Shameless Game Designers, Get Out of This Text-Based Game

Old bookworm, identify seedlings, high probability of hay, low probability of fairy grass, small probability of becoming a roadside roadside (unfinished). The current concept of the world is very grand, and some of the content is very attractive. The author repeatedly emphasizes that the protagonist is a dog planner, but, in other words, a senior planner should have some research on the plot, not like now. Apart from the poor portrayal of the protagonist, the supporting characters are well portrayed and abstracted. It depends on whether the author can make some changes. As a senior planner, I won't tell you to take one step at a time, but at least it shouldn't be like this. A bunch of abstract operations may be dismissed in other areas, but it is a word game. I can only say that compared to others, it is really okay

What crime did the original person commit? I don't want to talk about it, I don't know, I don't know, I don't know, I don't know

1. The so-called word games should be real different worlds, so whether you are looking at skills or being in a daze, events will push forward by themselves (after all, it stops when the real world does not exist) 2. This kind of exploration should be very dangerous. I don't know if there are other organizations besides prisons currently doing exploration 3. The protagonist currently seems to have awesome characteristics. In addition, there is not much difference between it and other fictional authors. Let's see if there will be other cheats in the future 4. Since the skills learned in the game can be used in the real world, it is estimated that there will be monsters in the real world that need to be dealt with using the skills learned in the game 5. The origin of this system also feels like a pit, let's see how to fill it.

Didn't Shuitiao publicize it in the previous book? If I hadn't read it on a whim today, I wouldn't have known it.

Go ahead and write Pokémon, you are the Pokémon Master

Since the male protagonist is planned by Akaishi Dog. Then this book should be about abuse. He tortured the male protagonist inhumanely

I still want to see your Pokémon

Waterbird, I beg you to take some medicine before jumping into the street again. It's obviously faster, the writing is good, and the settings are okay. People can't be so unlucky. I'm optimistic about you💪💪

Except for Pokémon, most of the authors are eunuchs, and I am still at level 4 after ten years of writing. Although the writing is good, it cannot cater to the public. Why don't we stop pursuing art and have unlimited writing? The settings of the several books I cut are all good. I polished and polished them one copy at a time. Each copy contains 300,000 to 400,000 words, which is at least the content of one book.

The writing style is a little strange. The author is either new to writing books or has grown up in a wild way. Most of the content seems to be very casual. He writes wherever he goes. Some places are clearly explained, while others are very vague. 1. The identity and background of the game planner seems to be just an element deliberately put together to obtain the [Dog Planner] skill. I have read the first thirty chapters and found that this identity has no role. Apart from abstraction, according to common sense, planners are considered mental workers. They are not very intelligent, and at least they cannot be mentally retarded, right? Otherwise, how to make money, regardless of whether the game is fun or not, but at least it can make players pay, requires some thinking. 2. The system narration in the first 5 chapters was well written, but it started to become a stream of consciousness later on, and the selection content was not clearly written. For example, the Holy Fetus was resurrected several times. There were three options written in one place, but the skills were used directly - why not just write all the skills using options here? There will be two understandings here. After resurrection, the world has changed, and skills can only be used for the first time. Then in the later resurrection, I didn't even write down the phenomenon options. I just made the decision out of the blue, and then I had to go back to confirm whether the options had changed. The storyline was not explained clearly, especially for word games, which should be explained clearly in words. I like word game novels very much, but this book is a bit regretful for me. It would be better if the logic of the writing could be improved, or if you could review and revise it after writing, and add some details. There are many other problems, which are all "stream of consciousness" - content that the author thinks does not need to be written, and then directly skips it. In fact, it is not important, but readers need it, which purely increases the cost of reading. This is like the Hong Kong version of Cup Noodles, without cutlery, but are cutlery important? It doesn't matter. Who doesn't have tableware? But people who eat cup noodles and bucket noodles just want convenience, and you ask me to wash the tableware. To sum up, the tableware is not important, but readers and people who eat cup noodles need it very much. So, I choose braised beef noodles.