thought it was well written.

This book is a very good novel that I have read. The sect in it is not as competitive as other novels. Even the elders spy on the opportunities of their disciples and can kill the disciples of the sect at will.

I think the setting is okay, and there's nothing wrong with the subject matter. . I just hope the author can use more of you, me, him, she and it. . I haven't seen it in the back, but there are too many Li Chu in the front, hahaha, haha. .

When I read the second chapter, I didn't want to read it. I liked going around too much. Why not just say 40%? I had to say 30% overall and another 30%, and then explain half a chapter. Are you crazy?

Do you have to break things off like this now?

Very good, the correct grass jelly made me regain the feeling of pleasure I had when I first started reading novels a long time ago~~~

Good books recommended sharing

The introduction is very discouraging, but the book is actually pretty good and not stupid.

Hahaha, out of context dog! Eat the spear! ! ! !

Recommended, keep up the update speed

The writing is good, but the golden finger is too large, and the awakening talent is just that, and it can be copied. This is too buggy.

Are you the Shilipo Sword God?

Come on, everything about this novel is good, especially the peaceful setting, but it doesn't have any cool points. But now the protagonist happens to be traveling, I hope the author can write a **, after all, even if a dish is too delicious, it needs a change of taste~

All Spirits Are Me: Passive: When others know your existence and recognize you, they will slowly be assimilated into another you. Active: Integrate all other you, and temporarily obtain the All Spirits bonus

Well written, good luck to the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

In this novel, I can see that the author is full of care, whether it is the environment or the characters. Although the writing may be lacking, it is still quite interesting. I can also see that the author cares about the readers' opinions and actively explains the setting and changes the description. To be honest, this book is not exciting, but it is quite enjoyable to read. The description of the Holy Land made me feel particularly happy. Yes, this is what I said about those novels. Why are the disciples of the Great Holy Land of various sects killed by casual cultivators when they go out? Are such good resources and strictly controlled talents all in vain? Why does a sect have no sense of existence except for conspiracy, and only has the role of fighting for and advancing the plot? The sect does not provide resources and skills. Why join a sect? If you join a sect, you will not only be worried about being robbed by others, but also pay resources to the sect. Is this called a disciple or a dogleg... I hope the author will pay less attention to us. As for readers, write according to your own ideas. After all, those who read and pursue this book are attracted by the author's ideas, not by readers or people who argue. It is acceptable to copy book reviews, but the most important thing is the author's ideas. This is what attracts readers. Come on, author!

The people in this article seem to be truly magnanimous! A true practitioner! The sect of cultivating immortals at the starting point all bullies the protagonist! The cultivators inside are all narrow-minded people! Very strange phenomenon! The more you watch it, the more you get disgusted!

This book is really beautiful. Just less. 😡

This book is very well written. The background of the world and the structure of the Holy Land are very good, and it comes from my feelings - the author boasted a huge boast to all readers, but he rounded it up. In my opinion, it can be justified. It is not like other novels that brag us a huge boast, but like the castles in the palace, there are loopholes everywhere. For example, the protagonist picks up the treasure and immediately jumps to it. A large group of people chased and killed the last ancestor. The character of a descendant of a big force is like a child who kills and kills if he is not satisfied at all. There is also a protagonist who kills a descendant of a big sect at a low level and fakes it so that no one can find it. The descendants of a big force are all domineering and arrogant and then give equipment to the protagonist one by one after killing the last sect. No comparison means no harm. What the author has created for us is a whole world. The author of this book has set up the sect's philosophy, management methods, customs, maps, characters, golden finger methods, the possibility of the world, the rationality of the world,,,, while the settings of the authors of other books are like this - places Pictures, characters, how to use cheats, and the rest can be figured out on your own (not all included, but a large part can be included, because a good novel has more than three settings). The author's self-explanatory and complete world construction is the reason why I like to read this book. I support the author to write better and better.

Everyone said that there were a lot of typos. I corrected some of them, but I didn't pay attention to some of them and didn't find them. I hope you can point it out in this post and I will correct it immediately! If you write, please be more detailed. At the very least, write down the chapter title and the original sentence. It would be better if you could point out which paragraph it is. Thank you for your support!

This is the talent building. You can write down your own design talents here, and I may use them later, just like a secondary role. The template is as follows The real name of the talent (the real name will be used later): xxx Pronoun (can be written or not): xxx Level: (determines the realm of the character when appearing), one to five levels correspond to the five realms of mortals Effect: indicate Active and passive, respectively introduced Remarks: You can write the side effects or limitations of the talent Introduction: origin and evaluation are both acceptable If possible, please write down specific applications, such as moves, application methods, and cool operations. The more detailed, the higher the possibility of adoption. Please do not set talents that are too buggy, it is best to have corresponding restrictions and restrictions If you are interested, you can also write a combination of talents, the format is as above. As long as everyone sends it, I will check it one by one. Appearance talents may be subject to change, please forgive me!

I suggest that the protagonist's path should be clear, including One Qi, Yin and Yang, Five Elements, and Bagua. Now the protagonist's cultivation path is in a mess. It's as unsystematic as a bear's corn. The way to seek the Tao is one's own path. Personally, I think it should be paved with talent. The right path should be taken. , The unification of all laws is too general, and it is not comfortable to transform all laws into chaos. There are so many artistic conceptions, it is not a problem for you to understand them all. The artistic conception must be sublimated into laws, and the laws are three thousand avenues. It is speculated that the true immortal must create an original law It is recommended that the world is divided into yin and yang, the five elements transform the world, and the green lotus may also correspond to good fortune. Each possibility is the way to invincibility. The protagonist cannot practice blindly. If his understanding is not enough, he cannot always use his talent to make up. Consider the way of luck and the flow of the luck system, There is also the Immortal Emperor in the later period, whether we should open the Heavenly Style, we still need to open our minds, and whether we should deduce the successful method from the talents, such as the protagonist accepting the younger brother, accepting the Shunfeng Ear and the Clairvoyance, and letting them practice heavenly vision and earth hearing. You can also hand it in. There is also a Bloodline Glory Deduction to integrate into the Adult Emperor. Such a cowardly protagonist is lucky to be in the current flow. If there is something to do, the younger brother will do it, and if there is nothing to do, he will catch the fox. , I gave in to the end, so the home must be strong and durable. The magic weapon of life is a green lotus, which is a bit shabby. Build a large-scale combined fairy city, establish a heavenly palace, and add a peach garden to the real immortals. Add some lifespan to collide with the heavens and the world, add a cultivation system, the earthly immortal opens a blessed land, the heavenly immortal opens a cave to feed the world, and the protagonist is the son of God's mother. Isn't this good? Take a look and see if there is anything you can add. The protagonist has cultivated so many artistic conceptions. It would be a pity not to consider the thirty-three days. Now that we have the thirty-three days, let's upgrade the holy land into a heavenly palace. After so many fights, let's add more! 😠😠😠

When I first read the title, I thought it was a shabby book written by book writers. Then some book friends strongly recommended it to me, saying that I would regret not reading it because it was so good. . . . . Then I couldn't help myself and clicked to read it. . . . . Nice book! ! It's not enough to watch it all in one go! The recommendation votes in the past few days are all for you. There are not many fairy tales in Qidian that have a fairy-like atmosphere. There are no other books except "Xianlu Supreme". When it comes to the shelves, I and hundreds of other book friends are waiting to vote for you and subscribe to support. Now there are still newbies who have fallen into the trap due to the brainwashing propaganda of me and several other administrators. . . . . Ahem, cough, that's a lot of nonsense, but stick to it anyway! The support of our group of book friends will become your motivation to persevere! I wish you can become a god soon and subscribe more!

This book is very interesting, not only the setting of talents, but also the style of doing things in a great religion makes people feel that this is a great religion, upright and upright. The descriptions of minor characters in the last two chapters are also good.

After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I can understand the expression of the Holy Land being complete and reasonable, but there are too many various settings written, which steals the show! Later, when you came out of the mountain, you were beaten to death by a small family cultivator. But the problem is that you were so perfect and awesome in various Holy Land disciples before, and then you were beaten to death by a casual cultivator. What does this mean? The most important thing is, you can have your clone killed, but you have to take revenge as soon as possible? The protagonist can be cowardly, but he cannot be cowardly and aggrieved, otherwise he will really become a grandson! I copied a hundred and eighty talents and ended up doing nothing much, so I just engaged in some petty theft! I feel like I wasted two hundred points!

Even if you die without regrets, this is the mentality of seeking the truth. Like Prehistoric, it was written as a strategy, and Xianxia was a bit like fighting monsters and upgrading. At that time, Yuan Fu Lu of Prehistoric saw a little bit of this kind of spiritual state, but unfortunately he no longer felt the difficulty of seeking the truth.

This is what my ideal utopian cultivator should look like. This idea of ​​risking one's life without regrets is so touching 😭